***एै सनम,,,छू के मन को कहाँ खो गये***

by AVTAR RAYAT on December 11, 2009, 02:11:35 PM
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एै सनम,
ये किस हाल में छोड़ गये,
ये कैसा गम दिल को दे गये
हमें न होश है न अपनी खबर,,,
इस दिल को ये कैसा अहसास दे गए ।।

करीब आ के जाने की न दी खबर,
छू के मन को जाने कहाँ खो गये,,,
आ जाओ करीब,,,फिर छोड़ के न जाना
बस आ के तुम मुझ में समा जाना ।।
,,,,बस,,,,मुझ में समा जाना,,,
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2009, 02:48:42 PM »
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Bahut pyari poem hai Avtar ji. Nice creation. Yun hi likhte raho ek din bade shayar ban jaoge. Ye poem ab tak ki sab se achhi poem lagi. Thanks
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2009, 06:43:59 AM »
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Shukria....RIYAZ BHAAYI...
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2009, 02:38:38 PM »
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Nice Poem
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