Ab aa bhi jaaao !!!!!!!

by Talat on April 14, 2005, 05:41:30 PM
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #360 on: May 12, 2005, 10:19:12 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Shikriya Talat ji ...

meri takmeel mein Hissa hai tumhara bhi buhut
mein agar tum sey na milta to adhoora rehta


bahot  khoob..........talat...............hum  tum........

Mera yeh haal ki hoon jaan se jaane wala
Phir bhi ye waham k woh aata hai aane wala............................
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HumTum
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«Reply #361 on: May 13, 2005, 12:09:11 AM »
kamal hai waheed bhai .. bahoot khoob...

is marhale ko mout bhi kehte hein dosto...
ik Pal men toot jaye jahan zindagi ka saath.
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #362 on: May 17, 2005, 05:09:41 PM »
Hum bichhadte hai to bhuchaal aa jaata hai,
Hum machalte hai to tufaan machal jaata hai,
Humko na karo koshiish badal ne ki,
Hum badalte hai to itihaas badal jaata hai ...
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Talat
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«Reply #363 on: May 19, 2005, 07:13:09 PM »
Bohot Khoob !!!... Waheed...Humtum.....JHL.................. happy9
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Talat
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«Reply #364 on: May 19, 2005, 07:14:07 PM »
Ae zindagi bata mujhe udaas hai ye kaisi
Kuch kami nahin phir ye kami si kyun hai !!
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tajinder
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«Reply #365 on: May 19, 2005, 07:28:46 PM »
ab sukun hai to bhulne mein hai
lekin us shaqs ko bhulaye kaun
aaj fir dil hai kuch udaas udaas
dekhiye aaj yaad aaye kaun kaun
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Talat
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«Reply #366 on: May 20, 2005, 12:56:58 PM »
NIce one tajinder !!!!!!!! ........................... ...
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Aflatoon
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«Reply #367 on: May 20, 2005, 09:06:42 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Ae zindagi bata mujhe udaas hai ye kaisi
Kuch kami nahin phir ye kami si kyun hai !!


wah.....  

ik aap hi ki shayri kinch lati hai is mehfil mein
warna yha aaney ka irada nhi hota ......

kafi acha likhti hai aap ........

woh bna gyi hai kab ka pathar muhey, phir bhi
inn anhkoon mein har pal ik nami si kyun hai !!

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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #368 on: May 20, 2005, 10:41:35 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Bohot Khoob !!!... Waheed...Humtum.....JHL.................. happy9


ur   welcome  humtum  ....talat...........also  nice  written  hum tum .....jhl........talat......... tajinder.....................
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Talat
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«Reply #369 on: May 21, 2005, 11:26:26 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

ur   welcome  humtum  ....talat...........also  nice  written  hum tum .....jhl........talat......... tajinder.....................

Thanks !!  Waheed !!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #370 on: May 21, 2005, 11:29:49 PM »
Quote from: "Aflatoon"

wah.....  

ik aap hi ki shayri kinch lati hai is mehfil mein
warna yha aaney ka irada nhi hota ......

kafi acha likhti hai aap ........

woh bna gyi hai kab ka pathar muhey, phir bhi
inn anhkoon mein har pal ik nami si kyun hai !!



Bohot Shukriya !! Aflatoon !! Is mehfil me aane ka...aur humari shayari pasand karne ka !!!

Well Said !!

Suna hai patharon main bhi dil dhadakte hain
Wo ek dil ya Rab lekin pathar sa kyun hai !!!
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bewafa_ka_vada
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«Reply #371 on: May 21, 2005, 11:58:02 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Ye udaas din ye udaas shaam
Kat ti nahin, ab tum aa jao
Mere aansu awaaz dete hain
Kya unhe tum sun rahe ho ?
Akeli rahguzar pe khadi hoon
Shayad tum yahan se guzro
Ye mere adhure se khwaab
Inko le ke main kahan jaaon
Meri zindagi guzar gayi saraab me
Maine kya paya, tumhi batao
Khwaab dhal gaye aansu ban kar
Bohot hua ab tum aa bhi jaao !!!



  Usual Smile  asak
dard to pina koi aap se sekay

wah wah wah..........


inteha ho gae hai intezzar ki
ab to sharrab nay be hamara sath chod deya hai
ansu pi ke je rahe hai
bohot hua ab to aa bhi ja


to app ka kya  khayal hai is ke baray me talat
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Talat
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«Reply #372 on: May 22, 2005, 12:14:51 AM »
Thanks !!! n achcha likha hai aapne !!!

intezaar main humne khud ko mita diya
mit kar bhi na mila chain, ab aa bhi jaao

ankhain pathra gayi hain raahon pe takte
beqarar hoon main bohot, ab aa bhi jaao
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Talat
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«Reply #373 on: May 23, 2005, 10:30:25 AM »
Hum ko khabar hai ki tum nahin aaoge
Phir bhi dil tadapta hai ki tum aa jaao

Kuch toote hue khwaab hain mere paas
Amaanat hain tumhari, aa ke le jaao !!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #374 on: May 23, 2005, 02:04:41 PM »
wah ...  bahoot khoob !!

ukhad rhi hai sansey meri, bujh rha hai diya
hai yhi akhri tamana baqi !! tum aa jao

ruswa na ho jaye muhoobat apni jahaan mein
rakh ke zamaney ka hi khayaal !! tum aa jao

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