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Badi Aasaani Se Keh Diya Tha Usne Alwida Ek Roz,
Uski Ye Lafz Ne Jaise Meri Kaaynaat Ko Khaamosh Kar Diya,

Kehne Ko To Tha Ek Hi Lafz Ye "ALWIDA", Par Lagta Tha Jaise
Is Ek Lafz Ne Dunya Se Har Lafz Ka Maayna Mita Diya,

Dekhti Rahi Kuch Pal Ke Liye Uski Nazron Ko Main,
Kisi Dar Se Usne Phir Palkon Ko Aankhon Se Mila Diya,

Ho Gayi Meri Aankhon Ki Zubaan Khushk Patte Ki Tarah,
Jaane Kitne Khwaabon Ne Us Ek Lafz Se Apna Wajood Guma Diya,

Maine Palkon Ki Jhalar Mein Piro Liya Uska Wo Aakhri Lafz,
Ban Gaya Wo Kaanch Ka Tukda Jisne Mere Khwaabon Ko Kirchiyon Mein Badal Diya,

Dil Toot Ke Bikhar Gaya Mera Jaise Sahil Pe Samundar Ki Ret,
Ashqon Ke Toofan Ne Mujhe Lafzon Ka Kinara Na Naseeb Hone Diya,

Khamosh Thi Main, Khaamosh Hi Rahi, Na Jaane Meri Rooh Ne Sawal Kiya,
"Khush Rahoge Mere Bina?" Uski Har Dhadkan Ne Bade Guroor Se "HAAN" Keh Diya,

Sunke Uski "Haan" Khushi Hui Mujhe Bhi Ke Aakhir Khush To Hai Wo,
Uski Khushi Ke Liye Jaan Bhi De Dun, Ye Soch Ke Maine Bhi Alwida Keh Diya,

Ek Bholi Si Muskaan Uske Chehre Pe Aa Gayi Sunte Hi Mera "ALWIDA",
Jaise Uski Ye Muskaan Keh Rahi Ho "ALWIDA KEHNE KE LIYE SHUKRIYA"...


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Pooja

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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2007, 11:44:25 PM »

Too good Angle!!
yah lines bahoot hi achi lagi....

Ho Gayi Meri Aankhon Ki Zubaan Khushk Patte Ki Tarah,
Jaane Kitne Khwaabon Ne Us Ek Lafz Se Apna Wajood Guma Diya,

Khamosh Thi Main, Khaamosh Hi Rahi, Na Jaane Meri Rooh Ne Sawal Kiya,
"Khush Rahoge Mere Bina?" Uski Har Dhadkan Ne Bade Guroor Se "HAAN" Keh Diya,


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Roja

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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2007, 12:49:56 AM »

wah wah Angel bahut khoob likha..
especially last four lines dil ko chu gaye... Keep flowing emotions.


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Aryaan

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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2007, 01:19:57 AM »

Bohat Umdah Angel...


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Meena is back

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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2007, 09:53:51 AM »

wah wah angel!!! last 3 shers bohot ache lage mujhe!!! keep writting!

:D


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deepika_divya

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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2007, 09:58:20 AM »

well done Angle really very toching poetry...

Divya


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angel4u

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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2007, 05:39:47 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Thanks a lot didi. Usual Smile

thanks for appreciating, your appreciation means a lot to me di...


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angel4u

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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2007, 05:45:16 PM »

Quote from: "Roja"

wah wah Angel bahut khoob likha..
especially last four lines dil ko chu gaye... Keep flowing emotions.

thanks a lot roja, thanks for liking and appreciating, tkae care god bless Usual Smile


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angel4u

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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2007, 05:50:01 PM »

Quote from: "Aryaan"

Bohat Umdah Angel...

Thanks a lot Aryaan ji... Usual Smile


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angel4u

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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2007, 05:55:35 PM »

Quote from: "Meena is back"

wah wah angel!!! last 3 shers bohot ache lage mujhe!!! keep writting!

:D

thanks a lot meena ji Usual Smile

thanks for appreciating, :razz:


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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2007, 06:02:04 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB,AAPKI SHAYARI MEIN DARD AUR SACHAI NAZAR AAYI.YEH LINES TO BAHUT ACHI THI... =D> =D>

Dekhti Rahi Kuch Pal Ke Liye Uski Nazron Ko Main,
Kisi Dar Se Usne Phir Palkon Ko Aankhon Se mila Diya

Khamosh Thi Main, Khaamosh Hi Rahi, Na Jaane Meri Rooh Ne Sawal Kiya,
"Khush Rahoge Mere Bina?" Uski Har Dhadkan Ne Bade Guroor Se "HAAN" Keh Diya,


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angel4u

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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2007, 06:02:04 PM »

Quote from: "deepika_divya"

well done Angle really very toching poetry...

Divya

Thanks deepika_divya....

Usual Smile


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angel4u

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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2007, 06:06:59 PM »

Quote from: "khwaish"

thanks a lot khwaish
thanks for appreciating Usual Smile


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SHONA

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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2007, 06:09:30 PM »

beautifully expressed...


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Rajbir

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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2007, 06:23:08 PM »

Husena

Bahut he behtareen poem tumne likhi hai =D>

Keep it up !


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