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dard ki iss sachhai ka bayaan kya hoga
aankhon ki inn shabdo.n ka jubaan kya hoga!
mehfil e berukhi par unki ab koi ilzaam kya hoga
bikhar chuke khwabo.n ka koi saranjaam kya hoga!
doob chuki kasti ko saahil ka ab armaan kya hoga
dozakh si iss jeewan ko maut ka ab farmaan kya hoga!
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2010, 07:05:31 AM » |
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hmmm...good 1 KB
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2010, 08:02:10 AM » |
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bahut badiya KBji..
bahut bahut daad...
khush rahen.... mushkurate rahen...
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2010, 08:10:14 AM » |
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lo hum bhi hazir ho gaye Daad dene ko.
mast likha ji aapne.
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seene me hazaar gham chupaye bethe ho
uss par ye muskurahat ka chehra lagaye baithe ho
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2010, 11:45:28 AM » |
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Bahaut khoob mere dost..  Khush rahiye.. |
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2010, 12:04:34 PM » |
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very nice lines kb...
specially d last one...
superb..
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2010, 12:44:51 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2010, 12:51:26 PM » |
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kb ji.....
pata nahi anjaam kya hoga aur iljaam kya hoga......
but ha aap itna touchy likh likh kar hume jarur maar dalenge.....
bahot khub kb ji bht khub......
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manjoor sare iljaam dil se kar chuka hu
bata ab tera farmaan kya hoga
hum to pahli najar me hi fanaa huye
ab aur mout ka farmaan kya hoga
jo tu na ayee ek baar bhi meri kabrr per
to bata waha bhi mujse aarram kya hoga.....
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2010, 01:02:11 PM » |
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Ab kya ilzaam du unko....jo mere they kabhee... Aaj aaye hain wo le ke phool kabra par meri nayi GF k saath
Kaun kambakht kehta hai dafnane k baad jalaaya nahi jaata.... |
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2010, 01:04:26 PM » |
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ye to sahi he but meri bhi sun lo
koun kahta he dafnane ke baad jalaya nahi jata
aur koun kahta he kabrr me dil bahlaya nahi jata...
bina us dilnashii ke to humse
waha bhi araam farmaya nahi jata
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2010, 01:17:01 PM » |
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Ajee karte ho jis se tum behaddh pyaar
Unhe yu kabra mai bulaaya nahi jaata
Khud k aaraam k liye kisi ko rulaaya nahi jaata
Kitne khudgarz ho kisika jeena bhi saha nahi jaata |
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2010, 01:56:14 PM » |
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sukriya aapsab ka padhne aur sarahne ke liye.
bahut dhanyabaad dosto.
Matrix ji aur Kukku Koayal ji
bahut Acchi mehfil aap dono jamai.
behad khubsurat lines aap dono ke.
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kaun kahta hai dafnane ke baad jalaya nahi jaata--superb lines koyal ji.
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sukriya
khus rahiye
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2010, 02:00:45 PM » |
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Matrix ji apke rely aur Koyal ji ke reply was awesome--
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laakh dafna do mere sharir ko
baad uske tere hi seene me dhadkunga
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«Reply #13 on: December 31, 2010, 10:40:33 AM » |
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Bahut Khub KB JI
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