Aa Bhi jao

by Ravi_Dave on July 11, 2006, 07:31:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 12, 2006, 07:39:08 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai Jsheen... bahoot acha likhty ho app.....Good one Ravi


Shukriya Didi,..
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«Reply #16 on: July 13, 2006, 03:15:45 AM »
Sukhriya PoojaJi n JaanasheenJi!

Very Nice JaanasheenJi!
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«Reply #17 on: July 14, 2006, 08:54:27 PM »
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Sukhriya PoojaJi n JaanasheenJi!

Very Nice JaanasheenJi!


Shukriya Ravi Bhai,..
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«Reply #18 on: July 14, 2006, 08:56:55 PM »
Raste Khud Tabaahi Ke Nikaale Humne,..
Kar Diya Dil Kisi Pathar ke Hawaale humne,..
Hum Ko Maloom Nahi Kya Shaai Hai Mohabbat,..
Ghar apna Phoonk Ke Dekhe Hain Ujaale Humne,..

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«Reply #19 on: July 15, 2006, 03:44:19 AM »
Bohat Khoob janasheenJi!

Patthar hain phir bhi dil lagaaya unse,
humne to ched kiya hain apni hi kashti mein,
doob rahi hain zindagi jaise doobti hain kashti,
hum to maut mein bhi ghoonthte hain (searching) unhe!!!
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«Reply #20 on: July 18, 2006, 01:22:06 PM »
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Bohat Khoob janasheenJi!

Patthar hain phir bhi dil lagaaya unse,
humne to ched kiya hain apni hi kashti mein,
doob rahi hain zindagi jaise doobti hain kashti,
hum to maut mein bhi ghoonthte hain (searching) unhe!!!


Shukriya Ravi Bhai,..

Pathar Jahaan Ne Phenke Unse Koi Gilaa Nahi,..
Ghar Likhe The Kaanch Le Naseeb Mein Mere,..
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«Reply #21 on: July 18, 2006, 03:56:55 PM »
Bohat Acche Jaanasheen Bhai!!!

Naseeb ko badal kar aa bhi jao,
kaanch ki imarato ko aise na sajao,
chur ho jaaye tootke,
dil ko aise nazuk na banao!
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«Reply #22 on: July 18, 2006, 06:34:49 PM »
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Bohat Acche Jaanasheen Bhai!!!

Naseeb ko badal kar aa bhi jao,
kaanch ki imarato ko aise na sajao,
chur ho jaaye tootke,
dil ko aise nazuk na banao!


Shukriya And Nice One Bhai,.

Dil Sheeshe Se Bhi Nazook Hai, Par Naaz Nahi Karta,..
Dil Toot Jaata Hai Phir Bhi Awaaz Nahi Karta,..
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«Reply #23 on: July 18, 2006, 07:09:44 PM »
Kya baat hain dil khush ho gaaya!

dil ko bhi khamoshi achi lagne lagi,
ke toot ke bhi awaaz nahi karta,
tadapta hain umar bhur unke liye,
magar ek uff bhi nahi karta!
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«Reply #24 on: July 18, 2006, 07:12:37 PM »
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Kya baat hain dil khush ho gaaya!

dil ko bhi khamoshi achi lagne lagi,
ke toot ke bhi awaaz nahi karta,
tadapta hain umar bhur unke liye,
magar ek uff bhi nahi karta!


Bahoot Khoob Bhai,..

Unhe Khabar Na Ho Hamare Ghamon Ki Ye Soch Kar Hum Muskuraate Rahe,..
Wo Samajh Baithe Ke Hum Unke Bagair Khush Hain,..

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«Reply #25 on: July 18, 2006, 07:16:02 PM »
Wah Bohat khoob!

Muskuraahat mein chupate hain dard apna,
kahin yeh zaalim bayaan na hojaaye,
lekin darr te hain kahin woh hasin dekhke,
humse khaffa na hojaaye!
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«Reply #26 on: July 18, 2006, 07:24:57 PM »
Quote from: "Ravi_Dave"
Wah Bohat khoob!

Muskuraahat mein chupate hain dard apna,
kahin yeh zaalim bayaan na hojaaye,
lekin darr te hain kahin woh hasin dekhke,
humse khaffa na hojaaye!


Khafaa Hogaye Hum Ye Sochakar Unse Ke Aayeinge Wo Mujhe Manaane,..
Afsos Ke Meri Naraazgi Se Wo Jalkar Ab Lage Hain Hume Azmaane,..

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«Reply #27 on: July 18, 2006, 08:03:23 PM »
wah wah kya baat hain!!!

manaane aa bhi jao ab ki baar,
ungeenat (countless) zakhm gehre hain,
chehra dikha kar malam to de jao,
khudke anskh mein hum doobe hain,
kuch aise tere bewaafa-yaado ke,
mere dil mein pehre hain!
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«Reply #28 on: July 18, 2006, 08:07:41 PM »
Quote from: "Ravi_Dave"
wah wah kya baat hain!!!

manaane aa bhi jao ab ki baar,
ungeenat (countless) zakhm gehre hain,
chehra dikha kar malam to de jao,
khudke anskh mein hum doobe hain,
kuch aise tere bewaafa-yaado ke,
mere dil mein pehre hain!


Shukriya Bhai And Nice One,..

Manaane Aur Roothne Ke Silsile Mein Kho Denge Pyaar Unka Maloom Na Tha,..
Warna Zindagi Bhar Hume Unhe Roothne Na Dete,..

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«Reply #29 on: July 18, 2006, 08:21:33 PM »
Wah such kaha!

Lakh koshish humne bhi ki woh yaar na roothe,
naaqamyaab rahe, ab duaa karte hain dard-e-dil naa toote,
khatam huve woh silsile wafaa-o-waado ke,
ab todh diye yeh sab rishte joothe!
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