aag dil me

by tushar_4u_im on September 10, 2006, 06:33:15 PM
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aag dil me humne jala rakhi hai....
jo hume bhi nahi pata wo batt oro ko bhi bata rakhi hai....
yu to hum rehte hai akele har dum....
shayad humare hi naseeb me tanhai rakhi hai....
tu mil kar bhi humse juda ho gaya....
kuch pal mila fir kahi kho gaya....
sehte rahe the jo hum gum wo bhool baithe the un palo me magar....
tere jane se fir se un lamho ka ehsans ho gaya....
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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2006, 08:57:20 PM »
good one tushar keep writting.
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2006, 10:21:29 PM »
bahut khoob tushar

ek chingai si yun dil me chhupa rakhi hai
zehan me teri yun tasveer bana rakhi hai

dil ki dhadkan na chale yaad jo teri na base
goonj ik naam ki yun dil daba rakhi hai

chilmane hain bhi bahut zehan me tu rahta hai
aur yun tujh ko har ek baat  bata rakhi hai

raat aaati hai to  dil aur bhi ranjeeda ho
sara din dil ko lagane  ki saza rakhi hai

jane tu dil me kyun aaya hai mere jana nahi
saath dil me hi liye jane ko jaan rakhi hai
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2006, 12:40:44 AM »
Quote from: "tushar_4u_im"
aag dil me humne jala rakhi hai....
jo hume bhi nahi pata wo batt oro ko bhi bata rakhi hai....
yu to hum rehte hai akele har dum....
shayad humare hi naseeb me tanhai rakhi hai....
tu mil kar bhi humse juda ho gaya....
kuch pal mila fir kahi kho gaya....
sehte rahe the jo hum gum wo bhool baithe the un palo me magar....
tere jane se fir se un lamho ka ehsans ho gaya....


 =D>  =D>  Puzzled !
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2006, 01:51:44 AM »
Waaah...Gud job all.....
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2006, 11:05:51 PM »
Good job... Tushar... =D> =D> =D>

Nice one Tabassum ji.. =D> =D>
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2006, 07:11:27 PM »
aag dil me kisi k liye jalana or batt hai .....
kissi ko dil k mandir me bithana or batt hai .....
yu to choot jate hai na jane kitne lamhe zindgi k .....
kuch lamhe jinme tum ho unhe yaad kar aansu bahana or batt hai ....
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2006, 10:11:16 AM »
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aag dil me kisi k liye jalana or batt hai .....
kissi ko dil k mandir me bithana or batt hai .....
yu to choot jate hai na jane kitne lamhe zindgi k .....
kuch lamhe jinme tum ho unhe yaad kar aansu bahana or batt hai ....


bahut aache tushar ji,,,
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