alvida kehne se pehle ....

by punam on October 26, 2007, 12:34:06 PM
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Muskurate huye gum chupana chaha
gum chupane ka yehi bas ek rasta nazar aaya

kis ko kya bataye aansoo kisne diye
dard-e-dil dil me kisne jagaya

dil hi dil me apni dard chupakar aahen dabakar
kya jaane koi kis kadar hothon pe muskan laaya

dosh deti kisko..kya shikayat karti
naseeb me jo likha tha wahi toh paaya

apnoke beech khud ko tanha paaya
kisse kya kehti dil pe khanjar kisne chalaya

dil toda jo ek baar mud ke na dekha
aaj usse apni duniya me mashur paaya..

kal tak jo tha apna ho gaya aaj paraya
phir bhi usse bewafa kehena paaya

ab zindagi me rakha kya hai..khush rahe woh sada
sochte huye sab ko alvida kehne se pehle khud ko khoob sajaya..
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2007, 03:03:46 PM »
wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot hi acha likha hai Punam!!!
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SHONA
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2007, 03:42:31 PM »
Simple & Beautiful... =D>  =D>
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punam
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«Reply #3 on: October 27, 2007, 12:42:14 PM »
Thanx pooja di ... aap ko acha laga dekh hume acha laga...

Thanx Shona... chalo koi pare toh meri likhi huyi...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2007, 05:18:50 PM »
Agar achhi likhenge to sab padhenge Punam ...
Indeed a nice one ...
Keep it up ...
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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2007, 05:30:07 PM »
Punam

Bahut achcha laga tumhara likha padh kar =D>

Pooja, SHONA and JHL appreciated your effort,
so it is definitely good one :D
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2007, 07:18:30 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI PUNAM AAPNE... =D>  =D>
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2007, 03:50:22 PM »
JHL ji... thanx ji aapne hoshla bara rahe..

Bhaiya..ji tanku ji tanku... haan aap ne hamesa sath diya..aur encourage karte aaye bas isliye aaj main kuch likh pa rahi hun...

khwaish ji bahot bahot sukriya...
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2007, 05:29:35 PM »
WOW....Keep it up Punam...!!!


Apno me dekhi jab humne begairat.....
Toh Khud se hum Nazarein bachane lage.....

Saya bhi katraane laga jaise ab Numaaish se.....
Aur Gum me bhi diya Zindagi ka Jalane lage.....

Ab toh jaise Mausam hee hai Patjhad ka.....
Jo toota hai use toot jaane do.....

Hum toh Chale hai yeh Safar chor ke Sanam.....
Tum bhi hume ab apni Raah se Gujar jaane do.....!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2007, 06:42:51 PM »
Good one BS JI!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2007, 11:45:53 AM »
Bahoot Accha Likha Hai Poonam Ji,.
And Gaurav Bhai,.
Keep Going,.
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2007, 03:23:08 PM »
Good one B.Shayar ...
Keep it up ...
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2007, 11:37:07 PM »
wah wah kya baath hai Punam... bahut accha likha hai.
Aur aur likhna.... Really nice reading u dear. keep up.
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«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2007, 05:29:34 AM »
Thanx pooja di .. Roja di...and Azeem ji...

Gaurav ji bahot acha likhe aap...

dard ke siva aaj zindagi me kuch rakha nahi
naseeb me umeedon ki kiran kahin dikhti hi nahi...

Dil ki veeran raah pe sada dene aaj koi nahi
toota khwaab aisa ke aaj zindagi me aansoo ke siva kuch bhi nahi....
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«Reply #14 on: October 31, 2007, 09:33:40 AM »
U Are Always Welcome,.
And Nice One Again,.
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