Ab Tere Milne Me Woh Pehli Si Surat Na Rahi...........Touhid

by Mohammad Touhid on March 04, 2012, 06:37:27 PM
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Ab tere milne me pheli si wo surat na rahi.,
Khokhala ho gaya akhlakh mohabbt na rahi...,

Haal matlab se kabhi puchh liya karte hai,,
Warna logo ki nigaho me marawwat na rahi,...

Ab kaha ush ki nigaho ka lutf-o-karam.,
Sach to ye hai ke use meri zarurat na rahi...

Narm palko se nigaho se jise chhuta tha,.
Ush k daman me wohi anchhui daulat na rahi..,

Tod dena tha usse ahad-e-wafa tod diya.,
Mere ish tute huye dil me bhi chahat na rahi..,

Wo mere bare me soche usse mouka kab hai.,
Aur mai sochu usse mujhko bhi fursat na rahi..,

Khilti kaliyon se raha hai mera rishta Touhid.,
Mujhko todte huye phoolo se to gurbat na rahi,,,
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2012, 07:03:32 PM »
waa waa waa kya khub lika ji.
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2012, 07:22:57 PM »
Quote from: ~Aatish~ on March 04, 2012, 07:03:32 PM
waa waa waa kya khub lika ji.
Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriya aatish sahab... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2012, 03:51:09 AM »
Tauhid bhai is shaandaar peshkash kee taaeef men mere pass lafz naheen hain bas is tootee footee daad ko hee ziyaadaa samajhnaa.bahut bahut khoob hazaaron daad
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2012, 04:29:39 AM »
boht khub kaha tauheed ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2012, 04:51:07 AM »
bahut khub touhidji

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2012, 10:19:30 AM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on March 04, 2012, 06:37:27 PM


Ab tere milne me pheli si wo surat na rahi.,
Khokhala ho gaya akhlakh mohabbt na rahi...,

Haal matlab se kabhi puchh liya karte hai,,
Warna logo ki nigaho me marawwat na rahi,...

Ab kaha ush ki nigaho ka lutf-o-karam.,
Sach to ye hai ke use meri zarurat na rahi...

Narm palko se nigaho se jise chhuta tha,.
Ush k daman me wohi anchhui daulat na rahi..,

Tod dena tha usse ahad-e-wafa tod diya.,
Mere ish tute huye dil me bhi chahat na rahi..,

Wo mere bare me soche usse mouka kab hai.,
Aur mai sochu usse mujhko bhi fursat na rahi..,

Khilti kaliyon se raha hai mera rishta Touhid.,
Mujhko todte huye phoolo se to qurbat na rahi,,,




waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2012, 11:13:19 AM »
Touhid Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab waah jee waah bahut khoob..
kafi umdaa aur dilfareb kalaam kahi hai...

Sabhi ashaaroN ke ahsaas O khayaal behad khoob rahe..

Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2012, 11:40:14 AM »
bahottttttt khoobb Tauhid bahot khoob
daad daad daad
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2012, 12:16:13 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on March 05, 2012, 03:51:09 AM
Tauhid bhai is shaandaar peshkash kee taaeef men mere pass lafz naheen hain bas is tootee footee daad ko hee ziyaadaa samajhnaa.bahut bahut khoob hazaaron daad

saini sahab aapka bahut bahut shukriya.. Usual Smile

aap jaise umda shayar se daad pakar hamare ghazal ki khubsurati badh gayi hai.. waqt dene ka bahut bahut shukriya janab... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2012, 12:19:08 PM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on March 04, 2012, 06:37:27 PM


Ab tere milne me pheli si wo surat na rahi.,
Khokhala ho gaya akhlakh mohabbt na rahi...,

Haal matlab se kabhi puchh liya karte hai,,
Warna logo ki nigaho me marawwat na rahi,...

Ab kaha ush ki nigaho ka lutf-o-karam.,
Sach to ye hai ke use meri zarurat na rahi...

Narm palko se nigaho se jise chhuta tha,.
Ush k daman me wohi anchhui daulat na rahi..,

Tod dena tha usse ahad-e-wafa tod diya.,
Mere ish tute huye dil me bhi chahat na rahi..,

Wo mere bare me soche usse mouka kab hai.,
Aur mai sochu usse mujhko bhi fursat na rahi..,

Khilti kaliyon se raha hai mera rishta Touhid.,
Mujhko todte huye phoolo se to gurbat na rahi,,,




Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Touhid Ji Lajawab Likha Hai Aapne..

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Har Ek A'shaar Lajawab!!!

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«Reply #11 on: March 05, 2012, 12:27:29 PM »

Touhid Sahab,

Bahut dino ke baad aapko
padha hai bahut khoobsoorat
waah waah..kya kahne..

Dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen.

Apna ek sher aapki nazr kar raha hoon....

"bhejna kar ke saikadoN purze
 khat ka ye bhee jawaab hai koyee"

                      ---'Raqeeb'

Khuda Hafez..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2012, 04:14:07 PM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on March 04, 2012, 06:37:27 PM


Ab tere milne me pheli si wo surat na rahi.,
Khokhala ho gaya akhlakh mohabbt na rahi...,  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Haal matlab se kabhi puchh liya karte hai,,
Warna logo ki nigaho me marawwat na rahi,...   Applause

Ab kaha ush ki nigaho ka lutf-o-karam.,
Sach to ye hai ke use meri zarurat na rahi...   Applause Applause Applause Applause

Narm palko se nigaho se jise chhuta tha,.
Ush k daman me wohi anchhui daulat na rahi..,    Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tod dena tha usse ahad-e-wafa tod diya.,
Mere ish tute huye dil me bhi chahat na rahi..,  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wo mere bare me soche usse mouka kab hai.,
Aur mai sochu usse mujhko bhi fursat na rahi..,  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khilti kaliyon se raha hai mera rishta Touhid.,
Mujhko todte huye phoolo se to gurbat na rahi,,,  Applause Applause Applause Applause


Bahut khoob Touhid ji
bahut dio ke baad is touhid ne kuch likha hai..kahi so gaye the aap..aaj padhkar dil khush hi gaya. aise hi likhiye janaab..api pahchaa banaaye rakhiye..
khush rahiye..
sach me dhoom macha diya appki peshkash ne Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2012, 06:35:26 PM »
Quote from: saahill on March 05, 2012, 04:29:39 AM
boht khub kaha tauheed ji

sath dene ka bahut bahut shukriya saahil sahab... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2012, 06:36:12 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on March 05, 2012, 04:51:07 AM
bahut khub touhidji

 Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriya mann ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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