-----/// Yun muskuraanaa naa hotaa ///----- Hriday

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kaash   usdin   unkaa   khidki   pe   aanaa   naa   hotaa
humein  dekh   unkaa   yun   muskuraanaa  naa  hotaa

naa   jhukaate   apni  nazrein  humein  dekh  kar  woh
is   tarhaa   se   unkaa   agar  sharmaanaa   naa  hotaa

chalte rehte  hum   apne  hi  raah   par  roz  ki  tarhaa
palatke  us  taraf  dekhne  kaa  bahaanaa  naa  hotaa

na  aaye  hote  nazar  mein mohalle ke  logo  ke hum
yun  dushman hamaaraa saaraa zamaanaa naa hotaa

naa   miley   hote   unse  to   baat   hi   kuch  aur  hoti
naam pe hamaare mohabbat kaa afsaanaa naa hotaa

dekh  humein  us  din   naa  woh  muskuraate agar to
shaayad   'Hriday'  is  tarhaa   deewaanaa  naa  hotaa






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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2016, 04:13:46 PM »
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Waah sir bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaash aapne "naa" shabd ko jaada istemal kiya naa hota.
To arjun aisi Gustakhi na karta..
Sorry to say sir. Repetition ghazal ki khoobsurti kam kar dete hai....

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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2016, 02:49:40 AM »
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kyaa baat hai Janaab, dheron daad aur mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2016, 12:03:22 PM »
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Waaaaaah waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2016, 12:46:44 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa...!!!

Waah sir bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaash aapne "naa" shabd ko jaada istemal kiya naa hota.
To arjun aisi Gustakhi na karta..
Sorry to say sir. Repetition ghazal ki khoobsurti kam kar dete hai....


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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2016, 12:17:28 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriaaa Surindar ji....!!!

kyaa baat hai Janaab, dheron daad aur mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2016, 11:53:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rustum ji....!!!

Waaaaaah waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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