Ab dil manta nhi hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 01, 2011, 12:07:28 AM
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Tumhare bina dil bahut udas aur tanha rehta hai,
per merri ye haqiqat ab dil manta nhi hai,

tumhara hi chehra basa hai merri ankho mein,
aur kisi ki surat ab dil pehchanta nhi hai,

tum tou door ho merri duniya viran padi hai,
tum bin khush rehne bhi ab dil janta nhi hai,

bahut dard hota jab koi apna kehke chhod jata hai,
khamosh rehta hai per kisi se rishta ab dil bandhta nhi hai.........


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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 12:49:05 AM »
BBL jee Aadaab !

Behad apne se ahsaas O khayaal likhe hai aapne Usual Smile
Is dil lubhawane ahsaas O khayaal par daad hazir hai... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 12:57:02 AM »
Ji shukriya parwaaz ji...
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2011, 10:50:23 AM »
Geet---
kamaal ka nagma aapka.
simple shabdo me kamaal ke ehsaas hai ji.
lekin mujhe hi pta nhi ku aapke last line thk se samjh nhi aata sad5
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 10:12:52 PM »
shukriya nirala ji akhri line se merra matlab tha ki ab merra dil khamosh rehna zyada pasand karta hai bajaye kisi se rishta banane k....aksar naye rishto se zindgi ko ek nayi khushi milti hai na..
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2011, 10:21:21 PM »
thanx ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2011, 10:40:27 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2011, 10:57:48 PM »
Bahut Khub Likha Hai Geet Ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2011, 11:24:17 PM »
Bahut shukriya rishi ji n shihab ji...
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