^Aankhon se nikalte hain mere aansu^

by honeyrose on July 31, 2008, 10:12:07 AM
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Aankhon se nikalte hain mere aansu
Kabhi unke yaadon se bhar jaate hain mere aansu

Bharish mein bheejte hain pyaar ke aansu
Unka intezaar karte hain dard ke aansu

Aankhon se nikalte hain mere aansu
Saath dete aur rulate hain ek pal mein aansu

Kabhi dukh kabhi khushi se dagmagate hain mere aansu
Kuch dard hai joh kahe nahi paaye hain mere aansu

Dil ka dard nahi chhupa paaye hain mere khamosh aansu
Unki ki yaadon mein kho jaate hain  mere dard ke aansu

Tadapte dil ki pukar nahi samajh paaye hain mere aansu
Dil ka dard nahi mitta paaye hain mere pyaar ke aansu
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baadal102
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2008, 10:55:16 AM »
kya baat hai honey ji
hume batao jara kis ne diye hai ye aanshu



Baadal
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2008, 10:59:56 AM »
nice honey ji
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2008, 12:05:07 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on July 31, 2008, 10:55:16 AM
kya baat hai honey ji
hume batao jara kis ne diye hai ye aanshu



Baadal
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Haan bataogi aapko kabhi.. tearyeyed

Shukriya kaushik ji..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2008, 12:08:00 PM »
Nice Work Honey...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2008, 12:20:05 PM »
nice line...honey
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punam
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2008, 12:31:02 PM »
Bahut khoob Honey di....
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2008, 09:19:45 PM »
Bohot achha likha aap ne honeyrose sahiba, or bohot achha topic he ye, sahi mein aansoo kitni tarah se nikalte rehte hein, ise apne hi andaaz mein aage badhate rahiye, aansoo ki zameen par abhi bohot kuchh likhne ki gunjaaish he, kisi ne sahi kaha he:

"ye aansoo mere dil ki zubaan he"

isi tarah likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2008, 06:09:27 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on July 31, 2008, 10:12:07 AM

Bharish mein bheejte hain pyaar ke aansu
Unka intezaar karte hain dard ke aansu

Aankhon se nikalte hain mere aansu
Saath dete aur rulate hain ek pal mein aansu

Kabhi dukh kabhi khushi se dagmagate hain mere aansu
Kuch dard hai joh kahe nahi paaye hain mere aansu

Chaliye der se aaya dusrust aaya hun Paheli baar shayad Arse baad Mukhateeb hun aapke kalaam se Barah-e-Raast..Bahot Hi Khoob Hai aapka Likhna aur aapke Ye Ash'aar..Honeyrose sahiba.
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honeyrose
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2008, 07:25:38 AM »

Shukriya Punam,,,Mahiya aapka..

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri

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Bohot achha likha aap ne honeyrose sahiba, or bohot achha topic he ye, sahi mein aansoo kitni tarah se nikalte rehte hein, ise apne hi andaaz mein aage badhate rahiye, aansoo ki zameen par abhi bohot kuchh likhne ki gunjaaish he, kisi ne sahi kaha he:

"ye aansoo mere dil ki zubaan he"

isi tarah likhte rahiye.


Shukriya Sayyid ji aapka joh mera likha aapko pasand aaya..
ek line yaad aaye hai aapki shayad tik likha ho to kahiye


'Zameen ko chuu jaate hai mere aansu
Unke liye tadapte bikar the hai mere aansu
Fir se unko na dekha humne na rokh paaye mere aansu
Aapki yaadon mein baha rahe hai mere tanhaiye ke aansu'



Quote from: Muhammed on August 01, 2008, 06:09:27 AM
Chaliye der se aaya dusrust aaya hun Paheli baar shayad Arse baad Mukhateeb hun aapke kalaam se Barah-e-Raast..Bahot Hi Khoob Hai aapka Likhna aur aapke Ye Ash'aar..Honeyrose sahiba.
..

Buhat buhat shukriya Muhammed ji joh aapne meri shayari pasand ki hai ..
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k.shael
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2008, 11:41:25 AM »
 Applause  Applause
EXCELLENT WORK,
HONEY DI,
KEEP GOING....

KABHI KABHI U HI AANKHON SE BEH JAATE
HAI YE AANSOO,
KABHI KABHI BHARI MEHFIL ME GUNAHGAR KAR
JATE HAI YE AANSOO,
KABHI TANHAI ME JO AAYE TO PURANI YAADE
TAAZA KAR JATE HAI YE AANSOO,
ZINDAGI KE HAR MOAD HAR KOOCHE ME KISI NA
KISI WAJAH SE SAATH NIBHATE HAI YE AANSOO
BY. K.SHAEL
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honeyrose
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2008, 11:56:45 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on August 01, 2008, 11:41:25 AM
Applause  Applause
EXCELLENT WORK,
HONEY DI,
KEEP GOING....

KABHI KABHI U HI AANKHON SE BEH JAATE
HAI YE AANSOO,
KABHI KABHI BHARI MEHFIL ME GUNAHGAR KAR
JATE HAI YE AANSOO,
KABHI TANHAI ME JO AAYE TO PURANI YAADE
TAAZA KAR JATE HAI YE AANSOO,
ZINDAGI KE HAR MOAD HAR KOOCHE ME KISI NA
KISI WAJAH SE SAATH NIBHATE HAI YE AANSOO
BY. K.SHAEL




 Applause Wah buhat hi kamaal ka likha hai shally..

Dard mein kashmakash se ladh rahe hai ye aansu
Kya wajeh hai joh kahe na paaye hai ye aansu
Jazbath se majboor hai ye dil se keech lete ye aansu
Dil ki baat dil mein dabe hue tadapte hai ye aansu
Kasam khane se bhi na sunte hai dil ki baat ye aansu
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2008, 08:03:22 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on August 01, 2008, 07:25:38 AM

Shukriya Sayyid ji aapka joh mera likha aapko pasand aaya..
ek line yaad aaye hai aapki shayad tik likha ho to kahiye

'Zameen ko chuu jaate hai mere aansu
Unke liye tadapte bikar the hai mere aansu
Fir se unko na dekha humne na rokh paaye mere aansu
Aapki yaadon mein baha rahe hai mere tanhaiye ke aansu'

Khoob!!
kuchh hamein bhi shauq huwa he koshish kar ke dehte hen..... tongue3

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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2008, 08:05:08 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on August 01, 2008, 11:41:25 AM
KABHI KABHI U HI AANKHON SE BEH JAATE
HAI YE AANSOO,
KABHI KABHI BHARI MEHFIL ME GUNAHGAR KAR
JATE HAI YE AANSOO,
KABHI TANHAI ME JO AAYE TO PURANI YAADE
TAAZA KAR JATE HAI YE AANSOO,
ZINDAGI KE HAR MOAD HAR KOOCHE ME KISI NA
KISI WAJAH SE SAATH NIBHATE HAI YE AANSOO
BY. K.SHAEL


Waah bohot khoob likhaa he shael ji.....
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Muhammed
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«Reply #14 on: August 02, 2008, 04:43:05 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 01, 2008, 08:03:22 PM

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Bahot Hi Khoob sayyid sa'b,,badhiya Qat'aa Hai aapka.
waise Ye Aansoo Hi Rang Layenge Maheshar Me.Gunaaho'n K daftar dhulenge In aansoo Se. 
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