- Anchaha Meheman -

by Meena on June 22, 2005, 09:16:45 AM
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Meena
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«Reply #30 on: June 23, 2005, 09:43:24 AM »
Aryaan:

bohot bohot shukriya!  :D

Desai ji:

wah, kya kamal ka likha hai "Marneki dua kar rahehe, jeeneka maksad khaas Nahi" , bohot acha laga mujhe and welcome to yoindia! wud like to c more of ur shayari!  :D

Ishu sis:

lol thank kuddiye!! well humtum is a gud partner na, harsher ka jawab hota hai uske pas to shayari me phir maza bhi ata hai, sawal jawab chalte rehte hai! as a person he is also a very nice and great dost!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #31 on: June 23, 2005, 11:56:28 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
[you]Aryaan:[/you]

bohot bohot shukriya!  :D

[you]Desai ji:[/you]

wah, kya kamal ka likha hai "Marneki dua kar rahehe, jeeneka maksad khaas Nahi" , bohot acha laga mujhe and welcome to yoindia! wud like to c more of ur shayari!  :D

[you]Ishu sis:[/you]

lol thank kuddiye!! well humtum is a gud Life partner na, harsher ka jawab hota hai uske pas to shayari me phir maza bhi ata hai, sawal jawab chalte rehte hai! as a person he is also a very nice and great dost!!


line mein thodi mistake thi ... correct ker di  :wink:  
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Meena
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«Reply #32 on: June 23, 2005, 01:28:39 PM »
lollllllll humtum....life partner ache hoge ke nahin yeh to apki belan wali biwi hi jane, humare lyie to ache SHAYARi partner ho filhal!  :wink:
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amrita
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«Reply #33 on: June 23, 2005, 02:13:57 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
lollllllll humtum....life partner ache hoge ke nahin yeh to apki belan wali biwi hi jane, humare lyie to ache SHAYARi partner ho filhal!  :wink:


hahah... good partners..!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #34 on: June 24, 2005, 03:00:35 PM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Quote from: "Meena"
lollllllll humtum....life partner ache hoge ke nahin yeh to apki belan wali biwi hi jane, humare lyie to ache SHAYARi partner ho filhal!  :wink:


hahah... good partners..!!


Shukriya Amrita ji .... lekin aap ney bhi same line mistake ker di !!  
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HumTum
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«Reply #35 on: June 24, 2005, 04:16:56 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
thank you kushi!!  :D  

humtum bhi thank you hi bolega uski taraf se bhi thank you!   :wink:



:thumb:
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Bharat
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«Reply #36 on: June 25, 2005, 02:22:18 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
[you]Aryaan:[/you]

bohot bohot shukriya!  :D

[you]Desai ji:[/you]

wah, kya kamal ka likha hai "Marneki dua kar rahehe, jeeneka maksad khaas Nahi" , bohot acha laga mujhe and welcome to yoindia! wud like to c more of ur shayari!  :D

[you]Ishu sis:[/you]

lol thank kuddiye!! well humtum is a gud partner na, harsher ka jawab hota hai uske pas to shayari me phir maza bhi ata hai, sawal jawab chalte rehte hai! as a person he is also a very nice and great dost!!



Thanks Meena,
I am just trying.
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Amanush...
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«Reply #37 on: June 25, 2005, 08:16:25 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, yeh meri poem ek aise shaks ke feelings ke bare hai jisko pata chalta hai ke uska janm hi unwanted tha! umeed hai meri koshish aap sab ko pasand ayegi!

Ek duniya hi ujad gayi jab jaan li yeh sachayi,
Hum to hai yaha par humare hone ka kisi ko na tha arman,

Roop bhi na liya tha insaan ke shareer ka,
Jab humare lyie khilne lage nafraton ke gulistan,

Nami aa hi jati hai jab dikhta hai apno ki ankhon me sab ke lyie pyar,
Bas ek humare liye tha yeh ek ehesas anjan,

Aab jaan liye kyu juda te hum mamta bare pyar se,
Ke hum to hai unke liye ek anchaha meheman,

Farz ke is rishte ko to bohot khoobi se nibaye sab ne,
Par gaur se dekho to mere dil ka ashiyana hai bohot sunsan,

Khoon ka ristha hai jinse woh hi na de paye apnapan,
Phir kisi gair se kyu mange hum pyar lene ka ehesaan!


 sad5


Simply beautiful...Meena Beti!

Keep it up

Chachu...

 Usual Smile
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Tosha
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«Reply #38 on: June 25, 2005, 09:23:00 AM »
Shocked  Shocked

khoob...shayari bhi...bate bhi
 Puzzled !  Puzzled !
khoob partners bhi ... aab life ke ho ya shayari ke!
 :?:  :?:
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Meena
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«Reply #39 on: June 25, 2005, 10:14:30 AM »
thank u amanush chachu! aap kaha te  sad5

toshuuuuuuuu....baate hi hoti hai aur shayari  hi hoti hai  :wink:
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HumTum
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«Reply #40 on: June 25, 2005, 10:22:07 AM »
Quote from: "Tosha"
Shocked  Shocked

khoob...shayari bhi...bate bhi
 Puzzled !  Puzzled !
khoob partners bhi ... aab life ke ho ya shayari ke!
 :?:  :?:


abhi to shayri ke hai lekin bahot jald Life ke ban jayegey  :dance:  
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