Aorat Ka Rona

by syednaami on July 02, 2008, 06:29:52 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 08, 2008, 11:35:29 AM »
Bahot Hi badhiya syed bhai
Bahot Khoob Bhai Azeem ko Hazrat-e-Daheli Ke asha'r Ke Liye.,
Sub Dosto Ne Aapne Apne Andaaj Me Bahot Hi Khoob Pesh Kiya Hai.,

Bhai Syed aapne Aurat Ke Har Pehlu Pe Alfaz Likhe Hai.,
Badhiya Unwaan " Aurat Ka Rona ".

Lekin Main apne Tute Fute Andaaj Me "Aurat" Ko Kuch Is Tarahaa Likhta Hun....

Khuda Ne Kayenaat Me Gar Kisi ko Khubsoorat Banaya Hai…To Wo Aurat Hai..!
Khuda Ka Diya Hua Ek Hasin va Nayaab Tohafa.…To Wo Aurat Hai..!
Khdua Ki Sab  Se Pyaari Ne’amat …To Wo Aurat Hai..!
Khuda Ne Jannat Banayi,
Hoor-o-Pariyaa Banayi,
In Sub Se Badhkar..
Aurat Banayi..!

Soorat Me Be-Misl,
Sirat Me Be-Misl,
Aur,
Sabra Me Be-Misl..!

Koi Kya Jaane Aurat Ka Maqaam...??
To Tilaawat Karo Qur’aan,
 Padho Ge Ye Paak Naam..!

Kahin Hawwa –Kahin Fatima,
Kahin Ayesha – Kahin Maryma,
Kahin Zulekha – Kahin Hazraa,
Kahin Ashiya – Kahin Saara,

Koi Kya Jaane Aurat Ke Manaqeeb...??
To Kaul-e-Hadith  Lelo,
   Tafssir-o-Tarjuma Dekho..!

Kahin shahar Bano.- Kahin Saqeena,
Kahin Rabiya Basri.- Kahin Zubeda,

Koi Kya Jaane Aurat Ke Kamaal’at...??
To Tarikh ke Varq Ulata Kar Dekho,
   Daastan-e-Hind-o-Arab Dekho..!

Kahin Raziya Sultana. - Kahin Jahaan aara.,
Kahin Malika-e-Saba – Kahin Malika-e-Misra.,

Aur…..

Ramayana –Ved – Puraan – Mahabharat Ka Karlo Safar.,
Harr Paath Me Har Shlok Me Ayegi Tumhe Aurat Nazar.,
 
Aur…

Allama Dr. Iqbaal Saab Hindi Kashmiri Raaqem-e-Taraj Hai..

Wajood-e-Zan  Se Hai Taswwir-e-Qayenaa’t Me Rang.,
Isee Ke Saaz Me Hai Zindagi Ka Safar Rawaa’n…………!!!!
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«Reply #16 on: July 14, 2008, 04:50:18 PM »
Nice One Raza Bhai Jaan,.
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«Reply #17 on: July 17, 2008, 10:04:25 PM »
Adaab dosto,,, maazirat ke saath ke bade dinon baad yahan aaya,,, aur aap doston ke pyar bhare alfaaz dekh kar buhat buhat dili sukoon mila aur jitna shukriya ada karun shayad kam hi hoga...

Main tamaam doston ka mamnoon wa mashkoor hun aur sab doston ko fardan fardan bhi javaab paish karne ki koshish karunga...

Shurkiya

Syed Naami
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«Reply #18 on: July 17, 2008, 11:24:55 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 02, 2008, 06:34:47 PM
Bohot Khoob S. Naami  Applause

Aurat ki qurbaniyon ki daastaan kaun jaane
Behte hue askhon ki kahanniyaan kaun jaane

Muskurahat main chupati hai kitne teero-tanz
Uske zakhm-e-dil ki gehraaiyaan kaun jaane

Kya kahne aapke,,, chand ashaar men puri daastan bayaan kardi,,, buhat achha laga...
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«Reply #19 on: July 17, 2008, 11:33:50 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on July 02, 2008, 06:38:13 PM
Aurat Iske Jaisi Neak Aur Badd Nahi,.
iski Mohabbat Aur Nafrat Dono Ki Hadd Nahi,.

_____________________-Daag Dehalvi-

Azeem bhai,,, aap ka buhat mashkoor hun jo yahan aaye...
Aap ne Daagh saahib ka umda kalaam paish kia,,, bilkul sahih kahte hain...
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«Reply #20 on: July 18, 2008, 09:10:55 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on July 02, 2008, 07:17:22 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Nice thread Sami jee!!

Bahoot achi kavita likhi hai apne: yah lines behad pasand aai:

Jin baaton men bebas ho jaati hai, -
Tab aankhon men uske nami aajaati hai, -
Aor khud ko rok na paati hai, -
Phir bebasi ke aalam ko ro kar hi sunaati hai. –

Yeh maloom nahin shaayad  –
Kyun aort dard ko chhupaati hai, -
Aqal men aayegi kaise yeh baat –
Haya aor sharam hai uski zaat –
Is liye dukhon ko aansuon men nahlaati hai, -
Aor dafan kar deti hai kai raaz –
Dekar apnon ko khushiyaan khud fana ho jaati hai. –
 Applause Applause Applause

Aap ka hardik dhanyavaad Pooja jee...
Aap bhi apne bhawana likhte agar...
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«Reply #21 on: July 18, 2008, 09:15:21 AM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on July 02, 2008, 07:29:57 PM
Accha likha hai aapne Syed jee and
Good reply Celmira


Sani baba,,, aap ka buhat buhat shukriya...
Aur wapas kab aoge...
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«Reply #22 on: July 18, 2008, 09:22:43 AM »
Quote from: GOPALDAS on July 02, 2008, 10:48:46 PM
tearyeyed Applausegood.. nice lines

Shukriya Gopal Das saahib... Aap bhi kuchh likhte...
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«Reply #23 on: July 18, 2008, 09:29:46 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 03, 2008, 10:39:27 AM
bohut hi acha likha hai aapne syednaami ji

Aap ka buhat buhat shukriya Kaushik saahib,,, Aap bhi kuchh kalaam paish karte...
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«Reply #24 on: July 18, 2008, 09:32:09 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 03, 2008, 12:32:38 PM
wow kya khoob sabne bohat achha likha hai..
Lagey Raho.....
Good Job Sayed Bro...

Woh to likha hai,,,
Par yeh 'lage raho' likh kar bhaag kyun jaate ho...
Abhi yahan kuchh likhna padega...
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«Reply #25 on: July 18, 2008, 09:35:46 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 03, 2008, 12:37:00 PM
bahot khoob syed ji...humesha ki tarah bahot hi acha likha aap ne..


Punam Saahiba,,, tareef ka shukriya magar aapko bhi likhna hoga...
Chaliye... jaldi se kuchh inaayat farmaaiye...
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«Reply #26 on: July 19, 2008, 12:02:32 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 02, 2008, 06:29:52 PM
Kaisa hai aort ka rona, -
Uska dabe jazbaat men khona. –

Dukhi hokar jab woh roti hai, -
Aahon ke khanjar chubhoti hai, -
Siskiyon men dard ko seenchti hai, -
Koi pathar ho kitna bhi –
Maom ki tarah pighla deti hai. –

Qaatil hain aorat ki siskiyaan, -
Jab leti hai ruk ruk kar hichkiyaan. –

Aankhon men bhara sailaab –
Ashkon ki ladiyaan jab tapkaati hai, -
Ek dukh nahin –
Saare zeest ke gham us men samaati hai, -
Kuchh aisi taaqat hai uske ashkon men, -
Khud roti hai jab –
Saath saari duniya ko bhi rulaati hai. –

Ro ro kar sulag jaayen uski ankhiyaan, -
Ghor Lal jaise nikal rahi hon chingaariyaan. -

Jin baaton men bebas ho jaati hai, -
Tab aankhon men uske nami aajaati hai, -
Aor khud ko rok na paati hai, -
Phir bebasi ke aalam ko ro kar hi sunaati hai. –

Kaisi hain iski bebasiyaan, -
Kitni hain iski majbooriyaan. -

Yeh maloom nahin shaayad  –
Kyun aort dard ko chhupaati hai, -
Aqal men aayegi kaise yeh baat –
Haya aor sharam hai uski zaat –
Is liye dukhon ko aansuon men nahlaati hai, -
Aor dafan kar deti hai kai raaz –
Dekar apnon ko khushiyaan khud fana ho jaati hai. –

Baant kar behisaab khushiyaan, -
Bhool jaati hai kyun apni barbaadiyaan? -
Deti jaati hai kyun itni qurbaaniyaan? -

(Syed Naami)

Waah... Bahut khoob.. Applause
Bahut achha laga padh kar.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: July 19, 2008, 12:06:12 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 02, 2008, 06:34:47 PM
Bohot Khoob S. Naami  Applause

Aurat ki qurbaniyon ki daastaan kaun jaane
Behte hue askhon ki kahanniyaan kaun jaane

Muskurahat main chupati hai kitne teero-tanz
Uske zakhm-e-dil ki gehraaiyaan kaun jaane

Bahut sahi likha hai Celmira.. Applause

Quote from: Jaanasheen on July 02, 2008, 06:38:13 PM
Aurat Iske Jaisi Neak Aur Badd Nahi,.
iski Mohabbat Aur Nafrat Dono Ki Hadd Nahi,.

_____________________-Daag Dehalvi-

Bahut Khoob... aur bahut sahi bhi..  Thumbs UP
Isey hum sab takk laane ka Shukriya.. Azeem.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: July 19, 2008, 12:07:01 PM »
Quote from: Muhammed on July 08, 2008, 11:35:29 AM
Bahot Hi badhiya syed bhai
Bahot Khoob Bhai Azeem ko Hazrat-e-Daheli Ke asha'r Ke Liye.,
Sub Dosto Ne Aapne Apne Andaaj Me Bahot Hi Khoob Pesh Kiya Hai.,

Bhai Syed aapne Aurat Ke Har Pehlu Pe Alfaz Likhe Hai.,
Badhiya Unwaan " Aurat Ka Rona ".

Lekin Main apne Tute Fute Andaaj Me "Aurat" Ko Kuch Is Tarahaa Likhta Hun....

Khuda Ne Kayenaat Me Gar Kisi ko Khubsoorat Banaya Hai…To Wo Aurat Hai..!
Khuda Ka Diya Hua Ek Hasin va Nayaab Tohafa.…To Wo Aurat Hai..!
Khdua Ki Sab  Se Pyaari Ne’amat …To Wo Aurat Hai..!
Khuda Ne Jannat Banayi,
Hoor-o-Pariyaa Banayi,
In Sub Se Badhkar..
Aurat Banayi..!

Soorat Me Be-Misl,
Sirat Me Be-Misl,
Aur,
Sabra Me Be-Misl..!

Koi Kya Jaane Aurat Ka Maqaam...??
To Tilaawat Karo Qur’aan,
 Padho Ge Ye Paak Naam..!

Kahin Hawwa –Kahin Fatima,
Kahin Ayesha – Kahin Maryma,
Kahin Zulekha – Kahin Hazraa,
Kahin Ashiya – Kahin Saara,

Koi Kya Jaane Aurat Ke Manaqeeb...??
To Kaul-e-Hadith  Lelo,
   Tafssir-o-Tarjuma Dekho..!

Kahin shahar Bano.- Kahin Saqeena,
Kahin Rabiya Basri.- Kahin Zubeda,

Koi Kya Jaane Aurat Ke Kamaal’at...??
To Tarikh ke Varq Ulata Kar Dekho,
   Daastan-e-Hind-o-Arab Dekho..!

Kahin Raziya Sultana. - Kahin Jahaan aara.,
Kahin Malika-e-Saba – Kahin Malika-e-Misra.,

Aur…..

Ramayana –Ved – Puraan – Mahabharat Ka Karlo Safar.,
Harr Paath Me Har Shlok Me Ayegi Tumhe Aurat Nazar.,
 
Aur…

Allama Dr. Iqbaal Saab Hindi Kashmiri Raaqem-e-Taraj Hai..

Wajood-e-Zan  Se Hai Taswwir-e-Qayenaa’t Me Rang.,
Isee Ke Saaz Me Hai Zindagi Ka Safar Rawaa’n…………!!!!

Beautiful... Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: July 20, 2008, 08:56:36 PM »
Shukriya mahiya Ji,.
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