Zindagi ke daur se guzarte chale gaye...

by Ravi_Dave on September 14, 2012, 02:28:16 AM
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Zindagi ke daur se aise guzarte chale gaye,
Ke zarra zarra karke bhikarte chale gaye,

Log aap ki umeed mein jeete rahe daayam,
Hum aap ki adaaon pe marte chale gaye,

Kahin tum khaffa naa ho jaaon apni guzari rudaad se,
Hum aap ka zikr karne se darte chale gaye,

Goya ho tera makaan dar khudaaon ka,
Hum oos dahliiz ko shaam-o-sahar sajde karte chale gaye,

Mehkhaanon mein ab shaayar nahin to ghazal kyun rahe,
Sharaab ke badle sab paimaane mein aansoon bharte chale gaye,

Bade awaara rahe par kabhi bewaafa nahin the,
Par 'Qazaa' aap ki bewaafaai dekhke savarte chale gaye,

- Ravikumar, 'Qazaa'
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2012, 07:44:24 AM »
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waah waah ravi ji boht khub kaha apne daad kabool kijiye
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2012, 10:09:20 AM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2012, 01:18:36 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2012, 01:28:33 PM »
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Zindagi ke daur se aise guzarte chale gaye,
Ke zarra zarra karke bhikarte chale gaye,

Log aap ki umeed mein jeete rahe daayam,
Hum aap ki adaaon pe marte chale gaye,

Kahin tum khaffa naa ho jaaon apni guzari rudaad se,
Hum aap ka zikr karne se darte chale gaye,

Goya ho tera makaan dar khudaaon ka,
Hum oos dahliiz ko shaam-o-sahar sajde karte chale gaye,

Mehkhaanon mein ab shaayar nahin to ghazal kyun rahe,
Sharaab ke badle sab paimaane mein aansoon bharte chale gaye,

Bade awaara rahe par kabhi bewaafa nahin the,
Par 'Qazaa' aap ki bewaafaai dekhke savarte chale gaye,

- Ravikumar, 'Qazaa'



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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2012, 02:34:17 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2012, 02:45:25 PM »
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Wah wah wah kya baat hai bahut hi umda qalaam maza aa gya padhkar ravi sahbh
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2012, 10:55:45 AM »
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bahut sunder
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2012, 08:18:43 PM »
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Shukriya doston, padne ka bhi aur pasand karne ka bhi...

KhwaishJi...bohat din ho gaye lekin umeed hain ke ab aap logon ke beech mein rahenge 'Qazaa'
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