Aaine pe paathar gira ke dekho...

by sweetie2210s on August 12, 2008, 12:12:24 PM
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Kis tarah bikhar gaye he hum
kisi aaine pe paathar gira ke dekho,

dil ro raha ho jab
tab muskura kar dekho,

kaise hota he dard ka ehsaas
kabhi phool pe kaanta chuba kar dekho,

dil dhadkana band kar de
tab zindagi ko azmaa kar dekho,

kitne sailaab chupe hote hein aankhon mein
kabhi samandar ki gehraai mein ja kar dekho,

jab saare sapne toot gaye hon
tab naye sapne sajaane ki himmat laa kar dekho,

dekho kaisi hoti hai bewafai ki chubhan
parchai bhi saath chod de jab
tab andheron mein kadam badhaa kar dekho.
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2008, 12:52:02 PM »
Kis tarah bikhar gaye he hum
kisi aaine pe paathar gira ke dekho,

dil ro raha ho jab
tab muskura kar dekho,

kaise hota he dard ka ehsaas
kabhi phool pe kaanta chuba kar dekho,

dil dhadkana band kar de
tab zindagi ko azmaa kar dekho,

kitne sailaab chupe hote hein aankhon mein
kabhi samandar ki gehraai mein ja kar dekho,

jab saare sapne toot gaye hon
tab naye sapne sajaane ki himmat laa kar dekho,

dekho kaisi hoti hai bewafai ki chubhan
parchai bhi saath chod de jab
tab andheron mein kadam badhaa kar dekho.


itna dard Huh?
par aksar dard ka ehsaas hi aapko shayar bana deta hai
aapne bahut hi accha likha hai
jawaaab dete nahin banta abhi par koshish zaroor karongi kuch likhne ki
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sweetie2210s
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2008, 07:56:34 PM »
itna dard Huh?
par aksar dard ka ehsaas hi aapko shayar bana deta hai
aapne bahut hi accha likha hai
jawaaab dete nahin banta abhi par koshish zaroor karongi kuch likhne ki


Bilkul sahi kaha Diya ji aapne,dard ka ehsaas hi shayer bana deta he aur mere saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua he...kuch lafzon me apni feelings beyan karne ki koshish karti hoon bas..thanks for liking it.
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