Ab Mat Aa Tu Mere Karib Ye Khawabo Ki Duniya Phir Se Basane Ke Liye ....

by Kaushal Sharma on October 26, 2012, 04:07:19 AM
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Mene sajde bahut kiya teri khatir ab mein nahi magnta duaon me tujhe apne liye,
Ye hamari mohabbat adhuri thi ise adhrui hi rehne de
Ab mat aa tu mere karib ye khawabo ki duniya phir se basane ke liye ,
 
Mujhe nahi ab koi justju teri godh me sar rakh kar sone ki ,
Ye tote ghar ki bikhri diware hi kafi hain mujhe aasun bahane ke liye,
 
Mere har gham e udashi ki dawa thi tera mujhe bahon bharkar woh tera labo ka mushkurana,
Ab ye sharab_e_jaam ki kafi hain mere har dard_e_zakhm ko bhulane ke liye,
 
Teri aarzu_e_khawahish ko  puri karne ke liye mein apni har khushi ko baich diya,
Ab nahi hain koi kharid'daar mere gham ko kharidne ke liye,
 
Ab mat aa tu mere karib ye khawabo ki duniya phir se basane ke liye ..!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2012, 04:51:25 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2012, 05:23:51 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2012, 12:05:14 PM »
bohat khoob...
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2012, 12:59:30 PM »
Quote from: kapilnarula on October 26, 2012, 04:51:25 AM
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Tah dil se shukriya apka Kapil ji.
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2012, 01:30:40 PM »
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waah waah bahut badiya
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2012, 03:10:40 PM »
so heart touching...
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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2012, 05:42:47 PM »
bahut badhiya Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2012, 07:29:16 PM »
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Kushal Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab, Ahsaas jab dil ko cheer kar nikalte haiN toH auroN ke
dil ko chhute zaroor hai, un ahsaasoN ko satik lafzoN ki zaroorat nahi
hoti aur aapke yeH ahsaas unhi ka aainaa banaye huye haiN... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye, shaayri ko bayaaN karne ke tariqe sikhte rahiye...
kam lafzoN meiN apne ahsaas ko bayaaN karne ki koshish kijiye... aapko
shayari meiN kafi safaltaa mileNgi... Usual Smile

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2012, 01:22:51 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on October 26, 2012, 05:23:51 AM
very nice

Tah dil se shukriya apka Nand ji .
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2012, 01:28:17 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on October 26, 2012, 12:05:14 PM
bohat khoob...

tah dil se shukriya apka Laaliba ji .
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2012, 01:31:32 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on October 26, 2012, 01:30:40 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

waah waah bahut badiya

tah dil se shukriya apka Suman ji ..
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«Reply #12 on: October 27, 2012, 01:32:39 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on October 26, 2012, 03:10:40 PM
so heart touching...

Tah dil se shukriya apka Aqsh ji .
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«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2012, 01:41:12 PM »
Quote from: mkv on October 26, 2012, 05:42:47 PM
bahut badhiya Applause

Tah dil se shukriya apka Mkv ji ..
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«Reply #14 on: October 27, 2012, 01:48:43 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 26, 2012, 07:29:16 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kushal Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab, Ahsaas jab dil ko cheer kar nikalte haiN toH auroN ke
dil ko chhute zaroor hai, un ahsaasoN ko satik lafzoN ki zaroorat nahi
hoti aur aapke yeH ahsaas unhi ka aainaa banaye huye haiN... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye, shaayri ko bayaaN karne ke tariqe sikhte rahiye...
kam lafzoN meiN apne ahsaas ko bayaaN karne ki koshish kijiye... aapko
shayari meiN kafi safaltaa mileNgi... Usual Smile

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Apki hasula afajayi ke liye dil se tah dil se shukriya apka Parwaj sahab ,,,,,,,
Aur sach kar raha hon sir ji aankhe taras jati hain apni shayari me apke comment ke liye bahut khushi hoti is dil ko apke comment ko read kar ke ..
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