-Aaj Phir Teri Khani Yaad Aayi-

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«Reply #15 on: April 02, 2006, 08:12:07 AM »
Nice Friends,..

Hum To Badnaseeb Hain Jo Unka Pyaar Ek Pal Bhi Na Paa Sake,..
Ghar Apna Jall Raha Tha Samne Apne Aur Aag Hum Na Bujaa Sake,.

Ab To Koste Hain Kismat Ko Hum Apni Ke Usne Aisa Khel Khela,..
Ke Jo Kuch Tha Apna Wo Khodiye Aur Kuch Na Bachaa Sake,..

Khair Jo Hua Sab Naseeb Ki Baat Hai, Ab Kya Shikwa Karna,..
Bas Dua Karte Hain Ki Hamare Dard Unko Na Rulaa Sake,...

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«Reply #16 on: April 03, 2006, 09:19:27 AM »
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[you]For Someone Who Is In Heaven[/you][/size]


Dil udaas hai aaj phir mera aaj phir teri khani yaad aayi
Jo kho chuki hai barso se aaj phir woh Nishani yaad aayi

Yaad aaye woh pal jo tere sath bitaye they kabhi meiney
Tere sath na bitta saka jo aaj phir woh Jawani yaad aayi

Dekha kiye jo aaj ik laila ko ik majnu k intzaar mein kade
To mujh pe marmit jane wali phir meri Dewaani yaad aayi

Jab dekha Heer ka ranjhe ke liye sab kucch chod ke aajana
To mujhe pane ke waaste di hui teri har Qurbani yaad aayi

Dekha kiye jab ik ashiq ko kissi ki ashiqi mein khoye huye
To yaad aaye afsaane saare teri har baat Purani yaad aayi

Dekha kissi mehbuba ka mehboob ke hath mein dum todna
Jo cheen lii rab ne mujh se aaj phir woh Zindgani yaad aayi !!!  
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HumTum

Aap ne jinke liye bhi likha, may her soul stay in peace !

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«Reply #17 on: April 03, 2006, 03:18:57 PM »
App ka bahut Shukriya Rajbir Ji !!!


Taqdeer ne hi diya dhoka kya kre
Na mila hume ik bhi mouka kya kre
Todha kum milta to she bhi pate hum
Zakhm mila har baar anokha kya kre !!!
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«Reply #18 on: April 03, 2006, 03:25:22 PM »
bahoot khhoob!!

Zakham hi zindagi ko keena sikhaty hai
doosro ke dukhon ki pahchan karaty hai
her mili khushi ko, kayun log najar lagaty hai
kcuh milty hai aise gum, jo zondagi bhar sulagty rah jaaty hai!!
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«Reply #19 on: April 03, 2006, 03:32:23 PM »
Asia hota hai lekin aisa hota kyun hai
Chot lage to pattar bhi rota kyun hai
Yun to kehta hai "HumTum" ke pattar hoon
Phir reh reh ke ankhoon ko bhigota kyun hai ?
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«Reply #20 on: April 03, 2006, 03:35:12 PM »
apni fav line mai ek baar phir repeat kar rahi hu:

"paharo se hi nadiyan nikla karati hai"
her kisi ko ajmaah nahi sakta wo Rub
khud ke bandon per hi, yah gariya nikla karati hai
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«Reply #21 on: April 03, 2006, 04:41:24 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
apni fav line mai ek baar phir repeat kar rahi hu:

"paharo se hi nadiyan nikla karati hai"
her kisi ko ajmaah nahi sakta wo Rub
khud ke bandon per hi, yah gariya nikla karati hai
Wow bohat acha likha hai pooja ji,very deep meaning.Excellent work humtum n others.

"Kisi ki mohabbat ne moem ko bhi patthar bana diya,
      dekho duniya walon,aaj ek patthar bhi yahan ro diya,
      alag huye honge raaste kabhi ashkon ke patthar se,
      mohabbat ne aaj inhe phir se milaa diya........"
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«Reply #22 on: April 03, 2006, 04:44:52 PM »
humtum ji...bohot hi touching poem hai which made me  sad5
pooja didi aur majid ji ne bih bohot acha likha hai!! really gud stuff!!

yaaden bhi kabhi kisi ko hasati hai to kabhi rulati hai,
par saya ban kar tamam umar insaan ka saath nibati hai,
mithe palon ko yaad kar ke hi zindagi kato aye dost,
dukh daye yaade to pas insaan ka jeene ka haunsal azmati hai!
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«Reply #23 on: April 03, 2006, 05:45:53 PM »
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humtum ji...bohot hi touching poem hai which made me  sad5
pooja didi aur majid ji ne bih bohot acha likha hai!! really gud stuff!!

yaaden bhi kabhi kisi ko hasati hai to kabhi rulati hai,
par saya ban kar tamam umar insaan ka saath nibati hai,
mithe palon ko yaad kar ke hi zindagi kato aye dost,
dukh daye yaade to pas insaan ka jeene ka haunsal azmati hai!
very nice meena sis.

"Aaj phir teri kahani yaad aayi hai,hothon pe wo rawani wapas aayi hai,
      tera naam lete hi aanko me anjaani si chamak chaayi hai,
       na jaane tera deedar phir kabhi naseeb ho ya na ho,
      meri zindagi ki paribhasha to teri kahani bankar samaai hai."
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«Reply #24 on: April 04, 2006, 08:58:36 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
apni fav line mai ek baar phir repeat kar rahi hu:

"paharo se hi nadiyan nikla karati hai"
her kisi ko ajmaah nahi sakta wo Rub
khud ke bandon per hi, yah gariya nikla karati hai


waah waah !!

Upper wala jo bhi karta achcha hi karta hai
Yeh to insaan hi hai jo pal pal ahein barta hai
Gar cheenta hai woh kucch to kucch hai deta
Apne bandoon ki bas woh aazmaish karta hai !!
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«Reply #25 on: April 04, 2006, 09:09:04 AM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
humtum ji...bohot hi touching poem hai which made me  sad5
pooja didi aur majid ji ne bih bohot acha likha hai!! really gud stuff!!

yaaden bhi kabhi kisi ko hasati hai to kabhi rulati hai,
par saya ban kar tamam umar insaan ka saath nibati hai,
mithe palon ko yaad kar ke hi zindagi kato aye dost,
dukh daye yaade to pas insaan ka jeene ka haunsal azmati hai!



Humm Meena JI aap ne sahi likha .... khair agar upper wala kucch cheenta hai to uske badle bahut kucch de bhi deta hai !!!


Yadein jo dil pe gehre zakhm lga ke jati hai
kisi ki chahtein zakhmon ko bhi bhar jati hai
Mana yadein rehti hai dil mein hamare 'ta umr
Lekin kissi ki nazrien bhi dil mein ghar kar jati hai!!
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«Reply #26 on: April 04, 2006, 09:16:26 AM »
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very nice meena sis.

"Aaj phir teri kahani yaad aayi hai,hothon pe wo rawani wapas aayi hai,
      tera naam lete hi aanko me anjaani si chamak chaayi hai,
       na jaane tera deedar phir kabhi naseeb ho ya na ho,
      meri zindagi ki paribhasha to teri kahani bankar samaai hai."


Nice one Nidhi ji !!

Aaj phir teri khani yaad aayi hai
Dil pe yadoon ki gatha chai hai
yaad aaye hai guzre zamane sare
Har ik baat purani yaad ayi hai !!
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«Reply #27 on: April 04, 2006, 10:23:18 AM »
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For Someone Who Is In Heaven[/size]


Dil udaas hai aaj phir mera aaj phir teri khani yaad aayi
Jo kho chuki hai barso se aaj phir woh Nishani yaad aayi

Yaad aaye woh pal jo tere sath bitaye they kabhi meiney
Tere sath na bitta saka jo aaj phir woh Jawani yaad aayi

Dekha kiye jo aaj ik laila ko ik majnu k intzaar mein kade
To mujh pe marmit jane wali phir meri Dewaani yaad aayi

Jab dekha Heer ka ranjhe ke liye sab kucch chod ke aajana
To mujhe pane ke waaste di hui teri har Qurbani yaad aayi

Dekha kiye jab ik ashiq ko kissi ki ashiqi mein khoye huye
To yaad aaye afsaane saare teri har baat Purani yaad aayi

Dekha kissi mehbuba ka mehboob ke hath mein dum todna
Jo cheen lii rab ne mujh se aaj phir woh Zindgani yaad aayi !!!  
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Humtum !!! Kya kahun....lafz nahin hai mere paas aapke is dard ke baare me likhne ko sad5 sad5

Sabhi doston ne bohot achcha likha hai yahan !!!
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«Reply #28 on: April 04, 2006, 06:10:35 PM »
superbbb everyone....kamaal ka likha hai sabne..
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«Reply #29 on: April 04, 2006, 09:28:45 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum is back"
[you]For Someone Who Is In Heaven[/you][/size]


Dil udaas hai aaj phir mera aaj phir teri khani yaad aayi
Jo kho chuki hai barso se aaj phir woh Nishani yaad aayi

Yaad aaye woh pal jo tere sath bitaye they kabhi meiney
Tere sath na bitta saka jo aaj phir woh Jawani yaad aayi

Dekha kiye jo aaj ik laila ko ik majnu k intzaar mein kade
To mujh pe marmit jane wali phir meri Dewaani yaad aayi

Jab dekha Heer ka ranjhe ke liye sab kucch chod ke aajana
To mujhe pane ke waaste di hui teri har Qurbani yaad aayi

Dekha kiye jab ik ashiq ko kissi ki ashiqi mein khoye huye
To yaad aaye afsaane saare teri har baat Purani yaad aayi

Dekha kissi mehbuba ka mehboob ke hath mein dum todna
Jo cheen lii rab ne mujh se aaj phir woh Zindgani yaad aayi !!!  
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Bahut accha hai Hum Tum .. !!
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