Achha ho Agar.... (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on August 14, 2007, 07:19:15 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 21, 2007, 04:51:02 AM »
Excellent Shikha...
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«Reply #16 on: August 21, 2007, 03:22:42 PM »
Thanks a lot... Pooja di, Rajbir, Roja, Sahiba, Samnoj (Ji) Puzzled !, Meena, Ricky, Manav and Aryaan... Usual Smile

Very Nice Addition Manav... =D>
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«Reply #17 on: August 21, 2007, 05:57:04 PM »
rasm-e-ulfat niubha jaate to acha tha
mujhe khaak me mila jaate to acha tha
dunya ab taane deti hai teri jafao per
kash tum mujhe mita jaate to acha tha
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«Reply #18 on: August 21, 2007, 06:01:46 PM »
shikha di.. waise sab itni tarif kar chuke hai.. par phir bhi hum apne alfaaz mea kuch kahenge

Shikha Di.. tussi great ho... kya kamal ka likha hai.. dard k ehsaas ko bakkobi darshaya hai apne is kavita mea... wonderful creation

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«Reply #19 on: August 21, 2007, 06:17:20 PM »
Thanks a lot Divya...  

Quote from: "samnoj"
rasm-e-ulfat niubha jaate to acha tha
mujhe khaak me mila jaate to acha tha
dunya ab taane deti hai teri jafao per
kash tum mujhe mita jaate to acha tha



Waah Waah... Samnoj JI bahut hi achha likha hai aapne... Usual Smile


Kaash ke tumse muhabbat naa ki hoti humne,
Begunaah dil ko yun saza naa di hoti humne...
Ek baar mein humari jaan le leti bewafaai teri,
Achha hota Kiston mein maut naa di hoti tumne...
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«Reply #20 on: August 21, 2007, 06:28:58 PM »
bahut ache shikha

aashiki apni ajab dastaan ban gayi
bawafa samjhe the jise bewafa ban gayi
kal tak jo her pal dukh sukh me shareek tha
aaj wo hi gulbadan dushman-e-jaan ban gayi
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«Reply #21 on: August 22, 2007, 09:29:21 AM »
Thanks Shikha


aapki kalam mein bohaat junoon hai samnoj, keep up the spirit !!!
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«Reply #22 on: August 22, 2007, 03:49:05 PM »
thanx Manav....

aap sath dete rahiye hum yu hi likhte rahege
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