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by angel4u on August 27, 2007, 10:35:18 PM
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Zindagi Mein To Maut Ka Manzar Dikhaya Tha Tune,
Aa Ab Is Maut Mein Bhi Mujhe Maut Ka Ehsaas Dila Jaa,

Bana De Apni Qabr Apne Haathon Se Aaj Tu,
Ke Aaj Apna Aakhri Farz Bhi Tu Ada Kar Jaa,

Janaze Ko Mere Tu Le To Aaya Is Laashon Ki Mehfil Mein,
In Mehfilon Ki Raunak Tu Apni Dilkash Muskaan Se Badha Jaa,

Gazal Likhi Thi Maine Bahut Teri Mohabbat Mein,
Aaj Tu Meri Rukhsati Pe Koi Nagma Sunaa Jaa,

Is Sannatein Ki Chhanv Mein Rehna Hoga Kayi Barson Mujhe,
Ke Do Pal To Mere Pehlu Mein Baith, Mujhe Deewana Bana Jaa,

Bheegne De Apna Daaman Tu Mere AshQonki Barsaat Se,
Mere Qabr Ke Registaan Ko Aaj Tu Sehra Bana Jaa,

Ye Fiza Hai Kuch Aur Bhi Haseen, Ye Sama Hai Khushnuma,
Aa Is Sama Mein Apne Pyaar Ka Jhutha IQraar Kar Jaa,

Ye Kahan Se Aa Gayi Chand Saansein Mere Bejaan Seene Mein,
Aa De Dun Tujhe Ye Aakhri Saansein Bhi, Inhe Apne Seene Mein Chhupa Jaa...
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2007, 10:39:04 PM »
Angel =D> =D> =D>  Very touching
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2007, 10:44:46 PM »
Thanks a lot Usual Smile once again Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2007, 11:32:38 PM »
wah wah wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob angle, ek ek line kamal ki likhi hui hi... yah do line behad achi lagi

Is Sannatein Ki Chhanv Mein Rehna Hoga Kayi Barson Mujhe,
Ke Do Pal To Mere Pehlu Mein Baith, Mujhe Deewana Bana Jaa,


Good work!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2007, 01:42:45 AM »
Thanks a lot pooja di Usual Smile
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Meena is back
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2007, 03:53:33 PM »
wah angel...bohot hi khoob!!!!

kabhi tere pyar me jeeya karte the,
aaj tere pyar me sanam mar jayenge,

chahe is judai me kush hai tu aaj par
kabhi to kabhi hum bhi tujhe yaad ayenge,

jab yaade tumari rooh pe dastak dengi,
to woh yaade hi teri ankhon ko rulayenge,

tab shayad chahoge bhi to hum tume dikhenge nahin,
kyuki log tab humare jism ko rasm se jalayenge!!!
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SHONA
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2007, 10:19:13 PM »
Too good angel..beautifully written  =D>  =D>
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angel4u
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2007, 10:44:32 PM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
wah angel...bohot hi khoob!!!!

kabhi tere pyar me jeeya karte the,
aaj tere pyar me sanam mar jayenge,

chahe is judai me kush hai tu aaj par
kabhi to kabhi hum bhi tujhe yaad ayenge,

jab yaade tumari rooh pe dastak dengi,
to woh yaade hi teri ankhon ko rulayenge,

tab shayad chahoge bhi to hum tume dikhenge nahin,
kyuki log tab humare jism ko rasm se jalayenge!!!


Bahut hi achha Meena ji Usual Smile

Ye jism to dafan ho jayega jaanam,
yaadein teri rahegi mere sath khuda ke ghar mein bhi,
shayad tum bhul jao meri qabr pe phool chadana muddat baad,
teri khushi ke liye sifarish karte rahenge khuda se tab bhi sad5
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angel4u
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2007, 10:54:03 PM »
Thanks a lot shona Usual Smile
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Meena is back
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2007, 02:49:59 PM »
wah angel sis, just a brillient reply!!! dil ko chu gayi...i like it really very much!!! :D
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2007, 10:15:16 PM »
Thanks a lot Meena sis Usual Smile
your appreciation really counts for me Usual Smile
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