Aa ke roay... (NM)

by maya01 on April 29, 2008, 06:43:26 PM
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harshit101
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«Reply #45 on: May 04, 2008, 10:04:36 PM »
GOOD ONE YAR,KEEP IT UP
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maya01
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«Reply #46 on: May 04, 2008, 10:07:02 PM »
thnx yaar Grin
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Yasmeen Dua
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«Reply #47 on: May 04, 2008, 11:07:47 PM »
hmmm superb sshaaar Maya!
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Yasmeen Dua
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«Reply #48 on: May 04, 2008, 11:08:48 PM »
ankhouN main sitaraY bhe na chamkaY isay mil ker
hountooN pay judaYe kay afsaany bhe na aYe

Good lines:)welldone
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Yasmeen Dua
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«Reply #49 on: May 04, 2008, 11:13:31 PM »
waoww.....
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #50 on: May 05, 2008, 12:14:34 PM »
wah maya ji bohut hi acha likha hai
yu hi likhte rahiye
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k.shael
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«Reply #51 on: May 05, 2008, 03:08:09 PM »
hi,
u write so nice....
good keep it up....
unse chootne ka sabab kya bataye....
hal-e-dil kisi ko kya sunaye....
kya kahe is judai ko....
hamari bewafai na ruki par hamari wafa ki intaah ho gayi....
by K.SHAEL
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maya01
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«Reply #52 on: May 05, 2008, 04:56:33 PM »
Dil se tera khayal na jaaye to kya karoon?
Tu hi bata teri yaad jo aaye to kya karoon?
Hasrat yeh hai ki ek nazar dekh loon tujhe,
Kismat agar woh lamha na laaye to kya karoon

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maya01
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«Reply #53 on: May 05, 2008, 04:59:35 PM »
Baat Chupti Nahin Chupanay Say
Dil Rukta Nahin Kisi K Samjhanay Say
Ruk Jati Hai Dharkan Us Ko Bhool Janay Say
Hum Us Ko Yaad Kartay Hain Jeenay K Bahanay Say

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k.shael
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«Reply #54 on: May 05, 2008, 05:12:22 PM »
HI,MAYA....
AAP NE JO BHI LIKHA WO BILKUL SACHA HAI....
I LIKE IT SO MUCH....

WO DIN BIT GAYE BIT GAYI RAATEIN....
WO INSAAN KOI AUR THE JO KARTE THE SAATH JINE MARNE KI BAATEIN....
TUM UHI SAMBHALE BAITHE HO UNKI YAADON KO....
JA KAR DEKHO UNKE NAYE FASANE....
BY K.SHAEL
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maya01
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«Reply #55 on: May 05, 2008, 05:20:11 PM »
sab sy chupa k dard jo woh muskra dia,
uski hansi nay to aj mujko rula dia,
lehjy sy uth rahi thi har aik dard ki dastan,
chera bata raha tha k sab khuch ganwa dia,
awaz my therao tha ankhon my nami thi,
or khe raha tha my ny sab khuch bhula dia,
jany kia osko logo sy thi shikayaten,
tanhayoun k dais my khud ko basa diya,
khud b woh hum sy bichar k adhora sa ho gaya,
muj ko b itny logo may tanha bana diya..

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maya01
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«Reply #56 on: May 05, 2008, 05:27:33 PM »
Dard aapna hai to paraya kaun
kaun sunta hai aur sunnaey kaun

Kaun doohraey woh poorani baat
ghum bhi sooya hai jagagey kaun

Woh jo aapne hai kya woh aapne hai
kaun dukh jhelley azmaey kaun

Aab sukh hai to bhullane mein hai
lekin is shaksh ko bhullaey kaun

Aaj phir dil hai kuch udaas udaas
dekhiyeh aaj yaad aey kaun

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maya01
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«Reply #57 on: May 05, 2008, 05:33:46 PM »
meray dil main bi kuch kwahishain hain
mian bi bohut kuch teray naam pay sochna chahti hoon
aam bohut aam si lerki hoon
aur teray khwab jagti aankhoon say dekhna chahti hoon
main bi chahti hoon teray kuch lumhay faqt meray wastay hoon
aik ho manzil teray meray rastay hoon
kai baar main teay uthtay qadam rokna chahti hoon
bohut khamoshi hai kuch bolna chahti hoon
lakin
ik khuf terkay tualuk ka meray damangeer hai
meri aana meray kadmmon main peri zanjeer hai
kay khud ko kho ker kisi ko pana meri fitert nahi hai
bohut aam sahi main lakin yeh bi haisiiat nahi hai
kay khud ko kho to main ik lumha na jee paoon gi
tum gunnwah bi diya to chund din main behul jaoon gi
kay tum
chahat ho meri sherta.e. zindagi nahi ho
pehly kwahish ho mager aakhri nahi ho
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Roja
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«Reply #58 on: May 05, 2008, 07:11:35 PM »
meray dil main bi kuch kwahishain hain
mian bi bohut kuch teray naam pay sochna chahti hoon
aam bohut aam si lerki hoon
aur teray khwab jagti aankhoon say dekhna chahti hoon
main bi chahti hoon teray kuch lumhay faqt meray wastay hoon
aik ho manzil teray meray rastay hoon
kai baar main teay uthtay qadam rokna chahti hoon
bohut khamoshi hai kuch bolna chahti hoon
lakin
ik khuf terkay tualuk ka meray damangeer hai
meri aana meray kadmmon main peri zanjeer hai
kay khud ko kho ker kisi ko pana meri fitert nahi hai
bohut aam sahi main lakin yeh bi haisiiat nahi hai
kay khud ko kho to main ik lumha na jee paoon gi
tum gunnwah bi diya to chund din main behul jaoon gi
kay tum
chahat ho meri sherta.e. zindagi nahi ho
pehly kwahish ho mager aakhri nahi ho


Maya aapne bahut accha likha hai.  Applause
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syednaami
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«Reply #59 on: May 05, 2008, 07:30:26 PM »
Wonderful, So elegant and pure thoughts. Bravo!!
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