Adat si ho gai hai

by Pooja on December 11, 2009, 08:22:42 PM
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Socha tha phir kabhi dard main nahi likhugi... magar ..

Khud se ladne ki adat ho gai hai
Khud he khud ka dil dukhane ki adat se ho gai hai

Armaan hai kaya, kuch bhi nahi soch he to hai
Soch mai armaano ko harane ke adat si ho gai hai

Khushi mile to kyun ro deti hai yah meri ankhein
Shayad ankhon ko bhi ro dene ki adat si ho gai hai

Jeevan hai chalne ka naam, Pooja chalti he jayegi
Jeevan raah mai aoro ko apna bana kar, dil dukhane ki adat si ho gai hai…..
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2009, 08:29:59 PM »
Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2009, 10:02:15 PM »
to gud pooja ji...

Khushi mile to kyun ro deti hai yah meri ankhein
Shayad ankhon ko bhi ro dene ki adat si ho gai hai


bahut hi khoob lines likhi hai apne..Applause Applause Applause Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2009, 04:08:58 AM »
Wah-wah.Pooja-di kya baat hai...bahoot khoobsoorat kalaam hai aapka..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapko achha likhne ki Pooja-di aadat se ho gai hai
Hamko padh kar taliyen bajaane ki aadat se ho gai hai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Unke har gunah ko bhulne ki ab hame aadat se ho gai hai
Ashqkon ko naynon mai chhupa,muskurane ki aadat se ho gai hai...
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

Socha tha phir kabhi dard main nahi likhugi... magar ..

Khud se ladne ki adat ho gai hai
Khud he khud ka dil dukhane ki adat se ho gai hai

Armaan hai kaya, kuch bhi nahi soch he to hai
Soch mai armaano ko harane ke adat si ho gai hai

Khushi mile to kyun ro deti hai yah meri ankhein
Shayad ankhon ko bhi ro dene ki adat si ho gai hai

Jeevan hai chalne ka naam, Pooja chalti he jayegi
Jeevan raah mai aoro ko apna bana kar, dil dukhane ki adat si ho gai hai…..

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_Vicky_
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2009, 06:05:39 AM »
Wah Kya baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Dil Ke Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai.. Waqai Khud Ko Dard Dena Bhi Ek Aadat Si Hai.. Applause Applause



Likhne To Baitha Tha Khushiyon Ke Lamhaaton Ko
Ashqon Ne Kaagaz Ko Dard-o-Gam Se Bhigo Diya....!!!




**~** Mann **~**
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2009, 07:00:04 AM »
Bahut khoob Pooja ji,Geet ji,Koyal ji ,Mann ji.kamaal ke likha aap sabhi ne. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2009, 06:27:13 AM »
Waah Kya baat hai Pooja di.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

Good lines Vicky!
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2009, 03:05:08 PM »
Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Pooja Ji Aapne
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2009, 05:32:03 PM »
Lagta hai Madhu-di aapko bhi meri lines ko sarhane ki aadat se ho gayee hai.......Thanks a lot di.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Bahut khoob Pooja ji,Geet ji,Koyal ji ,Mann ji.kamaal ke likha aap sabhi ne. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: December 31, 2009, 01:45:17 AM »
Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji
Aakhir Ki Line Humne Bahut Achhi Lagi Ji...

Good Job...


Thanks Shihab ji!!

Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji

Shukaria Rajesh ji

to gud pooja ji...

Khushi mile to kyun ro deti hai yah meri ankhein
Shayad ankhon ko bhi ro dene ki adat si ho gai hai


bahut hi khoob lines likhi hai apne..Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks BBL!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: December 31, 2009, 01:48:24 AM »
Wah-wah.Pooja-di kya baat hai...bahoot khoobsoorat kalaam hai aapka..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapko achha likhne ki Pooja-di aadat se ho gai hai
Hamko padh kar taliyen bajaane ki aadat se ho gai hai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Unke har gunah ko bhulne ki ab hame aadat se ho gai hai
Ashqkon ko naynon mai chhupa,muskurane ki aadat se ho gai hai...
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile


SO SWEET OF YOU KOYAL...

Milati hai khushia aor yeh dil jaata hai ghabraah
khud he khud ko, khushio se juda karne ki adat si ho gai hai

Bahoot chaha na likhe dard mai, kalam apni bhi li rok
lagta hai magar ab yah,
Rab ko bhi humse dard mai likhwane ki adat si ho gai hai..

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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: December 31, 2009, 01:48:50 AM »
Wah Kya baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Dil Ke Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai.. Waqai Khud Ko Dard Dena Bhi Ek Aadat Si Hai.. Applause Applause



Likhne To Baitha Tha Khushiyon Ke Lamhaaton Ko
Ashqon Ne Kaagaz Ko Dard-o-Gam Se Bhigo Diya....!!!




**~** Mann **~**


wah kaya baat hai maan ji... bahoot khoob!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: December 31, 2009, 01:50:20 AM »
Bahut khoob Pooja ji,Geet ji,Koyal ji ,Mann ji.kamaal ke likha aap sabhi ne. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Madhu!!

Waah Kya baat hai Pooja di.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

Good lines Vicky!

Thansk Sophi!


bahot khoob likha hai aapne Pooja ji
behad achi kavita

Shukaria Kaash ji!!!
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #13 on: December 31, 2009, 08:09:32 AM »
Tahe dil se Shukriya Pooja-di... icon_flower

Baddo.n ko pranaam kar aashirwaad pane ki aadat se ho gayee hai
Likhna aata ho ya nahi aata ho likhne ki aadat se ho gayee hai


Dard se abhee jeevan mai pada he nahi hai koi vaasta
Kalpana ke ghode kaise kahaan doudaun janti nahi raasta




SO SWEET OF YOU KOYAL...

Milati hai khushia aor yeh dil jaata hai ghabraah
khud he khud ko, khushio se juda karne ki adat si ho gai hai

Bahoot chaha na likhe dard mai, kalam apni bhi li rok
lagta hai magar ab yah,
Rab ko bhi humse dard mai likhwane ki adat si ho gai hai..


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