~:~:~:~:~: Alwida :~:~:~:~:~

by angel4u on August 07, 2007, 09:06:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 08, 2007, 07:57:48 PM »
Quote from: "SHONA"
beautifully expressed...


Thanks a lot SHONA..
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«Reply #16 on: August 08, 2007, 08:01:29 PM »
Quote from: "Rajbir"
Husena

Bahut he behtareen poem tumne likhi hai =D>

Keep it up !


Thanks a lot bhaiya,
hmm i wil try to keep it up Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: August 12, 2007, 08:04:00 PM »

Kitna Aasan Tha Uske Liye Ye Lafz "Alwida" Kehna,
Patjhad Ke Mausam Mein Sukhe Patton Ka Jaise Ped Se Jharna,

Ye Patte Bhi Uske Qadmon Ke Ronde Jaane Se The Zakhmi,
Uski Bewafayi Ne Jaise Lahoo-Luhan Kiya Mera Har Ek Sapna,

Sapne To Jalte Hi Hai, Palkon Pe Suraj Ki Pehli Kiran Padne Se,
Qasoor To Tha Hamara Hi, Khwabon Mein Bana Liya Gharonda Apna...
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«Reply #18 on: August 12, 2007, 08:37:49 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB ANGEL.....BAHUT ACHA LIKHTE HAI AAP

  ZINDAGI MEIN KUCH PAL AISE HOTE HAI
  JO GUZAR JAATE HAI SAAMNE SE
  HUM ZINDAGI BAR USSE YAAD KAR ROTE HAI

  INSAAN SHIKWA KARE TO BI KISSE
  USKE KHUD KE KHWAAB
   BEECH SADKO PE SOTE HAI

  ALWIDA KEH DENE SE KOI
  DOOR NAHI  HO JAATA "KHWAISH"
  RISHTE TO AAKHIR  RISHTE HI HOTE HAI
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«Reply #19 on: August 13, 2007, 07:30:10 PM »
ZINDAGI MEIN KUCH PAL AISE HOTE HAI
  JO GUZAR JAATE HAI SAAMNE SE
  HUM ZINDAGI BAR USSE YAAD KAR ROTE HAI

  INSAAN SHIKWA KARE TO BI KISSE
  USKE KHUD KE KHWAAB
   BEECH SADKO PE SOTE HAI

  ALWIDA KEH DENE SE KOI
  DOOR NAHI  HO JAATA "KHWAISH"
  RISHTE TO AAKHIR  RISHTE HI HOTE HAI

kya baat hai khwaish.bahut acha likha hai aapne..angel aap ne bahut khubsurat likha hai
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«Reply #20 on: August 13, 2007, 07:42:34 PM »
SHUKRIYA.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: August 13, 2007, 07:45:44 PM »
Quote from: "khwaish"
BAHUT KHOOB ANGEL.....BAHUT ACHA LIKHTE HAI AAP

  ZINDAGI MEIN KUCH PAL AISE HOTE HAI
  JO GUZAR JAATE HAI SAAMNE SE
  HUM ZINDAGI BAR USSE YAAD KAR ROTE HAI

  INSAAN SHIKWA KARE TO BI KISSE
  USKE KHUD KE KHWAAB
   BEECH SADKO PE SOTE HAI

  ALWIDA KEH DENE SE KOI
  DOOR NAHI  HO JAATA "KHWAISH"
  RISHTE TO AAKHIR  RISHTE HI HOTE HAI


Thanks Khwaish and too good Usual Smile
Sahi hai dost alwida kehne se rishta nahi tutta hai,
isiliye to door hote hue bhi yaadon ke kaanch chubhta hai,
kaash ho jaate rishte ojhal alwida kehne se,
warna ye lafz zindagi bhar ke liye ragon mein daudta hai...
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«Reply #22 on: August 23, 2007, 06:25:37 PM »
Tujh sung raha bhi na jayega
Tujhko alwida bhi na kaha jayega

Chalo ho gaya faisla jeevan ka
Na hi jiya jayega, na hi mara jayega

Ajeeb jad-o-jahed mai aa gai hai jaan
Ghoot ghoot kar yah jeevan bitaya jayega

Tujh sung raha bhi na jayega
Tujhko alwida bhi na kaha jayega
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«Reply #23 on: August 24, 2007, 04:55:00 PM »
Too good pooja di Usual Smile

Teri khushi ke liye kaha tujhe alwida bhi,
rishta tujhse toota, toota meri rooh se bhi,
tere sang jeena mumkin to na tha sajan,
le gaya tu apne sang meri saanson ki raftaar bhi...
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«Reply #24 on: August 24, 2007, 04:56:57 PM »
Too good pooja di Usual Smile

Teri khushi ke liye kaha tujhe alwida bhi,
rishta tujhse toota, toota meri rooh se bhi,
tere sang jeena mumkin to na tha sajan,
le gaya tu apne sang meri saanson ki raftaar bhi...
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