Aa Bhi jao

by Ravi_Dave on July 11, 2006, 07:31:47 PM
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Main tujhse naraaz nahi hota sirf soch mein pad jaata hoon,
kya tu bhi mujhe itna chahti hain jitna main tujhe chahta hoon,
tere gushe (anger) ki aane ki wajaah samajna chahta hoon,
kuch aur kehna chahta hoon kuch aur bataa deta hoon,
jo tu naa hogi to koi aur bhi naa hogi,
jo tu laut ke naa aayi to meri taqdeer hi naa hogi,
tu naa aayegi jab tak (2)
tere lautne ke umeed mein shamaa phir bhi unhi roshan hogi!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2006, 07:41:41 PM »
nice one ravi
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upma
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2006, 10:21:23 PM »
a good creation!
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2006, 10:27:00 PM »
Quote from: "Ravi_Dave"
Main tujhse naraaz nahi hota sirf soch mein pad jaata hoon,
kya tu bhi mujhe itna chahti hain jitna main tujhe chahta hoon,
tere gushe (anger) ki aane ki wajaah samajna chahta hoon,
kuch aur kehna chahta hoon kuch aur bataa deta hoon,
jo tu naa hogi to koi aur bhi naa hogi,
jo tu laut ke naa aayi to meri taqdeer hi naa hogi,
tu naa aayegi jab tak (2)
tere lautne ke umeed mein shamaa phir bhi unhi roshan hogi!!!


 =D> Bahut acche
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2006, 08:45:16 AM »
Very nice......[/b]
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2006, 10:00:23 AM »
baraste rahe badal,
tarasti rahi akhein,
woh na ayye humse milne
kat gayi umar yuhi intezar mein...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2006, 10:14:23 AM »
dil-e-bekraar ko samjhana hai mushkil
barsaat ki boondo ko manana hai mushkil
wo jo bhool gaye wada kar ke
unke khayalo mai, NA lana hai mushkil
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2006, 10:16:07 AM »
barsate badalo ne kaha yun na kar dil ko udaas
woh hain pass tere tere dil ke bahut pass...
jab bhi mast thadi hawa ka jhonka tujhe chhoo jaayga
unka hi akas tujhe is barsati boondo mein nazar aayega
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2006, 10:19:05 AM »
tardpati hai fiza,
jalati hain hawaein
kyun samjhne na woh
itni der se har bar aaye :evil:
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2006, 10:25:54 AM »
dard-e-shayari mai ho jeet.... itna gussa tongue3

her fiza ne tera hi sath nibhaya
her hawa ne tera hi rukh dikhaya
kismat ko kaise manate hum
jisne sirf judai ka hi rasta dikhaya
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2006, 10:30:54 AM »
dard mein kabhi kabhi gussa bhi aa jata hai .... :wink:

kartein hain intezar,kismat hai humari...
chah tha sath aapka,milti rahi judai ....
kisse kare gila,aor kisse ho shikayat
khayal nahi jabaapko,kahan jaye phir yeh faryadi..!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2006, 10:34:30 AM »
fariyaadi se kaho, fariyaad khumar ya Misc mai le jaaye
na likhe shikayte yaha, aise na post kari jaaye
dard-e-shayari mai janab, dard ko hi rahne do
shikayat wale armaan, khumar ya Misc mai hi bahne do......
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2006, 04:42:57 PM »
Shukhriya doston!

Judaai bhi zaalim hain,
bewaafai bhi zaalim hain,
bina unke zindagi tamashai hain,
milne naa aaye woh aaj humse,
milne naa aayenge woh kal humse,
yeh soch se dil mein dard hi davai hain,
faryaad naa karenge kisi aur se,
faryaad naa karenge unse,
ke unka intezaar to humari khudai hain!
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2006, 05:45:56 PM »
Waah Sabne Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai,..

Mera Dard Tumna Samajh Sake,..
Mujhe Isi Baat Ka Malaal Hai,..
Mujhe Dushmaano Se Gilaa Nahi,..
Mere Doston Ki Ye Chaal Hai,..
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2006, 07:33:23 PM »
wah kay abaat hai Jsheen... bahoot acha likhty ho app.....Good one Ravi
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