Ab rehne bhi do...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on April 14, 2011, 10:46:09 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 16, 2011, 10:13:10 AM »
Quote from: nirala on April 14, 2011, 12:28:49 PM
kabhi dard to kabhi judai aur kabhi khumar e ishq…
geet…
aap ek tarah ki shajadi ho inn 3no section ki…

ab to shayad hi ko alfaaz bache ho jinse aap ko daad de saku…
bas duayen hai jo kabi khatam nai hoti aur mai to wahi dene ko aajata hu aapko…

b happy always
god bless u dear
……………………………
bye

Bahut bahut shukriya nirala ji apke anmol lafzo aur duao k liye..god bless u too take care...
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«Reply #16 on: April 16, 2011, 10:13:51 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on April 14, 2011, 12:34:02 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #17 on: April 16, 2011, 10:14:36 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 14, 2011, 02:04:33 PM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Geet.. bahoot Hi Dard se bari Poetry likhi hai ...bahoot Umda !!1



Bahut shukriya divya ji..
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«Reply #18 on: April 16, 2011, 10:15:32 AM »
Quote from: Imdad on April 14, 2011, 03:14:50 PM
bhut achi shayeri hai. Bilkul dil ki baat zahir kar rehi hai har ek labz.

bahut shukriya imdad ji..
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«Reply #19 on: April 16, 2011, 10:16:13 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on April 14, 2011, 06:50:15 PM
Bahaut dil se nikli hui kalam di..
 Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
Bahut shukriya rahim..
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«Reply #20 on: April 16, 2011, 10:16:54 AM »
Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on April 15, 2011, 04:57:15 AM
bht bht khoob geet ji...

Bahut shukriya priya ji..
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«Reply #21 on: April 16, 2011, 10:18:02 AM »
Quote from: paani on April 15, 2011, 06:10:03 AM
oh ye kya likh diya aap ne.. bhaut hi khub ..
Bahut shukriya paani ji...
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«Reply #22 on: April 16, 2011, 10:19:25 AM »
Quote from: SkykiTears on April 15, 2011, 07:18:15 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohout khoob GEET ji.. LOVE IT..
(http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_images/S/ST/STA/staers/1135640946_girl019.jpg)

plz zara is link par goar farmahiye.. Shukriya.

-SKY-

Bahut shukriya sky ji,sky ji apka diya ye link open nhi ho raha hai....
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«Reply #23 on: April 16, 2011, 10:19:27 AM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 14, 2011, 10:46:09 AM



Main hamesha sochti thi tum merri mhbt ko beparda karoge,
hamari judai k darr ko merre dil se juda karoge,

per har bar main bhul jati hu tum khud ek qaid panchi ho,
tum bhala kya merra bhala karoge,

jab haq hi nhi tumhe apne mutaliq zindgi jine ka,
tou kaise hamari kahani ko tum poora karoge,

tumhari hasrate jab koi sunega nhi tou merre sang khwab kyun sajate ho,
tum khud tou chal doge kisi aur raah pe sath hi merri zindgi ko bhi tabah karoge,

main kyun apna sab kuch bhula kar tum sang mhbt nibhau,
umar bhar merra sath dene ka kya tum wada karoge,

ab rehne bhi do merre ajnabi tumhari baate mujhpe beasar hai,
yakin hai mujhe tum jafa mujhse aur baaki sabse wafa karoge.........



 muddato baad aakhir use pahchaan liya,
safar-e-mohabbat mein pyaar ko kareeb se jaan liya,

 yaqeen maane broken ji aap ki ye poem mujhe sab se alag lagi isliye do line mainne aapki nazar kiya.
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«Reply #24 on: April 16, 2011, 10:22:10 AM »
Quote from: Anshumali on April 15, 2011, 02:47:07 PM
Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Broken Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad ... !

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen ... !

Bahut shukriya naresh ji..
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«Reply #25 on: April 16, 2011, 10:39:11 AM »
Quote from: adil bechain on April 16, 2011, 10:19:27 AM

 muddato baad aakhir use pahchaan liya,
safar-e-mohabbat mein pyaar ko kareeb se jaan liya,

 yaqeen maane broken ji aap ki ye poem mujhe sab se alag lagi isliye do line mainne aapki nazar kiya.

Bahut shukriya adil ji apke lafzo ki gehrai bakhbi mehsus hui bahut bahut shukriya apna kimti waqt merri kavita ko dene k liye...
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