yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya.....

by punam on January 29, 2008, 06:31:04 PM
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Gaalo ki laali dekh aaine me
soch me pad gayi main
aankhon me bhi yeh chamak kaisi
uljhan me pad gayi main..

mann se poochi tujhe hua hai kya..
tan ko jala rahi baat hai kya..
yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya..
soch me pad gayi main...

ek raat me mujhe hua hai kya..
saanson me meetha ehsaas hai kya..
yeh kahan kho gayi tujhe pata hai kya..
dil se puchi main...

kyun lag raha hai sab naya..
yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya..
sawaalon me uljhi reh gayi main...
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2008, 06:43:07 PM »
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bohat acha super likha hai punam...

Yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya..
Na thi aisa meetha dard mujhe hua hai kya..
Kahin pyaar na hogayee mujhe hua hai kya..
Dil ka raaz chupa ya hai meine mujhe hua hai kya..
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2008, 06:51:51 PM »
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thanx di...
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2008, 08:01:26 PM »
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sorry punam ji aap jitna aacha to nahi likh sakta
ek koshish ki hai plz galtio ka bura na maan na.


Ulaj ke sawalon mai paresha na ho,
Dil tumhara jaanta hai khus kyo ho,

Na batao ki gaalo ki lalli kyo hai,
Dekh ke khud ko sharmate kyo ho,

Ankhon ki chamak mann se poochte kyo ho,
Is ka jawab dil dega soch mai pade kyo ho,

Raat me jo phool khila liye ho,
Us ke mehak, dil se poochte kyo ho,

naya hai sab,hua hai tumhe jo,
Pata hote hue bhi hum se sawal karte kyo ho!!!!!



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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2008, 01:31:08 AM »
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bohot khoob punam !! n nice one baadal!
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2008, 01:35:18 AM »
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bahut khoob punam,baadal and honey...
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2008, 12:39:03 PM »
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sanya ji & khwaish ji thanx a lot

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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2008, 03:41:43 PM »
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bahut acha likha hai punam

badal zaberdast hai
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2008, 04:21:14 PM »
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thanx to baadal ji .. sanya.. khwaish ji and samnoj ji..
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2008, 09:52:48 PM »
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thanx samnoj ji
Punam ji aap ka reply nahi aaya abhi tak

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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2008, 10:37:00 PM »
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Baadal ji lo kar di reply..
par mujhe kuch sujha hi nahi kya reply me likhun..
jo mann me aaya likh di..

kisse hum kya kahe..
ab jawab de kis ko kya

pooch rahe hain puchne wale
yeh mujhe hua hai kya
lekin hum batlaye kya

dil me ab ye kaisi uljhan
unko hum samjhaye kya

jis ko ye dil pukar raha
wo awaaz sun sakta hai kya

dhund rahi hai kisse ankhe
unhe hum batlaye kya

bhari duniya me maan nahi lagta
kaise kahun ye kami hai kya..

puchne wale puch rahe hain
yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya..
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2008, 11:02:36 PM »
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Bohat acha likha hai punam dear..

Mat poocho yeh kya hua hai..
Diwano jaise halat hua hai..

Unki yaadein aankhon mein base hai..
Dono ne chaha ye tab hua

Ye khwab haseen hua hai..
Ye armaan jawan hua hai..

Le jaayein mujhe is duniya seh yeh kya hua hai.
Haan mujhe ishq hua hai isqh hua hai..


 
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2008, 04:38:04 PM »
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Punam ji kuch lines aap ke liye

Puchne wale puch rahe hain
Yeh tujhe aaj hua hai kya..


Jab uljhan ho dil mai,
Dil baar-baar kisi ko pookare,

Dhoondti hai nazren kisi ko,
Jab man kahi na lage,

Koi bhi kahi se jawab na mile,
Dil bas ek hi naam pookare,

Tab suno sirf dil ki apne,
Sawalo mai na uljhe raho,

Ye khushboo hai pyar ki,
Isse na chipate raho........

Puchne wale puch rahe hain
Yeh tujhe aaj hua hai kya..


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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2008, 08:36:05 PM »
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wah wah wah bahoot khoob Punam, Honey and Baadal ji!!!

man mai uljhan, nigaho mai intzzar hai
kyun bin baat dhadke dil, bas yahi ek sawal hai

raato ki nind gayab, din mai madhoshi ka saar hai
socho mai doobi, kyun her pal, yah kaya baat hai

kabhi adhuri to kabhi poori hone ka ahsaas hai
aaine se puchu khud ko, kaya mujhko hua payaar hai...
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2008, 08:54:07 PM »
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wah pooja ji
bahoot khoob as usual



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