मेरे महबूब मुझे एक मौका तो दे

by satay on May 28, 2012, 04:12:09 AM
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मेरे महबूब मुझे एक मौका तो दे

तेरी जुल्फों को सितारों से ना सजा दू तो कहना

बहुत बदनाम किया है ज़माने ने मेरी चाहत को

तुझे अपनी साँसों में बसा लू, इनकार ना करना.....BY SPT

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Mere mehboob mujhe ek mauka to de

Teri julfo ko sitaro se na saza doo to kehna

Bahut badnaam kiya hai jamane ne meri chahat ko

Tujhe apni saanso mein bsa loo, inkaar na krena.....BY SPT

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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2012, 04:35:58 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2012, 05:09:21 AM »
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मेरे महबूब मुझे एक मौका तो दे

तेरी जुल्फों को सितारों से ना सजा दू तो कहना

बहुत बदनाम किया है ज़माने ने मेरी चाहत को

तुझे अपनी साँसों में बसा लू, इनकार ना करना.....BY SPT

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Mere mehboob mujhe ek mauka to de

Teri julfo ko sitaro se na saza doo to kehna

Bahut badnaam kiya hai jamane ne meri chahat ko

Tujhe apni saanso mein bsa loo, inkaar na krena.....BY SPT


Satay Ji achhi koshish hai, agar last line ko kuch is tarah se kahein
"ज़माने के सामने ही तुझे अपना न बना लूं तो कहना"
to kaisa rahega
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2012, 10:33:57 AM »
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Bilkul sahi kha aapne..bahut sunder Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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