तुम बिन कैसे गुजारूं दिन संइयाँ ? (Tum bin kaisey guzaaroon din saniyaan?)

by abdbundeli on September 07, 2010, 02:21:02 PM
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जाग -जाग  काटी  रैन ;
पल  भर  रह्यो  न  चैन !
तुम  बिन  कैसे  गुजारूं  दिन  संइयाँ ?

ऐसो  तो  पहिलां  भयो  नैयाँ   कबहूँ !
बीत  चली  बरसा  रितु , आये  न  अबहूँ !

कछू  ना  हमें  सुहाय !
कैसो  का  करो  जाय ?
तुम  बिन  कैसे  संवारूं  दिन  संइयाँ ?

         तुम  बिन  कैसे  गुजारूं  दिन  संइयाँ ?

 

जागी  है  भोर , गीत  गा  किसे  जगाऊँ  मैं ?
रूठे  कोई  मुझसे , तभी  तो  मनाऊँ  मैं ?

दर्पण  देखो  न  जाय !
जिया  करे  हाय -हाय !
तुम  बिन  कैसे  निहारूं  दिन  संइयाँ ?

         तुम  बिन  कैसे  गुजारूं  दिन  संइयाँ ?

                           - रामवतीय

Jaag-jaag kaati rain;
Pal bhar rahyo na chain!
Tum bin kaisey guzaaroon din saniyaan?

Aisou tou pahilaan bhayo naiyaann kabahoon!
Beet chalee barsaa ritu, aaye na abahoon!
Kachhoo naa hamain suhaaya!
Kaisou kaa karo jaaya?
Tum bin kaisey sanwaaroon din saniyaan?
         Tum bin kaisey guzaaroon din saniyaan?

Jaagee hai bhor, geet gaa kisey jagaauun main?
Roothhey koyee mujhsey, tabhee to manaauun main?
Darpan dekho na jaaya!
Jiyaa karey haaya-haaya!
Tum bin kaisey nihaaroon din saniyaan?
         Tum bin kaisey guzaaroon din saniyaan?

                          - Ramwatiya
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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2010, 09:46:18 PM »
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Kitna khubsurat aur dard bhar geet kaha hai aapne...... Daad janab..... bahut khoob laga apka yeH geet....

Aise hi geetoN aur GazaloN se bazm ko nawaazte rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2010, 05:56:31 AM »
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bht hi pyara geeet abd ji...mast hai ..vyakul man ki vyatha bata gaya ye....
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2010, 06:25:36 AM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab

Kitna khubsurat aur dard bhar geet kaha hai aapne...... Daad janab..... bahut khoob laga apka yeH geet....

Aise hi geetoN aur GazaloN se bazm ko nawaazte rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez..... Usual Smile         



NAMASKAAR! Bahut-bahut shukriyah, ParwaaZ ji!

                        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2010, 06:29:32 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       ABD JI......

RUT AAYE RUT JAAYE
MANKO KUCH NA BHAYE RE
BADRI BARSE SAWAN AAYE
NAIN AASUN BARSAYE RE
BIN SAJAN SUNI MERI DUNIYAAN
TUM BIN KAISE GUZAAROON DIN SANIYAAN....
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2010, 06:30:12 AM »
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bht hi pyara geeet abd ji...mast hai ..vyakul man ki vyatha bata gaya ye....

Aap to khud '*KasaK*..ho..Dil Ki', tabhee to doosarey key dil kee kasak aapko yuun hee 'aandolit' kartee rahtee hai!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2010, 06:32:19 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       ABD JI......

RUT AAYE RUT JAAYE
MANKO KUCH NA BHAYE RE
BADRI BARSE SAWAN AAYE
NAIN AASUN BARSAYE RE
BIN SAJAN SUNI MERI DUNIYAAN
TUM BIN KAISE GUZAAROON DIN SANIYAAN....

Bahut khoob 'cara' ji! Shukriyah!

                    - abd bundeli
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