ab kahan log itni siddat se gale milte hain ,,,,,,,,,,sunil

by sunildehgawani on December 17, 2011, 03:25:57 PM
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mila hai mujhe jo muhabbat mein har kisi ko wahi milta hai
                 kahi zeene ki sazaa milti hai kahi marne ka sila milta hai
            
                 bistaroon pe milte hain kahin tairte ansu
                 kahin takiyaa hi faqat seene se laga milta hai  

                 waqt ke kafilon mein ruk gaye din woh muskurane ke
                 jin ankhon mein dekhta hoon nami ka silsila milta hai

                 deewangi mere jaisi jin andheron ki taraf jati hai
                 laut aane ka wahan se rasta kahan milta hai

                 log badle sadi mein aa gaya karwan dil farebi ka
                 ab yahan kaun bhala itni siddat se gale milta hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2011, 03:46:31 PM »
mila hai mujhe jo muhabbat mein har kisi ko wahi milta hai
                 kahi zeene ki sazaa milti hai kahi marne ka sila milta hai
           
                 bistaroon pe milte hain tairte ansu
                 kahin takiyaa hi faqat seene se laga milta hai   

                 waqt ke kafilon mein ruk gaye din woh muskurane ke
                 jin ankhon mein dekhta hoon nami ka silsila milta

                 deewangi mere jaisi jin andheron ki taraf jati hai
                 laut aane ka wahan se rasta kahan milta hai

                 log badle sadi mein aa gaya karwan dil farebi ka
                 ab yahan kaun bhala itni siddat se gale milta hai



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Waah Waah bahut bahut Khoob Sunil ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2011, 04:33:53 PM »
Bahut khoob Sunil
3rd ashar me kuch typing mistake hai.sahi kar dijiye.
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2011, 04:47:45 PM »
KHUB
mila hai mujhe jo muhabbat mein har kisi ko wahi milta hai
                 kahi zeene ki sazaa milti hai kahi marne ka sila milta hai
            
                 bistaroon pe milte hain tairte ansu
                 kahin takiyaa hi faqat seene se laga milta hai  

                 waqt ke kafilon mein ruk gaye din woh muskurane ke
                 jin ankhon mein dekhta hoon nami ka silsila milta

                 deewangi mere jaisi jin andheron ki taraf jati hai
                 laut aane ka wahan se rasta kahan milta hai

                 log badle sadi mein aa gaya karwan dil farebi ka
                 ab yahan kaun bhala itni siddat se gale milta hai

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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2011, 07:34:53 PM »
Sunil Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab achche ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai
aapne.. sabhi khayaal behad sahiN aur khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye .. aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile   

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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2011, 05:15:30 PM »

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Waah Waah bahut bahut Khoob Sunil ji

,,,,THNKS KHUAIS AAPKA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA ,,,AAPNE HAMARI NAZM KO WAQT DIYA ....AUR AHUSLA AFJAI KI ,,,,,YUN HI SATH DETE RAHIYEGA ,,,KHUDA HAFIZ
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2011, 06:37:59 AM »
thkns mkv ji ...aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa ,,nazm par gaur farmane ke liye ,,,aur hausle ki bakhsheesh ke liye ...sath bane rahiye ,,khuda hafiz
Bahut khoob Sunil
3rd ashar me kuch typing mistake hai.sahi kar dijiye.

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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2011, 06:38:54 AM »
thnks manoj ji
KHUB
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2011, 06:42:00 AM »
aapka addaab sar ankhon par parwaaz sahib ,,,apki hauslon ne safaltaon ke raston se kaante hata diye hain ,,,aur safar behad aasaa ho gaya hai ,,,har kadam aapke hausloon ki jaroorat hai hamein,,,,khuda hafiz 
Sunil Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab achche ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai
aapne.. sabhi khayaal behad sahiN aur khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye .. aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile   


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«Reply #9 on: December 19, 2011, 06:44:58 AM »
 Thankyou ! shihab ji hausla dete rahien ..
wah kya kehne bahut bahut khub sunil saheb...

Shad o aabad rahiye...

Shihab
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2011, 07:16:45 AM »
mila hai mujhe jo muhabbat mein har kisi ko wahi milta hai
                 kahi zeene ki sazaa milti hai kahi marne ka sila milta hai
           
                 bistaroon pe milte hain kahin tairte ansu
                 kahin takiyaa hi faqat seene se laga milta hai   

                 waqt ke kafilon mein ruk gaye din woh muskurane ke
                 jin ankhon mein dekhta hoon nami ka silsila milta hai

                 deewangi mere jaisi jin andheron ki taraf jati hai
                 laut aane ka wahan se rasta kahan milta hai

                 log badle sadi mein aa gaya karwan dil farebi ka
                 ab yahan kaun bhala itni siddat se gale milta hai


Hat Off Sunil !!!! ab yahan kaun bhala itni siddat se gale milta hai
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