आयी ख्वाब मे वो अदा हे..........

by pawan16 on October 18, 2012, 05:29:08 PM
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फिर से आयी ख्वाब मे वो  अदा हे,
   पवन हुआ फिर से उस पर फिदा हे,

       एक दिल एक दिल से जुदा हे,
          तु कहता सामने तस्वीर  मे खुदा हे,
हम देख तु ही ये कंही वफा हे,
   एक दिल अपना होकर भी हमसे खफा हे,

        अपने लिये ये बेबसी ये सजा हे,
          पर कह देते टूट जायेगी जंजीरे,
          जिस दिन बना पवन तुफा हे
...................पवन
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2012, 06:30:23 PM »
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Pawan Jee Aadaab!


Achchi composition hai janab... Usual Smile
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Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2012, 06:36:24 PM »
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bahut khoob........  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2012, 07:02:14 PM »
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फिर से आयी ख्वाब मे वो  अदा हे,
   पवन हुआ फिर से उस पर फिदा हे,

       एक दिल एक दिल से जुदा हे,
          तु कहता सामने तस्वीर  मे खुदा हे,
हम देख तु ही ये कंही वफा हे,
   एक दिल अपना होकर भी हमसे खफा हे,

        अपने लिये ये बेबसी ये सजा हे,
          पर कह देते टूट जायेगी जंजीरे,
          जिस दिन बना पवन तुफा हे
...................पवन

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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2012, 01:02:10 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2012, 02:12:42 AM »
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kya bat hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2012, 01:56:03 AM »
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