Achha ho Agar.... (Shikha):Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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Gumnaam ho jaayein to achha hai,
Hum kahin kho jaayein to achha hai…
Niraash hone ki aadat na thi, magar,
Ab Hataash ho jaayein to achha hai…

Yeh socha hi nahin ki begunaahi ka,
Humse bhi sabab poocheinge sabhi,
Sawaalon ke ghero mein koi khud,
Apna Jawaab ho jaayein to achha hai…

Chehre ko sehaj bana kar rakha sada,
Laakh bhawar beshak guzre yahan se,
Ginne hi na humne ashkon ke mausam,
Ab Iska Hisaab ho jaayein to achha hai…

Patthar dekhe hai dosto ke haaton mein,
Khanjar mehsoos kiye hai baaton mein,
Jeena lagne laga jo duswaar to socha kiye,
Kaash hum laash ho jaayein to achha hai…

Ungliyaan uthne lagi hai dekhiye to zara,
Khushion par bhi jaise koi pehra laga hai,
Hans kar jee chuke tujhe e Zindagi bahut,
Bas Ab Udaas ho jaayein to achha hai…


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Talat

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2007, 07:21:30 PM »

Its really beautiful Shikha.....bohot bohot achcha likha hai =D> =D>


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Shikha12

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2007, 07:22:38 PM »

Thanks Talat... Usual Smile

Your appreciation means a lot to me...


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_Vicky_

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2007, 08:45:09 PM »

Wah Ji Wah..!! Kya Baat Hai.. Kamaal Kar diya aapne.. Usual Smile

Bahut Unchi Soch ke Sath Likha Hai aapne..!!! Dard ko Bakhoobi Pesh Bhi Kiya hai.. ! Usual Smile

Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob... =D> =D> =D> =D>

Vicky


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khwahish

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Re: Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #4 on: August 14, 2007, 08:53:34 PM »

BAHOOT KHOOB SHIKHAJI...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE..KAAS KARKE YEH LINES...DARD SE BHARI HAI =D> =D> =D>

Yeh socha hi nahin ki begunaahi ka,
Humse bhi sabab poocheinge sabhi,
Sawaalon ke ghero mein koi khud,
Apna Jawaab ho jaayein to achha hai

Patthar dekhe hai dosto ke haaton mein,
Khanjar mehsoos kiye hai baaton mein,
Jeena lagne laga jo duswaar to socha kiye,
Kaash hum laash ho jaayein to achha hai…


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Shikha12

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2007, 09:49:43 PM »

Thanks a lot Vicky... Usual Smile

Its always nice to see your Comments... Usual Smile

Thanks a lot Khwaish... Usual Smile

for your appreciation and liking my Poem... You can Call me Shikha :D There's no need of "Ji".. Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2007, 10:16:06 PM »

wah wah wah!!! too Good Shikha... Last ke do pahre to kamal ke likhe hai... bahoot hi acha likha hai....

apke singi ka text bhi bahoot sahi hai....

Good Job!!!


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Rajbir

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2007, 10:55:23 PM »

Shikha

Too good ! Excellent ! Marvellous ! Behtareen ! =D> =D> =D>

Kya dard ki feelings hoti hain tumhari shayari mein sad5

Tum plzzzzzzzz aise he likhti raha karo !

Dekho kaise sabne tumhare talent ko saraha hai.

Thanks for listening to me(or someone else) finally! Puzzled !


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Roja

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2007, 04:19:14 PM »

Shikha... same as Raj said...

Wonderful creation... =D>


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Sahiba Zehra

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2007, 12:25:34 AM »

bohot acha hai
ab hum tali bajaye to acha hai

:D :D :D


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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2007, 04:24:04 PM »

shikha ji bahut hi khoobsurat andaz me likha hai . . .

insha-allah aap isi trah likhte rahegi


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Re: Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2007, 07:12:23 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Patthar dekhe hai dosto ke haaton mein,
Khanjar mehsoos kiye hai baaton mein,
Jeena lagne laga jo duswaar to socha kiye,
Kaash hum laash ho jaayein to achha hai…

Ungliyaan uthne lagi hai dekhiye to zara,
Khushion par bhi jaise koi pehra laga hai,
Hans kar jee chuke tujhe e Zindagi bahut,
Bas Ab Udaas ho jaayein to achha hai…

wonderful.... yeh lines apki to bohot hi achi hai!!!


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Ricky

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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2007, 09:07:46 AM »

Nice work !
Everyone already praised it. I too join them.


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Manav Mehra

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Re: Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2007, 10:54:28 AM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

bohaat khoob Shikha ji.

shor-e-faryad ka na ab usko asar
chahyi ghuttan ki badli har taraf

chalyein zindagi,andhera ho jis taraf
kab tak bhategi,mere sung tu,iss kadar

na aasma naseeb huya tujhe "manav"
dharti bhi sab teri nikli banjhar

na koi sawal,na koi jawab mangega phir
Maut ka sakoon jab khilega tere chehre par


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Achha ho Agar.....

«Reply #14 on: August 20, 2007, 04:50:16 PM »

bahut ache manav


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