~*~aakhiri mulakaat~*~

by kaushikbhawna008 on March 26, 2009, 08:57:16 AM
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kaushikbhawna008
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Khushi bhi  mili gam bhi mile
Rishto mei faasle har dam mile
Kaise karte ham kisi se koi gila
Banke hamdam the sab hamse mile

Har roz ki tarah Deepak mei lau thi jali
Tez tufaan magar hamko kam na mile
Bujhti lau ko bachane ki koshish mei
Hath par zakhm khilte rahe

Mita mita sa kuch likha hua hai magar
Takdeer mei likha jo use padh na sake
Waqt ne bana diya auro ki najron mei kaatil
Khud se kabhi mil paate aise na hamei pal mile

Mumkin har baat kar lete gar hoti thodi or mohlat
Par pal hamko zindgi k ab bohut kam hain mile
Wo bhi keh gaye aakhiri mulakaat hai ab
Jab antim safar par khud ham chal the diye
…..
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diya786
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2009, 09:57:50 AM »
very nice kaushik ji
kamaal ka likha hai aapne Applause Applause

Na wo aa sake na hum jaa sake
haal apna na kisi ko bata sake
umeed mein baithe hai yaadon ko unhi ki lekar
na woh bhula sake na hum bhula sake {NM}
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2009, 10:42:19 AM »
Bohat khoob Bhawna bada dil se likhti ho yaar.....
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karndhar
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2009, 11:34:32 AM »
Great work Bahvna Ji,
Nice sharing by Diya Ji too,
Keep writing and sharing !
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2009, 05:08:28 AM »
thnk u diya ji
thnk u sajid ji
shukriya karndhar ji notworthy
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2009, 08:06:45 AM »
Bahaut khoob Bhavna jee aur Diya jee
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2009, 05:35:07 AM »
thnks a lot dh ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2009, 05:40:20 AM »
Khushi bhi  mili gam bhi mile
Rishto mei faasle har dam mile
Kaise karte ham kisi se koi gila
Banke hamdam the sab hamse mile

Har roz ki tarah Deepak mei lau thi jali
Tez tufaan magar hamko kam na mile
Bujhti lau ko bachane ki koshish mei
Hath par zakhm khilte rahe

Mita mita sa kuch likha hua hai magar
Takdeer mei likha jo use padh na sake
Waqt ne bana diya auro ki najron mei kaatil
Khud se kabhi mil paate aise na hamei pal mile

Mumkin har baat kar lete gar hoti thodi or mohlat
Par pal hamko zindgi k ab bohut kam hain mile
Wo bhi keh gaye aakhiri mulakaat hai ab
Jab antim safar par khud ham chal the diye
…..

bahut achche bhawna dear,,,,,,,
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2009, 07:21:54 AM »
good work bhawna
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2009, 07:26:52 AM »
BHAWNA Ji... Bahut Accha Likha hai... Great Words & Great Work.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2009, 05:51:05 PM »
Khushi bhi  mili gam bhi mile
Rishto mei faasle har dam mile
Kaise karte ham kisi se koi gila
Banke hamdam the sab hamse mile

Har roz ki tarah Deepak mei lau thi jali
Tez tufaan magar hamko kam na mile
Bujhti lau ko bachane ki koshish mei
Hath par zakhm khilte rahe

Mita mita sa kuch likha hua hai magar
Takdeer mei likha jo use padh na sake
Waqt ne bana diya auro ki najron mei kaatil
Khud se kabhi mil paate aise na hamei pal mile

Mumkin har baat kar lete gar hoti thodi or mohlat
Par pal hamko zindgi k ab bohut kam hain mile
Wo bhi keh gaye aakhiri mulakaat hai ab
Jab antim safar par khud ham chal the diye
…..


Bohot Khoob Bhawna
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: April 26, 2009, 06:00:00 PM »
Khushi bhi  mili gam bhi mile
Rishto mei faasle har dam mile
Kaise karte ham kisi se koi gila
Banke hamdam the sab hamse mile

Har roz ki tarah Deepak mei lau thi jali
Tez tufaan magar hamko kam na mile
Bujhti lau ko bachane ki koshish mei
Hath par zakhm khilte rahe

Mita mita sa kuch likha hua hai magar
Takdeer mei likha jo use padh na sake
Waqt ne bana diya auro ki najron mei kaatil
Khud se kabhi mil paate aise na hamei pal mile

Mumkin har baat kar lete gar hoti thodi or mohlat
Par pal hamko zindgi k ab bohut kam hain mile
Wo bhi keh gaye aakhiri mulakaat hai ab
Jab antim safar par khud ham chal the diye
…..


Wonderful  Applause Applause
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poppoetry
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«Reply #12 on: April 26, 2009, 06:08:02 PM »
bahut khub bhawna ji.....

Kaise khe unse k wo hi katil h is dil ka
jb b mila hmse hmare hmdard bn kr mile
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2009, 04:46:40 AM »
thanks a lot friennds for apreciation  notworthy
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honeyrose
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«Reply #14 on: May 06, 2009, 04:47:54 AM »
Khushi bhi  mili gam bhi mile
Rishto mei faasle har dam mile
Kaise karte ham kisi se koi gila
Banke hamdam the sab hamse mile

Har roz ki tarah Deepak mei lau thi jali
Tez tufaan magar hamko kam na mile
Bujhti lau ko bachane ki koshish mei
Hath par zakhm khilte rahe

Mita mita sa kuch likha hua hai magar
Takdeer mei likha jo use padh na sake
Waqt ne bana diya auro ki najron mei kaatil
Khud se kabhi mil paate aise na hamei pal mile

Mumkin har baat kar lete gar hoti thodi or mohlat
Par pal hamko zindgi k ab bohut kam hain mile
Wo bhi keh gaye aakhiri mulakaat hai ab
Jab antim safar par khud ham chal the diye
…..


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah bohat khoob Bhawna dear...
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