* Aaye Hai Hum *

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Bandishon ke saye se nikal aaye hai hum
Mushkil thi rah-guzar sambal aaye hai hum

Dham gut na jaye matlabon ki hawaon mein
Isse pehle woh mausam badal aaye hai hum

Zehar pyar ka bhala kab tak piya karte
Saanp aasthinon ke masal aaye hai hum

Jiske saye mein aur bhi huye daagdar
Badalkar doston woh aanchal aaye hai hum

Jinke kanon ke pardon mein na thi jaan koyi
Unhi ko sunakar apni gazal aaye hai hum

"Roja" aankhon mein na dil mein pyass koyi
Chodkar khwabon ke jungle aaye hai hum

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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2008, 12:22:48 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut khub bahut hi umda wah
roja ji wah. all lines are verry touching








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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2008, 03:50:38 PM »
Nice One Roja sis,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2008, 03:59:24 PM »
Bahut khoob roja  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 28, 2008, 04:06:44 PM »
Bandishon ke saye se nikal aaye hai hum
Mushkil thi rah-guzar sambal aaye hai hum

Dham gut na jaye matlabon ki hawaon mein
Isse pehle woh mausam badal aaye hai hum

Zehar pyar ka bhala kab tak piya karte
Saanp aasthinon ke masal aaye hai hum

Jiske saye mein aur bhi huye daagdar
Badalkar doston woh aanchal aaye hai hum

Jinke kanon ke pardon mein na thi jaan koyi
Unhi ko sunakar apni gazal aaye hai hum

"Roja" aankhon mein na dil mein pyass koyi
Chodkar khwabon ke jungle aaye hai hum



 Applause Applause Bohot khoob Roja
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«Reply #5 on: September 28, 2008, 05:34:20 PM »
Aaye Jo Hum Teri Mehfil Mein, Ruswaa Ho Kar Gaye,.
Paaya Na tha Kuch Bhi Tujhse, Izaat Jo Bachi Thi, Wo Bhi Kho Kar Gaye,.

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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2008, 08:54:22 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut khub bahut hi umda wah
roja ji wah. all lines are verry touching


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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2008, 08:55:35 PM »
Aaye Jo Hum Teri Mehfil Mein, Ruswaa Ho Kar Gaye,.
Paaya Na tha Kuch Bhi Tujhse, Izaat Jo Bachi Thi, Wo Bhi Kho Kar Gaye,.

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Bahut bahut thanks and lovely lines created by you Jaanasheen ji.
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2008, 08:56:34 PM »
Thanks Celmira and Khwaish ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2008, 03:19:32 PM »
Thank You,.
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