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chodd dee hai ye mahfil tumhare liye
ab ghazal koi kaise likhuN maiN priye
geet gaata tha maiN gungunaata tha maiN
muskaraata naheeN hoNth ab sil liye
cheen lee kyoN haNsee kyaa huaa hai tumheN
kyaa khataa hai huee ye bataa deejiye
bhool jaao bhi ab muskaraao bhi ab
is tarah rooth kar ab na muNh feriye
maine koshish manaane ko kitnaa kiyaa
maiN naheeN jaanta kyaa karuN main priye
yaad aati teree raat sotaa naheeN
paas tum ab naheeN door kyoN ho priye
hai kahaaN zindgee laut aao bhi ab
phir se aakar mujhe ab haNsaa deejiye
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2012, 06:16:41 AM » |
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bhaai main taareef naheen kar saktaa bas duaa kartaa hoon ki tumhaare dil esee hee pyaaree pyaaree ghazlen nikaltee rahen keep it up JIO
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2012, 06:23:34 AM » |
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chodd dee hai ye mahfil tumhare liye
ab ghazal koi kaise likhuN maiN priye
geet gaata tha maiN gungunaata tha maiN
muskaraata naheeN hoNth ab sil liye
cheen lee kyoN haNsee kyaa huaa hai tumheN
kyaa khataa hai huee ye bataa deejiye
bhool jaao bhi ab muskaraao bhi ab
is tarah rooth kar ab na muNh feriye
maine koshish manaane ko kitnaa kiyaa
maiN naheeN jaanta kyaa karuN main priye
yaad aati teree raat sotaa naheeN
paas tum ab naheeN door kyoN ho priye
hai kahaaN zindgee laut aao bhi ab
phir se aakar mujhe ab haNsaa deejiye
jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai........... very very very nice... |
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2012, 06:56:22 AM » |
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bahut umda mkv ji, dhero dad
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2012, 07:16:20 AM » |
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chodd dee hai ye mahfil tumhare liye
Abhii naa jaao chodd kar ke dil abhi bharaa nahee.
ab ghazal koi kaise likhuN maiN priye
mAt likho koi force nahii kar rahaa hai.
geet gaata tha maiN gungunaata tha maiN
Wo bhii bathroom me.
muskaraata naheeN hoNth ab sil liye
To ab khanaa kahaaN se khaaoge merii jaan.
cheen lee kyoN haNsee kyaa huaa hai tumheN
Paganpan ke daure parne suru ho gaye hai.
kyaa khataa hai huee ye bataa deejiye
Raat din mobile pe baat kar-karke wo bahrii ho gayii hai. Kuch bhii kahte raho sunaayi nahii dega.
Merii mano to use chorkar uski chotii bahan pe dorre daalo. Usse bhii pyaari hai.
bhool jaao bhi ab muskaraao bhi ab
is tarah rooth kar ab na muNh feriye
Rooth-wooth ke monh nahii fer rahi hai. Naak bah rahi hai.
Dosri taraf monh ferkar saaf kar rahii hai.
maine koshish manaane ko kitnaa kiyaa
Khaak koshish ki roj ek gulaab ke alaawaa kuch aur lekar gaye kabhii.
Wo bhii mere garden se torkar le jaate the.
Mahaa-kanjus ho kabhi kisii Mall me lejaakar 5-10 hazaar ki soaping karwaa dete, ek dam maan jaati.
maiN naheeN jaanta kyaa karuN main priye
Priye se kyaa poch rahe ho jiyotish se jaakar pocho, kuch na kuch bataa hi dega.
yaad aati teree raat sotaa naheeN
Porri raat to aap baithkar machchar maarte rahte ho to bhalaa neend kab aayegi.
Aur ilzaam dosro ke sar lagaa rahe ho. Aapko Bhagwaan maaf nahee karegaa.
paas tum ab naheeN door kyoN ho priye
Flue ho rahaa hai, esliye
hai kahaaN zindgee laut aao bhi ab
Ye aapke kitni kanyaao se chakkar hai. Ab tak kisii aur ki baat kar rahe the. Aur ab jindagi ko bulaa rahe ho.
phir se aakar mujhe ab haNsaa deejiye
Hansne ke liye larkii ka kyaa karoge.
Apne saare affairs bhabhi ji se sunaa do.
Fir bhabhii ji jhadu aur belan lekar kam se kam 2 din tak aapko hansaati rahegii... Ha ha ha
Bahut payaari, khoobsurat aur dilkash gazal.
Bahut achchii lagii.
Mubarakbaad kabool kijiye
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2012, 07:20:00 AM » |
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chodd dee hai ye mahfil tumhare liye
ab ghazal koi kaise likhuN maiN priye
geet gaata tha maiN gungunaata tha maiN
muskaraata naheeN hoNth ab sil liye
cheen lee kyoN haNsee kyaa huaa hai tumheN
kyaa khataa hai huee ye bataa deejiye
bhool jaao bhi ab muskaraao bhi ab
is tarah rooth kar ab na muNh feriye
maine koshish manaane ko kitnaa kiyaa
maiN naheeN jaanta kyaa karuN main priye
yaad aati teree raat sotaa naheeN
paas tum ab naheeN door kyoN ho priye
hai kahaaN zindgee laut aao bhi ab
phir se aakar mujhe ab haNsaa deejiye
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2012, 08:06:13 AM » |
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waah bohat khoob mkv ji,,, bohat c daad........
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2012, 08:36:12 AM » |
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Wah kya baat hai MKV JI.....
Jab bhi tera hastaa chehra mujhe nazar aata hai
dimaag harkat me aata hai aur sher ban jaata hai
ab jab tak tere honthon pe muskaan na dekhun
tu hi bata mein "ab ghazal koi kaise likhun".....
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2012, 10:18:38 AM » |
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MKV JI hamare pass wo shabad hi nahi jin se ham aap ki likhi es GHAZAL ki tareef ker sakain ...aap ko bahu-bahut badhayi....
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2012, 01:08:51 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2012, 03:12:13 PM » |
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«Reply #12 on: October 19, 2012, 06:10:33 PM » |
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bhaai main taareef naheen kar saktaa bas duaa kartaa hoon ki tumhaare dil esee hee pyaaree pyaaree ghazlen nikaltee rahen keep it up JIO
aapka asheerwaad hi kaafi hai sir |
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«Reply #14 on: October 19, 2012, 07:34:41 PM » |
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chodd dee hai ye mahfil tumhare liye
ab ghazal koi kaise likhuN maiN priye
geet gaata tha maiN gungunaata tha maiN
muskaraata naheeN hoNth ab sil liye
cheen lee kyoN haNsee kyaa huaa hai tumheN
kyaa khataa hai huee ye bataa deejiye
bhool jaao bhi ab muskaraao bhi ab
is tarah rooth kar ab na muNh feriye
maine koshish manaane ko kitnaa kiyaa
maiN naheeN jaanta kyaa karuN main priye
yaad aati teree raat sotaa naheeN
paas tum ab naheeN door kyoN ho priye
hai kahaaN zindgee laut aao bhi ab
phir se aakar mujhe ab haNsaa deejiye
GR8 COMPOSITION MR MKV |
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