|
Amanush...
Guest
|
Yaha zindagi phoulon ka bistar ban jaata hai
Jab tum jeisse ek ajnabi yaawar ban jaata hai
Do kadam saath mila kar jo bhi raah par chale
To kuch der ke liye wo humsafar ban jaata hai
Toum bhi hamein apna lo kuch lamhein ke liye
Iss bazm mein lagta hai dosti amar ban jaata hai
Berukhi aur nafrat se ye duniya hai bhaDi padi
Heera bhi yahan to kabhi patthar ban jaata hai
Khudrat ka khel 'Mushkil' hai zara pehchaan.na
Kaun jaane kab kaun tukra e jigar ban jaata haiAmanush... 
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
thycreator
Guest
|
 |
«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2005, 03:01:25 PM » |
|
Nice one Amanuch.............good work.........
Iss dil ki dhakan tadapti hai,aa gale lag ja,
Dil ki tanhai machalti hai, aa gale lag ja,
Kab talak ye tadap ye bechaini ka aalam ho,
Ab toh dhadkan bhi behekti hai, aa gale lag ja...
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Meena
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2005, 05:08:20 PM » |
|
wah chachuuuuuuuuuu!!!!
"Do kadam saath mila kar jo bhi raah par chale
To kuch der ke liye wo humsafar ban jaata hai
Berukhi aur nafrat se ye duniya bhaDi padi hai
Heera bhi yahan to kabhi patthar ban jaata hai "
yeh liens to mind blowing hai!!!!!!!!!!!
gud one too creator ji!!!
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Aryaan
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2005, 06:25:06 PM » |
|
Yaha zindagi phoulon ka bistar ban jaata hai
Jab tum jeisse ek ajnabi yaawar ban jaata hai
Do kadam saath mila kar jo bhi raah par chale
To kuch der ke liye wo humsafar ban jaata hai
Toum bhi hamein apna lo kuch lamhein ke liye
Iss bazm mein lagta hai dosti amar ban jaata hai
Berukhi aur nafrat se ye duniya bhaDi padi hai
Heera bhi yahan to kabhi patthar ban jaata hai
Khudrat ka khel pehchaan.na zara ‘Mushkil’ hai
Kaun jaane kab kaun tukra e jigar ban jaata haiAmanush... Bohat khoob Amanush....& Nice One thycreator.... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
dolly
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2005, 06:26:11 PM » |
|
wah chachuuuuuuuuuu!!!!
"Do kadam saath mila kar jo bhi raah par chale
To kuch der ke liye wo humsafar ban jaata hai
Berukhi aur nafrat se ye duniya bhaDi padi hai
Heera bhi yahan to kabhi patthar ban jaata hai "
yeh liens to mind blowing hai!!!!!!!!!!!
gud one too creator ji!!! nice Amaanush.......................very touchy lines............. Nice Thy............ ankhon ka dhoka hai ya taqdeer ka likha... yahan phoolon mein bhi kaanton ka bichona nazar ata hai.... umadte badalon ko dekhein jab gaur se.... har badal apne aap mein Tanha nazar aata hai..... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Aryaan
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2005, 06:30:24 PM » |
|
ankhon ka dhoka hai ya taqdeer ka likha...
yahan phoolon mein bhi kaanton ka bichona nazar ata hai....
umadte badalon ko dekhein jab gaur se....
har badal apne aap mein Tanha nazar aata hai.....
Good One Dolly....... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
dolly
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2005, 06:38:11 PM » |
|
Yaha zindagi phoulon ka bistar ban jaata hai
Jab tum jeisse ek ajnabi yaawar ban jaata hai
Do kadam saath mila kar jo bhi raah par chale
To kuch der ke liye wo humsafar ban jaata hai
Toum bhi hamein apna lo kuch lamhein ke liye
Iss bazm mein lagta hai dosti amar ban jaata hai
Berukhi aur nafrat se ye duniya bhaDi padi hai
Heera bhi yahan to kabhi patthar ban jaata hai
Khudrat ka khel pehchaan.na zara ‘Mushkil’ hai
Kaun jaane kab kaun tukra e jigar ban jaata haiAmanush... I m so sorry Amaanush ji....galti se Meena sis ki post quote ho gayee..... Urs very nice......... Sorry Meena sis...... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
dolly
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2005, 06:39:11 PM » |
|
ankhon ka dhoka hai ya taqdeer ka likha...
yahan phoolon mein bhi kaanton ka bichona nazar ata hai....
umadte badalon ko dekhein jab gaur se....
har badal apne aap mein Tanha nazar aata hai.....
Good One Dolly....... Thank u ARYAANJI..... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Talat
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2005, 07:06:32 PM » |
|
Bohot khoob Amanush ...... Amit ...... !!!!!!!!!!!
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
nidhi_yadein
Umda Shayar
Rau: 2
 Offline
Gender: 
Waqt Bitaya:1 days, 7 hours and 46 minutes.
~ nidhi ~
Posts: 5725 Member Since: Nov 2004
|
|
|
«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2005, 07:10:35 PM » |
|
Yaha zindagi phoulon ka bistar ban jaata hai
Jab tum jeisse ek ajnabi yaawar ban jaata hai
Do kadam saath mila kar jo bhi raah par chale
To kuch der ke liye wo humsafar ban jaata hai
Toum bhi hamein apna lo kuch lamhein ke liye
Iss bazm mein lagta hai dosti amar ban jaata hai
Berukhi aur nafrat se ye duniya bhaDi padi hai
Heera bhi yahan to kabhi patthar ban jaata hai
Khudrat ka khel pehchaan.na zara ‘Mushkil’ hai
Kaun jaane kab kaun tukra e jigar ban jaata haiAmanush... wah amanush ji,bohat accha likha hai |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Talat
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2005, 07:16:10 PM » |
|
Wo ajnabi hai magar phir bhi apna sa lagta hai
Jaane kyun jeevan mujhe ek sapna sa lagta hai
Uski dosti uski chahat haasil hain mujhe phir bhi
Kabhi kabhi mujhe wo ek begaana sa lagta hai !!!
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
thycreator
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2005, 09:22:41 PM » |
|
thanx a lot everyone for your appreciation.....
Thokar khayi humne pyar mein,ruswa ho gaye,
Jisko dil diya tha ussi ke hathon tabah ho gaye,
kehte hai ki muhabbat mein ek nasha sa hai,
Phela nasha kiya jeewan ka aur swah ho gaye...
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Amanush...
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2005, 03:27:55 AM » |
|
Bahout bahout shukriya...Dosto aur Meena Betiya! deri se reply karne ke liya maafi chahta houn...aap logon ko paDh kar bahout acha lagaa! Younhi saath dete rahiyega! Amanush... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
on eTI community..
