Aorat Ka Rona

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«Reply #30 on: July 20, 2008, 09:03:07 PM »
Kya Kahein Aurat Ki Kahaani,.
Kaise Guzarti Hai Uski Jawaani,.

Umar Guzarti Hai Khidmat Mein Jiski,.
Aahein Bhi Hoti Hai Kismat Mein Jiski,.

Maa Banke Kabhi Bachchon Ko Paalti,.
Beti Banke Kabhi Ghar Ko Sambhaalti,.

Aurat Hoti Hai Ghar Ki Shezaadi "Azeem",.
Aurat Se Hoti Hai Ghar Ki Aabaadi "Azeem",.

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«Reply #31 on: July 20, 2008, 10:11:40 PM »
wah kaya baat hai jaanasheen bahoot sahi kaha apne....
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«Reply #32 on: July 21, 2008, 01:16:18 PM »
Shukriya Sarthika Ji,.
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«Reply #33 on: July 21, 2008, 07:32:25 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 18, 2008, 09:35:46 AM
Punam Saahiba,,, tareef ka shukriya magar aapko bhi likhna hoga...
Chaliye... jaldi se kuchh inaayat farmaaiye...

sab ne bahot acha likha...samajh me nahi aa raha kya likhun...
chalo ek choti si koshish kar rahi hun..galti maaf karna...

Nahin dukha sakti hai dil kisi ka
dekh nahin sakti dard kisi ka
sahan ka doosra naam hai aurat
kar jaati hai kuchh bhi dil jala ke khud ka...

jab ghairon ke dard se sat patai hai
Apnon ke dard ko phir kahan dekh paati hai
aansoo bahaati hai chhup chhupake
dekh le koi to bahaane se chhupaati hai...

kabhi aisi bhi haalat uski ho jaati hai
dard dabaake chahre pe muskaan laati hai
chahe kisi ke liye usse khud ko pade mitana
us ki khushi men apni khushi talaashti hai...
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«Reply #34 on: July 27, 2008, 08:06:49 PM »
Nice One Punam,
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«Reply #35 on: July 27, 2008, 08:10:59 PM »
nice punam
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«Reply #36 on: October 19, 2008, 03:33:07 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on July 20, 2008, 09:03:07 PM
Kya Kahein Aurat Ki Kahaani,.
Kaise Guzarti Hai Uski Jawaani,.

Umar Guzarti Hai Khidmat Mein Jiski,.
Aahein Bhi Hoti Hai Kismat Mein Jiski,.

Maa Banke Kabhi Bachchon Ko Paalti,.
Beti Banke Kabhi Ghar Ko Sambhaalti,.

Aurat Hoti Hai Ghar Ki Shezaadi "Azeem",.
Aurat Se Hoti Hai Ghar Ki Aabaadi "Azeem",.

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Azeem miyan,

SubhanAllah, bahut sada andaaz men magar ek ahm pahloo paish kiya hai aapne.
Shukriya
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«Reply #37 on: October 19, 2008, 03:37:02 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 21, 2008, 07:32:25 PM
sab ne bahot acha likha...samajh me nahi aa raha kya likhun...
chalo ek choti si koshish kar rahi hun..galti maaf karna...

Nahin dukha sakti hai dil kisi ka
dekh nahin sakti dard kisi ka
sahan ka doosra naam hai aurat
kar jaati hai kuchh bhi dil jala ke khud ka...

jab ghairon ke dard se sat patai hai
Apnon ke dard ko phir kahan dekh paati hai
aansoo bahaati hai chhup chhupake
dekh le koi to bahaane se chhupaati hai...

kabhi aisi bhi haalat uski ho jaati hai
dard dabaake chahre pe muskaan laati hai
chahe kisi ke liye usse khud ko pade mitana
us ki khushi men apni khushi talaashti hai...

Punam saahiba,

Aap ka mamnoon hun jo hamare liye kuchh waqt nikala.
Bahut seedhi, saaf aor umda baaten samjha gayi aap.
Shukriya
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«Reply #38 on: October 19, 2008, 06:04:39 AM »


Syednaami ji aapne kamaal ka likha hai 
Jawaab mein kuch mere or se bhi pesh hai
Galti ho to maaf karna hoon kachcha shayar
Khabi ho jati seekhne wale se miss fayar

Aurat ke kai roop hain aur nibahati hai apna har farz
Hum mard kabhi bhi na utaar sakenge unka yeh karz
Zindagion ko banati hai dekar kai kurbaaniyan
Hum mardo par bhi karti hai kitni meharbaaniyan

Khud dukh sahekar  apno ko deti hai khushiyan
Kitna hum kahen bahut saari hai unme khoobiyan
Aurat ka rona aur rulana hai unki bahut badi taqat
Jhuk jati hai unke saamne ye saari duniyan ke taqat
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«Reply #39 on: October 19, 2008, 11:04:20 AM »
Rajesh miyan,
Aap ka mashkoor hun jo meri nazm pe aap ne saraha.
Aap ne aakhri chaar sitron se aorat ke rone par kamaal ashaar kahe hain, shukriya.
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«Reply #40 on: October 19, 2008, 10:56:58 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on October 19, 2008, 11:04:20 AM
Rajesh miyan,
Aap ka mashkoor hun jo meri nazm pe aap ne saraha.
Aap ne aakhri chaar sitron se aorat ke rone par kamaal ashaar kahe hain, shukriya.

Thanks for the compliment Syednaami Ji
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