And I am sad...!

by Amanush... on June 06, 2005, 06:19:45 PM
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Amanush...
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I would like to write of joy,
of serenity, of peace
but what I have in my heart
is only disappointment and sadness.
 
Everything of which I know
how to speak now is loneliness...
what I know is only loneliness,
only of this I have suffered
and also perhaps I have looked for.
 
My only way of escape is writing…
the only universe in which
I cannot  be judged,
in which I do not to have
to be totally sincere...
 
Sincere as I won't perhaps never be
because I am ashamed of what I am,
I am ashamed for not to be able
to fight for what I believe in,
I am ashamed of my weakness...

And I am sad…!

Amanush...

sad5
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2005, 07:13:06 PM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
I would like to write of joy,
of serenity, of peace
but what I have in my heart
is only disappointment and sadness.
 
Everything of which I know
how to speak now is loneliness...
what I know is only loneliness,
only of this I have suffered
and also perhaps I have looked for.
 
My only way of escape is writing…
the only universe in which
I cannot  be judged,
in which I do not to have
to be totally sincere...
 
Sincere as I won't perhaps never be
because I am ashamed of what I am,
I am ashamed for not to be able
to fight for what I believe in,
I am ashamed of my weakness...

And I am sad…!

Amanush...

sad5


Oh WOW...very sad!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2005, 08:49:14 PM »
wah chachuuuuu...bohot acha likha apne!!! made me sad also sad5
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Tosha
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2005, 11:19:33 PM »
pata nahi....am i sad or not...but i'm surly touched...!!!! amazing work my friend
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Amanush...
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2005, 01:35:35 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Quote from: "Amanush..."
I would like to write of joy,
of serenity, of peace
but what I have in my heart
is only disappointment and sadness.
 
Everything of which I know
how to speak now is loneliness...
what I know is only loneliness,
only of this I have suffered
and also perhaps I have looked for.
 
My only way of escape is writing…
the only universe in which
I cannot  be judged,
in which I do not to have
to be totally sincere...
 
Sincere as I won't perhaps never be
because I am ashamed of what I am,
I am ashamed for not to be able
to fight for what I believe in,
I am ashamed of my weakness...

And I am sad…!

Amanush...

sad5


Oh WOW...very sad!!!


Thanks...Isha ji for reading and appreciating!

Take care and keep coming

Amanush...

 Usual Smile
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Amanush...
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2005, 01:40:14 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah chachuuuuu...bohot acha likha apne!!! made me sad also sad5


Isse pasand karne ke liye bahout shukriya Meena Beti!

Please, don't be sad you too...Let your Chachu carry this burden alone...ok?

Khoush raho! And take care.

Amanush Chachu...

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Amanush...
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2005, 01:50:41 PM »
Quote from: "Tosha"
pata nahi....am i sad or not...but i'm surly touched...!!!! amazing work my friend


Tosha ji...! Thanks for your liking this poem and keep coming...!

Take care

Amanush...

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rohit30002
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2005, 02:34:51 PM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
I would like to write of joy,
of serenity, of peace
but what I have in my heart
is only disappointment and sadness.
 
Everything of which I know
how to speak now is loneliness...
what I know is only loneliness,
only of this I have suffered
and also perhaps I have looked for.
 
My only way of escape is writing…
the only universe in which
I cannot  be judged,
in which I do not to have
to be totally sincere...
 
Sincere as I won't perhaps never be
because I am ashamed of what I am,
I am ashamed for not to be able
to fight for what I believe in,
I am ashamed of my weakness...

And I am sad…!

Amanush...

sad5


Taarif ke kaabil hai
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Amanush...
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2005, 02:38:43 PM »
Quote from: "rohit30002"
Quote from: "Amanush..."
I would like to write of joy,
of serenity, of peace
but what I have in my heart
is only disappointment and sadness.
 
Everything of which I know
how to speak now is loneliness...
what I know is only loneliness,
only of this I have suffered
and also perhaps I have looked for.
 
My only way of escape is writing…
the only universe in which
I cannot  be judged,
in which I do not to have
to be totally sincere...
 
Sincere as I won't perhaps never be
because I am ashamed of what I am,
I am ashamed for not to be able
to fight for what I believe in,
I am ashamed of my weakness...

And I am sad…!

Amanush...

sad5


Taarif ke kaabil hai


Tah e dil se Daad kabool hai...Rohit ji!

Thanks

Amanush...

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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2005, 08:50:00 PM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Quote from: "Meena"
wah chachuuuuu...bohot acha likha apne!!! made me sad also sad5


Isse pasand karne ke liye bahout shukriya Meena Beti!

Please, don't be sad you too...Let your Chachu carry this burden alone...ok?

Khoush raho! And take care.

Amanush Chachu...

 Usual Smile


hmmmmm

mana ke umar meri abhi kachi hai,
par chachu, feelings to meri sachi hai!
apne gum se mujhe door rakh kar mujhe paraya na karo,
gar karna hai aisa to yeh na kehna ke "Meena" apki bachi hai!  sad5
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pandit
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2005, 08:54:02 PM »
nice all.............................................. ........................
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Amanush...
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2005, 02:10:31 AM »
hmmmmm

mana ke umar meri abhi kachi hai,
par chachu, feelings to meri sachi hai!
apne gum se mujhe door rakh kar mujhe paraya na karo,
gar karna hai aisa to yeh na kehna ke "Meena" apki bachi hai!  sad5[/quote]

Waah...Meena Beti! Kya khoub likha hai tumne! Bahout acha laga!

Sabhi gham tum se door rahe,ye khwaish hai meri
Na kehna ki tou meri bachi nahin,ye farmaaish hai meri!
Meri jholi main tumhare liye douaaon ke siwa kouch aur nahin
Meri khushiyan bhi tumhein mile, Khuda ji se ye gouzarish hai meri...! Usual Smile

Amanush Chachu...

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Amanush...
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2005, 02:23:28 AM »
Quote from: "pandit"
nice all.............................................. ........................


Thanks...Pandit ji!

Amanush...

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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2005, 07:52:46 PM »
that was s o sweet chachu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Amanush...
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2005, 08:42:16 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
that was s o sweet chachu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D


Meri Meena beti to hai ek khaas kaviyatri
"Chachu" iss raaste ka hai ek naya yaatri...

Apna khayaal rakhna...thik hai ?

Amanush Chachu...

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