antim abhilasha:Shayri-E-Dard

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Lo aaj chali es dunia se
sathi na mila es jivan mai
yadi apni se mai lagu tumhe
to phul chadna arthi per//
yue to jeevan bher jala kari
per aaj akhiri jwala hai/
tum do aanshu chlka dena
samjhugi yeh vermala hai//
mai bol na paugi mukh se
per lipat chita ke bolegi/
jo chupa rahi the mai ab tak
wah bhed tumhi se kholugi//
bal paker dhuaa uthega he
tum padh lena uske bhasa/
tum milna agle janam mujhe
yah meri ANTIM ABHILASHA//


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2012, 08:44:29 AM »

bahut hee dil ko chhoone waalee kawitaa hai ankitaa ji main hardik saadhuwaad aur shubhkaamnaayen detaa hoon sadaiv khush raho


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ankita.srmec

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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2012, 08:50:41 AM »

thanks,...sir


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2012, 08:57:46 AM »

BAHUT , BAHUT , BAHUT SUNDAR , DARD BHARI KAVITA HAI.
ANKITA JI , DHERON DAAD .


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2012, 09:07:15 AM »

Very nice ankita ji. Its realy heart touching. Applause


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2012, 09:51:23 AM »

Quote from: ankita.srmec on June 26, 2012, 08:38:54 AM

Hmmm..Ek Ek Lafz Dard Se Bhara Hua..

Ankita Ji Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2012, 01:59:52 PM »

bahut khubsurat kavita
meri daad kubul karen
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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2012, 04:09:25 PM »

bahut hi zabardast umda likha hai aapne............... isalute u madam ji.......


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2012, 05:04:49 PM »

waah !!
bohoot khoob likha hai aapne
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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2012, 04:15:01 AM »

waah bahut khoobsoorat,


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2012, 06:10:10 AM »

bohat marmik aur sundar kavita kahi hai aapne ankita ji. Applause

bhagwan aap ko zindgi ki saari khushiyaN de. happy3


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2012, 08:20:33 AM »

Is beher men likhnay walon ka
Anjaam niraalaa hota hay
Is beher men likhna khel nahi
Dil khoon k aansoo rota hay

Har lafz say teesen utheti hen
Har sher say aansoo behta hay
Chahat k jhootay khaabon par
Tum ro he pari ho lagta hay

Saathi na mila gar jivan men
To is duniya say jaanaa ku?
Marnay ki baaten karti ho
Dil itna preet divaana ku?

Tum jeevan sapna haar gai
Ye kya Antim abhilasha hay?
Ik baat tu tum bhe maano gi
Khud jeevan ake tamasha hay

Gar ho payay tu seenay say
Chaaht ko masal kar rakh dena
Is pyaar ki jhooti duniya ki
Duniya ko badal kar rakh dena

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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2012, 05:25:17 PM »


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2012, 05:31:03 PM »

dil ko chhukar aankhein num karti post hai ankita... bht mast...


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Re: antim abhilasha

«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2013, 05:05:03 PM »

Wow... Awesum..
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