Apne_______________Baadal

by baadal102 on May 12, 2010, 06:07:12 AM
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Kuch log mahobat ko aise bhi rushwa karte hai,
Duhai de ke apno ki katal wo apne yaar ka karte hai,

Karte rahte hai waade ki tum bin jinda nahi hai,
Lakin yaar apne ke saath marne se kyo wo darte hai,

Yaar ki nazar mai khud ko KHUDA bana to late hai,
Fir door reh ke us KHUDA ko ruswa kyo wo karte hai,

Jab apno ki chahat us kaatil ko itna lubhati hai,
Fir wo sachi ibadat use parayi mahsoos kyo hoti hai,

Jab pyar se bada koi rista nazro mai nahi hota hai,
Majburio ka naam le ke fir paraye kyo wo ho jaate hai,

Apne se jude har risto ka jab unhe itna khayal hota hai,
Dhoka de ke jhute wado ka pyar ko ruswa kyo wo karte hai,

Mat khelo ae kaatilo pyar ke naam pe ye jhuta khel,
Khud to rehte hai apno mai ghar us ka kyo wo ujad dete hai,

Khud to rehte hai apno mai ghar us ka kyo wo ujad dete hai............




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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 06:17:15 AM »
awesome creation....... Clapping Smiley  Applause  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 10:01:50 AM »
ab main kya kahun Baadal ji.... kuch bacha hi nahi likhne ko... kin shabdon se main aapke is kavita ki taarif karun... kitni sachchai hai aapke alfaazon mein... kitna dard hai... sach hi kaha hai apne apni majbooriyon ka bahana karke doosre ka dil kitni asaani se log tod dete hain...

"Khud to rehte hai apno mai ghar us ka kyo wo ujad dete hai"


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bahut bahut khoob baat kahi hai aapne...

agar nibha nahi sakte to kehte kyun ho ki hum mohabbat karte hain,
todte ho dil apno ka bedardi se aur kehte ho ki zamaane se darte hain...
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2010, 05:24:23 AM »
Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ke Baadal Ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2010, 06:21:24 AM »
Wah bahut bahut khoob Baadal ji.great and mindblowing creation.lovely lines by Kapil ji, excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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