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vikas2210
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Har shaks is shahar mai
Kuch dhundhta hai
Koi tanhayee to koi
Mahfil dhundta hai
Koi dhundhta hai humsafar
To koi reh guzar dhundhta hai
Koi askh to koi
paimana dhundhta hai
kisi ko intezaar hai
subah ka kisi ko raat chahiye
kisi to talaash hai muskan ki
to kisi ko kandha chahiye
har shaks is shahar mai
mujhe mera aks lagta hai
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2006, 08:16:15 AM » |
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Bohat khoob Vikas...
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2006, 08:32:10 AM » |
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wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Vikas!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2006, 05:30:18 PM » |
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Too good...Vikas..
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2006, 05:31:38 PM » |
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Humare aks mein hoti jo zakhm e dil ki jhalak
hum aaine ko bhi apni tarah rula dete...
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2006, 05:47:56 PM » |
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good one vikas !!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2006, 06:45:43 PM » |
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Aryaan Ji Pooja Ji Anjuman Ji and Tosha Ji Bahoot bahoot shukriya aap sab ka..........
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2006, 06:47:08 PM » |
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aks mera mujhe kai sawal karta hai....
main kaun hun aksar mujhse puujha karta hai....
kaya jawab dun iska main sonchta rehta hun....
gar janta hota to Aks ke saath tanha kyun hota
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2006, 08:20:51 PM » |
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Har shaks is shahar mai
Kuch dhundhta hai
Koi tanhayee to koi
Mahfil dhundta hai
Koi dhundhta hai humsafar
To koi reh guzar dhundhta hai
Koi askh to koi
paimana dhundhta hai
kisi ko intezaar hai
subah ka kisi ko raat chahiye
kisi to talaash hai muskan ki
to kisi ko kandha chahiye
har shaks is shahar mai
mujhe mera aks lagta hai
bahot khoob Vikas............. nice Anjum......... very nice wordings vikas...... true aap ne kaha..... |
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vikas2210
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2006, 09:31:58 AM » |
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waheed ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2006, 01:51:05 PM » |
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kya baath hai Vikass jee bahut he khoob likha hai...nice one anjum jee
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2006, 01:56:35 PM » |
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Shukriya Salma Ji
Aksar andhere mai apna aks dhundhta hun
Main tujh mai khud ko dhundhta hun
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2006, 01:59:14 PM » |
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Aksar hum Apne askon ko andere mein bahate hain...
koi dekh na lein,issliye raat ke andhere mein rote hain....
again nice one...Vikass jee
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2006, 02:05:01 PM » |
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good one Salma JIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
and Thanks Again Salma JIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
Andhero se humme payar hai
kitna kaise kahen
Jab kuch nahi dikhta to
chehra tumhara damkta hai
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2006, 10:16:21 AM » |
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aks mera saathi na raha
tere jaane ke baad koi mera na raha
kaya kahe kisi se ab hum
jab tum nahi to kuch baaki na raha...
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