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Ab hai mere paas kya
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
Aksar karte rehte hain baatein
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
Din to kat hi jaate hain duniya ki bheed mein
hote hain raat ke saathi
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
Kabhi bhoole se bhi na liya tumne naam mera
karte hain bas tumhari hi baaatein
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
Humkadam rehne ka waada karke door chale gaye kyun
talashti hain tumhe har pal har lamha
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
Kahan kho gaye ho tum ae mere habib
raah dekhti hain har mod pe tumhari
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
Ab hai mere paas kya
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
Aksar karte rehte hain baatein
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2010, 10:16:47 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2010, 12:02:34 PM » |
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Kashish.. Bahoot hi dard bhare alfaz likhe hai.. Bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2010, 12:31:57 PM » |
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Bahut shandaar poem likhi hai Kashish Ji. Nice creation. Dil kaifeeyat ko lafzon mein bahut achhi tarah zahir kiya hai.
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2010, 12:51:42 PM » |
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KYA BAAT HAI KASHISH JI....
SAB KUCH TO LUT GAYA
JAB SE TERA SAATH GAYA
KYUN KI TUNE BEWAFAI
"AB HAI MERE PAAS KYA"
MAIN AUR MERI TANHAYEE....
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2010, 12:54:12 PM » |
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KYA BAAT HAI KASHISH JI....
SAB KUCH TO LUT GAYA
JAB SE TERA SAATH GAYA
KYUN KI TUNE BEWAFAI
"AB HAI MERE PAAS KYA"
MAIN AUR MERI TANHAYEE....
Bahoot Khoob Cara ji ! |
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2010, 01:42:39 PM » |
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Khoobsurat alfaaz hai Kashish di...Itna tanha kaise parr gayi?? Hum hai ne tanhai dhoooorrrrrrr karne ke liye...Well written...
Nice lines Cara jee..
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2010, 01:50:04 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Kashish!!!!
Dard Ki inteha Hai iss Ghazal mein..
Bahut Bahut Khoobsurat!!!!! 
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2010, 08:32:23 AM » |
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Nice One Kashish Ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2010, 01:16:45 PM » |
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Nice
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on eTI community..
