----- /// Aaj tu mere sang nahi /// -----

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mann hai aaj mohabbt pe likhun par meri mohabbat hi sang nahi,
jis kalam se main likha karta tha aaj wo kalam hi sang nahi,

andheri har subah se shaam hai, ab zindagi me koi rang nahi,
jab se tu gayi hai dur mujhse meri zindagi mere sang nahi,

bulandiyaan to kadam chum rahi hain par dil me hi umang nahi,
jiske liye kar raha  tha sab kuch aaj wahi mere sang nahi,

sapno se to saath chhoot chuka hai aaj neend bhi sang nahi,
kehne ko to zinda hoon aaj par meri dhadkane bhi sang nahi,

tere rehte tu hi thi sab kuch aaj parchaayi bhi sang nahi,
meri muskaan main kahaan se lautaun koi kaaran hi sang nahi,

tere liye sab naate tode, aaj tera sang hi mere sang nahi,
tu hi bata aaj kaise likhun main jab mera dil mere sang nahi...


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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2010, 01:39:17 AM »
Bahaut pyaara likha hai...dard dikta hai apke inn lavzon main dost..kyaa baat hai..kay kyun hasoun jab koi wajah hi sang nahin..bahaut bahaut pyaara...ankhein bhar ayi kyun ki dil ka yehi kuch haal hai...
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2010, 09:26:50 AM »
bht dil se likhi rachna hai ye aapki klaskar ji....

dil chhu gai....jald hi reply dungi...
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2010, 05:17:49 PM »
kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..pata nahin kaisa hai..umeed hai achcha hi lagega...

hath me lekar kalam fir chal likh k main tere sath hun
dil ki koi mithi baat chhed k main aaj fir tere sath hun

raat andheri thi bht aur nahin the koi sath tere
par aaj ye suhani bhor to dekh k main jhilmilati pehli kiran hun

ghanghor ghata aur ye tufaan tujhe bich bhanwar me le gaye
aaja lehron pe jhume sath k aaj main tere patwaar hun

duniya ki bheed me tune paya khudko tabha to kya
aaj to muskura ee dost k aaj to main teri muskaan hun

deke shabdon ko naya ruup rang bharde rang iss duniya me
aaj dil khol k har baat likh k main bani teri kalam aaj hun...
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2010, 05:32:35 PM »
wah wah wah klaskar ji... bahut hi khoob , wah

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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2010, 05:33:21 PM »
wah kasak ji... aap ney bhi bahut hi sundar likha hai.. bahut acchaa saath dia hai aap ney ... wah

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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2010, 06:34:48 PM »
Bahut akelepan ka ehsaas dilata aapka ye nagma ati-sunder hai....
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mann hai aaj mohabbt pe likhun par meri mohabbat hi sang nahi,
jis kalam se main likha karta tha aaj wo kalam hi sang nahi,

andheri har subah se shaam hai, ab zindagi me koi rang nahi,
jab se tu gayi hai dur mujhse meri zindagi mere sang nahi,

bulandiyaan to kadam chum rahi hain par dil me hi umang nahi,
jiske liye kar raha  tha sab kuch aaj wahi mere sang nahi,

sapno se to saath chhoot chuka hai aaj neend bhi sang nahi,
kehne ko to zinda hoon aaj par meri dhadkane bhi sang nahi,

tere rehte tu hi thi sab kuch aaj parchaayi bhi sang nahi,
meri muskaan main kahaan se lautaun koi kaaran hi sang nahi,

tere liye sab naate tode, aaj tera sang hi mere sang nahi,
tu hi bata aaj kaise likhun main jab mera dil mere sang nahi...


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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2010, 06:44:07 PM »
Wah kasak-di kya positive reply diya hai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Meine kaha tha na Kapilji didi aapse likhwa kar he chhodegi.....
Lo ab tou wo khud kalam ban rahi hai aapki likho... wave hello Winking

kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..pata nahin kaisa hai..umeed hai achcha hi lagega...

hath me lekar kalam fir chal likh k main tere sath hun
dil ki koi mithi baat chhed k main aaj fir tere sath hun

raat andheri thi bht aur nahin the koi sath tere
par aaj ye suhani bhor to dekh k main jhilmilati pehli kiran hun

ghanghor ghata aur ye tufaan tujhe bich bhanwar me le gaye
aaja lehron pe jhume sath k aaj main tere patwaar hun

duniya ki bheed me tune paya khudko tabha to kya
aaj to muskura ee dost k aaj to main teri muskaan hun

deke shabdon ko naya ruup rang bharde rang iss duniya me
aaj dil khol k har baat likh k main bani teri kalam aaj hun...
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2010, 06:31:42 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Bahaut pyaara likha hai...dard dikta hai apke inn lavzon main dost..kyaa baat hai..kay kyun hasoun jab koi wajah hi sang nahin..bahaut bahaut pyaara...ankhein bhar ayi kyun ki dil ka yehi kuch haal hai...
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«Reply #9 on: July 27, 2010, 06:32:10 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Bahut Khub Klaskar Ji


Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2010, 06:37:02 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... aur aapka jawaab bhi humein behad pasand aaya... bas thoda intzaar kijiye hum iska jawaab jald hi denge...!!!!

bht dil se likhi rachna hai ye aapki klaskar ji....

dil chhu gai....jald hi reply dungi...

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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2010, 06:23:45 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Jasbir ji...!!!

wah wah wah klaskar ji... bahut hi khoob , wah

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«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2010, 06:25:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...!!!

Bahut akelepan ka ehsaas dilata aapka ye nagma ati-sunder hai....
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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2010, 06:26:38 AM »
sahi kaha aapne Koyal ji... ye sach me likhwa hi rahi hain mujhse... meri kalam tak banne ko tayyar ho gayi ab to ye...!!!

Shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

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Meine kaha tha na Kapilji didi aapse likhwa kar he chhodegi.....
Lo ab tou wo khud kalam ban rahi hai aapki likho... wave hello Winking

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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2010, 06:28:32 AM »
Aap bhi kaisi baat karti hain Kasak ji... aisa ho sakta hai kya ki aap kuch likhen aur humein pasand naa aaye.. bahut bahut pasand aya humein ye... bahut khoobsurti se aapne likha hai... aapki lekh meri doobti hui kashti ke liye saharaa hai... bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

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hone laga hai khudpe aetbaar sa ek tere aa jaane se,
chhaane laga hai kuch khumaar sa ek tere aa jaane se,

barso se banjar thi ye bhoomi, khila na ek phool kabhi,
aaj yahaan khili hain bahaarein ek tere aa jaane se,

barso se jo sukhe the baadal, aaj wo baadal baras rahe hain,
usi baarish se mere aansoo bhi dhul gaye ek tere aa jane se,

toofaan me tinko ki tarha bikhar gaya tha main bhi kabhi,
unhi tinko ko fir main jod rahaaa hoon ek tere aa jaane se,

har taraf khaamoshi thi yahaan, chidiyon ki bhi kuk nahi thi,
aaj shor ke saath naach rahe hain mor ek tere aa jaane se,

tanhaa tha main bheed me bhi, sangi na koi saathi tha,
mil gaya hai saara jahaan mujhe aaj ek tere aa jaane se,

dhadkano ko ye shikayat thi ki dhadak rahe the meri marzi bina,
dhadkane bhi meri aaj jhoom rahi hain ek tere aa jaane se,

saanson ko bhi shikayat thi ki unme koi mehek nahi thi,
saansen bhi aaj kuch mehek rahe hain ek tere a jaane se,

tere saath se badhke kuch nahi, isse jyada ab kya main kahun,
maine zindagi ki paribhaasha ko jaana ek tere aa jaane se,

kalam fir khud se chalne lagi hai ek tere aa jaane se,
aaj firse main likhne laga hoon ek tere aa jaane se...


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kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..pata nahin kaisa hai..umeed hai achcha hi lagega...

hath me lekar kalam fir chal likh k main tere sath hun
dil ki koi mithi baat chhed k main aaj fir tere sath hun

raat andheri thi bht aur nahin the koi sath tere
par aaj ye suhani bhor to dekh k main jhilmilati pehli kiran hun

ghanghor ghata aur ye tufaan tujhe bich bhanwar me le gaye
aaja lehron pe jhume sath k aaj main tere patwaar hun

duniya ki bheed me tune paya khudko tabha to kya
aaj to muskura ee dost k aaj to main teri muskaan hun

deke shabdon ko naya ruup rang bharde rang iss duniya me
aaj dil khol k har baat likh k main bani teri kalam aaj hun...
!!![/color]
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