Ab rehne bhi do...Geet...

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Main hamesha sochti thi tum merri mhbt ko beparda karoge,
hamari judai k darr ko merre dil se juda karoge,

per har bar main bhul jati hu tum khud ek qaid panchi ho,
tum bhala kya merra bhala karoge,

jab haq hi nhi tumhe apne mutaliq zindgi jine ka,
tou kaise hamari kahani ko tum poora karoge,

tumhari hasrate jab koi sunega nhi tou merre sang khwab kyun sajate ho,
tum khud tou chal doge kisi aur raah pe sath hi merri zindgi ko bhi tabah karoge,

main kyun apna sab kuch bhula kar tum sang mhbt nibhau,
umar bhar merra sath dene ka kya tum wada karoge,

ab rehne bhi do merre ajnabi tumhari baate mujhpe beasar hai,
yakin hai mujhe tum jafa mujhse aur baaki sabse wafa karoge.........
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2011, 04:19:07 PM »
hye geetji..... ese laga jaise main hi kisi ko kaha ho ye sab.... kitni dil se nikli hui baat hai.. wah wah.....
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2011, 04:20:22 PM »
hye geetji..... ese laga jaise main hi kisi ko kaha ho ye sab.... kitni dil se nikli hui baat hai.. wah wah.....

Bahut shukriya manju mann ji..
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2011, 05:09:49 PM »
Wah Geet ji,bahut khoob,dard bhari peshkash,bahut pasand aayi,keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2011, 05:27:34 PM »
Wah Geet ji,bahut khoob,dard bhari peshkash,bahut pasand aayi,keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut shukriya madhu ji..
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2011, 05:31:57 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob geetji

Huemsha Di tarah Dil Diyan Galaan Lafza Vich
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2011, 05:35:01 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob geetji

Huemsha Di tarah Dil Diyan Galaan Lafza Vich
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut shukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2011, 05:58:49 PM »
kabhi dard to kabhi judai aur kabhi khumar e ishq…
geet…
aap ek tarah ki shajadi ho inn 3no section ki…

ab to shayad hi ko alfaaz bache ho jinse aap ko daad de saku…
bas duayen hai jo kabi khatam nai hoti aur mai to wahi dene ko aajata hu aapko…

b happy always
god bless u dear
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bye
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2011, 07:34:33 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Geet.. bahoot Hi Dard se bari Poetry likhi hai ...bahoot Umda !!1

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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2011, 08:44:50 PM »
bhut achi shayeri hai. Bilkul dil ki baat zahir kar rehi hai har ek labz.
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«Reply #10 on: April 15, 2011, 12:20:15 AM »
Bahaut dil se nikli hui kalam di..
 Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 15, 2011, 10:27:15 AM »
bht bht khoob geet ji...
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2011, 11:40:03 AM »
oh ye kya likh diya aap ne.. bhaut hi khub ..
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«Reply #13 on: April 15, 2011, 12:48:15 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohout khoob GEET ji.. LOVE IT..
(http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_images/S/ST/STA/staers/1135640946_girl019.jpg)

plz zara is link par goar farmahiye.. Shukriya.


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«Reply #14 on: April 15, 2011, 08:17:07 PM »


Main hamesha sochti thi tum merri mhbt ko beparda karoge,
hamari judai k darr ko merre dil se juda karoge,

per har bar main bhul jati hu tum khud ek qaid panchi ho,
tum bhala kya merra bhala karoge,

jab haq hi nhi tumhe apne mutaliq zindgi jine ka,
tou kaise hamari kahani ko tum poora karoge,

tumhari hasrate jab koi sunega nhi tou merre sang khwab kyun sajate ho,
tum khud tou chal doge kisi aur raah pe sath hi merri zindgi ko bhi tabah karoge,

main kyun apna sab kuch bhula kar tum sang mhbt nibhau,
umar bhar merra sath dene ka kya tum wada karoge,

ab rehne bhi do merre ajnabi tumhari baate mujhpe beasar hai,
yakin hai mujhe tum jafa mujhse aur baaki sabse wafa karoge.........


Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Broken Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad ... !

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen ... !
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