Aitbaar nahi raha ...

by NewYorker on August 23, 2005, 05:31:20 PM
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Unke karmo ka main hoon barson se muntazar
ho gaya ye karam mujh pe, aitbaar nahi raha

Awaz de raha hoon patharon ke seher main
tha woh bhi kabhi khuda, aitbaar nahi raha

Takaraoge sir patharon se, to aur kya hoga
nikal aayega lahoo bhi, aitbaar nahi raha

Barson se sambhal rakh tha iss dil ko maine
abb uss per bhi mujhko, aitbaar nahi raha

Ho gaye the hum unn julfon ke aaseer
wahi julf banegi nagin, aitbaar nahi raha

Khaaye fhareb itne, wafa-e-beemar nahi raha
abb hume khud pe hi, aitbaar nahi raha
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2005, 05:42:20 PM »
Quote from: "NewYorker"
Awaz de raha hoon patharon ke seher main
tha woh bhi kabhi khuda, aitbaar nahi raha



yeh acchi lagi mujhe .... !!!

...

Lauta do tum aitbaar bhi mera
jee nahi ke seeyun dobara yeh katra
baas sulagti rahigi dil main tammana
milta kabhi to mujhe saath tera
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2005, 05:43:19 PM »
tu nahi tu zamana badal gaya hai kuch iss tarah se ke aab
good one NY

fuloon ko bagh se , ghataon ko barsaat se pyaar nahi raha......
meri aakhein ho gayi hai pathaar tera intzaar karte karte.....
aab tujhe dekh paunga kabhi inn patharoon se inn par aitbaar nahi raha....



lolzzz.......achha nai hai
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2005, 05:52:05 PM »
Thanx........Tosha-ji ( Puzzled ! ) &  ~PRINCE~

Chai hain unki berukhi bun ke dard seene main
hotain hai kuch zakhm teere-e-nazar, aitbaar nahi raha
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2005, 06:26:45 PM »
milalo dil se dil
hai mujhe aitbaat tum par
jeena bin tum nahi mumkin
dil haara hai tum par

...
accha likha hai prince ... !!!
...
phoolo ko bageche se
ghatayon ko barsaat se
jab pyaar he na raha
kaise karlun aitbaar tum pe
jo aab khud pe aitbaat na raha
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2005, 11:36:19 PM »
THANKSSSSSSSS...l0l.............................. ................................................. .
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2005, 04:00:43 PM »
Quote from: "NewYorker"
Unke karmo ka main hoon barson se muntazar
ho gaya ye karam mujh pe, aitbaar nahi raha

Awaz de raha hoon patharon ke seher main
tha woh bhi kabhi khuda, aitbaar nahi raha

Takaraoge sir patharon se, to aur kya hoga
nikal aayega lahoo bhi, aitbaar nahi raha

Barson se sambhal rakh tha iss dil ko maine
abb uss per bhi mujhko, aitbaar nahi raha

Ho gaye the hum unn julfon ke aaseer
wahi julf banegi nagin, aitbaar nahi raha

Khaaye fhareb itne, wafa-e-beemar nahi raha
abb hume khud pe hi, aitbaar nahi raha


wowwwwww NY ji...aaj DARD me bhi kamal kar diya apne!  :wink:
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2005, 05:17:47 PM »
wah new yorker ji,very well written.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2005, 05:22:07 PM »
very  nice  Ny.............  Tosha.........Prince...................
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2005, 03:18:13 AM »
Thanx a lot Waheed .......... !!
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2005, 01:16:02 PM »
nice n gr8 one ny janab aap aur dard bahari shayari shock Shocked but nice work
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2009, 08:35:33 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2009, 08:50:05 AM »
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2009, 09:08:41 AM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause
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