1st post . ~'.- Two Liner Shayari -.'~

by hunny_nirala on January 03, 2011, 03:27:45 PM
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frnds ... my first post on two liner shayri here ....


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na jaane kis raah par chal rha hu mei ...
na kismat sath hai, na parchaai saath hai ...

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ye soch kar mei chup hi reh gaya ...
band dil, aakhir kaha meri pukaar sunega ..

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gham ke toofano ne itna jala diya hai ...
ke wafa ki baarish se ab darr lagta hai ...

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tujhse pehle to is dil ko bewafa kahunga ...
jo mera hokar bhi tere liye dhadakta hai ....

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dil kahe, ab or na saha jaaye ...
khoon kahe, ab or na baha jaaye ...

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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2011, 03:44:03 PM »
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frnds ... my first post on two liner shayri here ....


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na jaane kis raah par chal rha hu mei ...
na kismat sath hai, na parchaai saath hai ...

==================================

ye soch kar mei chup hi reh gaya ...
band dil, aakhir kaha meri pukaar sunega ..

==================================

gham ke toofano ne itna jala diya hai ...
ke wafa ki baarish se ab darr lagta hai ...

==================================

tujhse pehle to is dil ko bewafa kahunga ...
jo mera hokar bhi tere liye dhadakta hai ....

==================================

dil kahe, ab or na saha jaaye ...
khoon kahe, ab or na baha jaaye ...

==================================
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2011, 07:37:01 PM »
2nd last is too good..
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2011, 07:59:53 PM »
Bohat Achche Mashallah,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2011, 11:27:51 PM »
ye kis anjaane safar pe nikla hooN
naa raah saath hai na humraahi saath hai

well done !!! niraalaa jee!
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2011, 11:49:22 PM »
hey thanx all frnds ... mera 1sd day h yaha par .. Usual Smile ..

qatal huve bethe hai ki haal ye huva ...
qaatil khud pooch raha hai, qatal kisne kiya ?.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2011, 02:26:38 AM »
Mere shehar ki gali mei . . Charche shar-e-aam huve . . .
Tuje kya pta aae bewafa . . Hum kis kadar badnaam huve . . .
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2011, 02:36:18 AM »
Uski adaae, kuch is trah se bhaa gayi . .
Yu samjho, wo paani mei aag laga gayi . , .
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2011, 03:51:34 AM »
bahut khoob hunnyji..

achcha likha hai...
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 05:47:33 AM »
shukriya manjum ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2011, 07:08:45 AM »
nice lines
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2011, 09:28:08 AM »
nice lines

thnx sahill Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2011, 09:35:17 AM »
tera tasavvur itna kia ki khuda bhi pooch baitha ..
aakhir kyu tu use mujse jyada yad karta hai ...
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2011, 09:37:03 AM »
waah kya baat hai Nirala ji

chalte chalte pata nahi chla ki kahan tak chale hum
baad muddat ke pata chala hain khade vahin pe hum

shukriya dost ... nice likha aapne bhi .. Usual Smile ..
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2011, 09:55:31 AM »
dhanyawaad

shukriya karke chale jato ho lekin hamari post par nahi aate ho
are yaar ye post ko chhoro bus aate rahna jaise bhi aate ho



hehe .. gud gud .. akash ji ..
hum aayege ... Usual Smile
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