Aaj Tez Barsaat Mein Phir Teri Yaad Aayi hai.....

by khwaish on March 23, 2008, 06:17:35 PM
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Aaj tez barsaat mein phir teri yaad aayi hai
har girte boond ne mujhse kaha
"dilkash mausam mein bhi kyon,
tere ird-gird sirf tanhai hai??"

sab kuch hai paas mere
par agar woh na ho to sirf tanhaai hai
shayad issi ko kehte hai yaar,
"DARD-E-JUDAI hai...

jab bhi yaad karta hoon uss shaks ko
to aankhein meri bhar aayi hai
eh khuda,aisi bhi kya teri khudai hai??

waise to hasratein bahut si thi dil mein mere
par tere hukm ke bin eh khuda
kabhi kisi ki baat kya ban paayi hai??

jis ke khayalo mein main,
guum sa rehta hoon har pehar,
kya usse bhi mera khayal hai,
yeh baat se "khwaish" ne apni neend gawaai hai.....

apni nigaahon se kabhi "khwaish" ki taraf bhi dekho,
door baithe rehte ho humse,
aisi bhi kya ruswai hai.....

aaj tez barsaat mein phir teri yaad aayi hai...
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2008, 06:29:46 PM »
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Khwaish bro,

Yeh barsaat bhi kambakht bahut pareshan karti hai !

Bahut khoob ! Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2008, 06:30:30 PM »
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 Bohat khoob khwaish ji.. Applause

Tez barsaat mein teri yaad aayi hai
Woh saath guzare har haseen pal yaad aayi hai
Saath toh the hum aapke paas kabhi aapne gaur na kiya
Har lamha tumare isqh ke liye tadape woh haseen pal yaad aayi hai
Jasbath na saath deh meri daman se beeg gaye hai meri palken woh pal yaad aayi  hai
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2008, 06:34:28 PM »
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Khwaish bro,

Yeh barsaat bhi kambakht bahut pareshan karti hai !

Bahut khoob ! Applause

thanx a lot paaji...sach kaha aapne yeh barsaat bhi kambakt bahut pareshan karti hai.. icon_salut
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2008, 06:35:23 PM »
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Bohat khoob khwaish ji.. Applause

Tez barsaat mein teri yaad aayi hai
Woh saath guzare har haseen pal yaad aayi hai
Saath toh the hum aapke paas kabhi aapne gaur na kiya
Har lamha tumare isqh ke liye tadape woh haseen pal yaad aayi hai
Jasbath na saath deh meri daman se beeg gaye hai meri palken woh pal yaad aayi  hai

bahut bahut shukriya honey...
aur bahut khoob honey...bahut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2008, 09:51:54 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai. bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!! sorry waqat ki tangi hai warna jawab jaroor likhati... magar wapis akar jab bhi waqat hua mai kuch na kuch jaroor likhne ki koshish karugi!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2008, 12:01:12 AM »
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jis ke khayalo mein main,
guum sa rehta hoon har pehar,
kya usse bhi mera khayal hai,
yeh baat se "khwaish" ne apni neend gawaai hai.....

apni nigaahon se kabhi "khwaish" ki taraf bhi dekho,
door baithe rehte ho humse,
aisi bhi kya ruswai hai.....

aaj tez barsaat mein phir teri yaad aayi hai...


Bahut khoob...  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2008, 03:25:56 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on March 24, 2008, 09:51:54 PM
wah kaya baat hai. bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!! sorry waqat ki tangi hai warna jawab jaroor likhati... magar wapis akar jab bhi waqat hua mai kuch na kuch jaroor likhne ki koshish karugi!!

Bahut Bahut shukriya pooja...aapki kavita ka intezaar ho raha hai!!! icon_salut
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2008, 03:26:50 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA ROJA..
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2008, 04:21:23 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on March 24, 2008, 09:51:54 PM
wah kaya baat hai. bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!! sorry waqat ki tangi hai warna jawab jaroor likhati... magar wapis akar jab bhi waqat hua mai kuch na kuch jaroor likhne ki koshish karugi!!

Bahut Bahut shukriya pooja...aapki kavita ka intezaar ho raha hai!!! icon_salut

Barsati barsaat ne khayalo ko hawa di hai
Juda hui teri yaadon ko ek agan di hai

Dilkash is mosam mai yah boondein
Dukhati rag ko jaise isne dastak di hai

Kabhi the sath sath in boondon main hum
Ajj issi barsaat ne judai ki tohmat di hai

Dil ki hasrate dil mai hi rah gai kitani
Her ek hasrat ne is barsat mai tadpahat di hai

Barsati barsaat ne khayalo ko hawa di hai
Dhadkano ne ajj phir zakhmo se baat ki hai........
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2008, 06:34:09 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob,.
sabne Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,. Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2008, 06:43:36 AM »
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Barsaat Jaane Kyun Mera Gham Badhaa Deti Hai,.
Tanhaai Ka Ehsaas Dilaakar, Kyun Rulaa Deti Hai,.

Jee Rahe The Mausam-e-Khushk Mein Hum Yaadon Ke Sahaare,.
Barsaat Jaane Kyun, Beete yaadon Ke Phool Khilaa Deti Hai,.

Log To Kehte Hain, Unhe Barsaat Mein Rona Pasand Hai,.
Aur Hum Jab Rote Hain, To Kyun Ye Ashq Paani Mein Milaa Deti Hai,.

Sitam Humpar Sirf Barsaat Ka Nahi, Saari Khudaai Ka Hai,.
Kya Karein Jab Judaai Kisi Ki, Zindagi Ko Maut Se Katheen Banaa Deti Hai,.
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2008, 06:11:38 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 02, 2008, 03:25:56 PM
Quote from: Pooja on March 24, 2008, 09:51:54 PM
wah kaya baat hai. bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!! sorry waqat ki tangi hai warna jawab jaroor likhati... magar wapis akar jab bhi waqat hua mai kuch na kuch jaroor likhne ki koshish karugi!!

Bahut Bahut shukriya pooja...aapki kavita ka intezaar ho raha hai!!! icon_salut

Barsati barsaat ne khayalo ko hawa di hai
Juda hui teri yaadon ko ek agan di hai

Dilkash is mosam mai yah boondein
Dukhati rag ko jaise isne dastak di hai

Kabhi the sath sath in boondon main hum
Ajj issi barsaat ne judai ki tohmat di hai

Dil ki hasrate dil mai hi rah gai kitani
Her ek hasrat ne is barsat mai tadpahat di hai

Barsati barsaat ne khayalo ko hawa di hai
Dhadkano ne ajj phir zakhmo se baat ki hai........


Bahut Bahut Khoob poojaji.. Hats off to you!  bahut acha likha hai...
"barsati barsaat ne khayalo ko hawa di hai
dhadkano ne aaj phir zakhmo se baat ki hai"...bahut khoob!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2008, 06:13:55 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 04, 2008, 06:34:09 AM
Bahoot Khoob,.
sabne Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,. Applause

bahut bahut shukriya azeem bro...
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2008, 06:17:19 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 04, 2008, 06:43:36 AM
Barsaat Jaane Kyun Mera Gham Badhaa Deti Hai,.
Tanhaai Ka Ehsaas Dilaakar, Kyun Rulaa Deti Hai,.

Jee Rahe The Mausam-e-Khushk Mein Hum Yaadon Ke Sahaare,.
Barsaat Jaane Kyun, Beete yaadon Ke Phool Khilaa Deti Hai,.

Log To Kehte Hain, Unhe Barsaat Mein Rona Pasand Hai,.
Aur Hum Jab Rote Hain, To Kyun Ye Ashq Paani Mein Milaa Deti Hai,.

Sitam Humpar Sirf Barsaat Ka Nahi, Saari Khudaai Ka Hai,.
Kya Karein Jab Judaai Kisi Ki, Zindagi Ko Maut Se Katheen Banaa Deti Hai,.
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'_____________________________________-Jaanasheen-


Kya baat hai azeembro..ek ek line bahut khoob likhi hai...
bahut hi ache  Applause Applause Applause
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