AASOON-HI-AASOON:Shayri-E-Dard

monali

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Aisi aasoon bhari jindgi kisi ko na de!
Khushi ke baad game-bebasi kisi ko na de!
Udas dil ki tamanna hai ashkwar hoon mai!
Udasi jis pe hase wo hasi kisi ko na de!
Udalo tum bhi hasi meri jindgani par!
Tadapti aarzoo dum todti jawani par!
Saja jo di hai mujhe wo kisi ko na de!


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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2007, 06:49:37 PM »

Well drafted lines..
Keep up !


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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2007, 07:13:40 PM »

i love it! very good MONALI.. really good... keep writin aise hi..


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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2007, 09:36:27 PM »

Monali

Bahut khoob !

Very nice words =D>


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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2007, 07:04:34 AM »

very nice monali....beautiful lines.

"Khushi ki tamanna me dil kitne sapne sajata hai,
har baar teri berukhi se haar kar aansu hi pata hai,
door chali jaun kaise,nazdeek apne tumhe laun kaise,
aakhir me akelapan,tanhaai bas yahi reh jaata hai."


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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2007, 10:47:56 AM »

Nidhi.. those are good lines !


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monali

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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2007, 04:27:15 PM »

Thanks Rickyji, Sanyaji n Raj-ji
Meri tehreer aap sabko pasand aayi shukriya.


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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2007, 04:42:01 PM »

Thanku Nidhi. I too like those lines.

Khushi ki tamanna mein dil kitne sapane sajate hai,
Har bar teri berukhise haar kar aansu hi pata hai,
Door chali jaun kaise tumhe nazdeek apane laun kaise, aakhir mein akelapan tanhaai bas yehi reh jata hei".

[color=indigoChahoge lakh bar yeh dastoor na tutenge
pehale bhi dil tute the, aab bhi dil tutenge
Koshish karke dekh lo, ishq ka aalam dushman hai
yehan to apane bhi nidhi, bari-bari ruthenge"[\b][/color]


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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2007, 05:13:57 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB MONALI..AUR NIDHIJI BAHUT ACHE..EK HAMARE TARAF SE BI

ZINDAGI MEIN KABHI UDAAS NA BAITHO
FIZA HAMESHA TANG KAREGI
JO WAQT GUZAARE HAI SAATH MEIN
BEETEIN HUE LAMHON KI YAADEIN TANG KAREGI

NA LAYO KABHI KISI KO
DIL KE ITNE KAREEB
UNKI YAADEIN KHANJAR BANKE
DIL KO ZAKHM KAREGI

NO SAMJHO KI ISHQ KA
IMTEHAAN AASAN HOGA "KHWAISH"
BICHAD JAANE KE BAAD
UNKI HAR EK ADAA TANG KAREGI


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monali

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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2007, 05:41:09 PM »

Thanks khwaish for sharing


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Roja

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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2007, 11:51:23 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Nidhi ... very touchy.. and lovely lines...

Jism k her kone se khushboo tumhari aati hai
Jab b tanha hoti hu, yaad tumhari aati hai
Dikha ker kwaab in aankhon ko, de gaye aansoo in main tum
Kaise chalka du ye aansoo, in main b toh rehte ho tum?
Ho gayee tumse juda, kitne badnaseeb hai hum..
Roota humse aaj hamara khuda, kitne fakeer hai hum..

:cry: [/color]


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Roja

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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2007, 11:54:13 PM »

Quote from: "khwaish"

Good lines khwaish... keep up..


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Roja

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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2007, 11:59:25 PM »

Quote from: "monali"

Bahut khoob mona... daad hazir hai. Keep it up..

Badal gayee lehron ki gaati
Paani jor se uchal raha hai
Hamara ashqkon ki kya aukaad
Monali... Aapki yaad main samandar bhi ro raha hai..!! :wink: [/color]


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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2007, 06:44:20 AM »

Quote from: "monali"

Wah Kya Baat Hai MONALI.. Bahut Behtreen Lafz Likhe Hain aapne.. !!! Usual Smile

Bahut bahut Khoooooooooob.. Kamaal kar Diya Aapne.. !!


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monali

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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2007, 04:04:58 PM »

Thanku Vikiji for sharing
Thanks to Roja for lovely reply.
Arz karti hoon..........

Thani hai dil mein ab na milenge kisise hum
Par kya kare ki ho gaye lacharji se hum
Haste to dikhte hai kisi khushnaseeb ko
Rote hai dekh-dekh ke iss bekasi pe hum
Anjan banke tumne nazar jabse pher li
Lagte hai apne-aapko bhi ajanabi se hum!!![\b]


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