Apni aarhti sajauuNgi

by mistufer on March 18, 2008, 10:36:37 PM
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Chahti toh yeh thi ki
Meri aarthi pahle sajti.
Laal jode mein main sajti
Pahne hote haato mein kagan
Maathe meri bindiya chamakti

Par tum dhoka de gaye
Apni zimedaariyan chor
Duur desh chale gaye.
Pahnake safed rang mujko
Sare rang, sang le gaye.

Budhe maa baba ka
Dhayan naa aaya.
Kaise bojh uthayenge
Kamzor kandon par
Apne bete ki aarthi.

Muje unko dheer
Bandhani hai.
Aab tho betaa banker
Sare farz nibhane hain
Tumhare farz nibhane hain.

Koi aab naa saalgirah hogi
Naa diwali naa hogi koi holi.
Beete palon ki yaadain
Meri duniya hogi.
MaiN sapnoN emN jee luuNgi

Intzaar karna tum mera,
Waade sare poore karoongi,
Koi kaam adhure naa
Rahainge, kasam tumharI
Betiyon ki doliyaan baij kar
Apni aarhti sajauuNgi

Tumse milne aayoongi
Tumse milne jaldi aayoongi

Nira
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2008, 10:39:22 PM »
Bohot khoob likha hai Nira..beautiful Applause
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2008, 04:49:13 AM »
aap kaa khairmqddam karte haiN Nira ji iss khoobsoorat si forum meiN vaaqayee bahut achhe log haiN yahaaN aap ko bahut khushi hogi sab se milke....Ek baar phir iss bazm-e-sukhan mein ham aap ka istqbaal karte hain khush rahiye aour khush rakhiye....

Aapki ye nazm dil ko chhoo si gayi nira ji....mout ko leker aapne dil ko hila sa diyaa

Ab na hogi koi aisi baat
na mulaqaat na suhaagraat
sad10 sad10
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2008, 11:53:57 AM »
Bohat hi khoob likha hai mistufer aur Harash ji..Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2008, 03:34:52 PM »
wowow too good Nira.. apne to rula diya apni kavita sa... bahoot hi bhawnao se bharpoor dardili kavita ki rachna ki hai apne!!

AGAR APP NIRA NAHI HAI TO GOOD SHARING mistufer JI!!!!


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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2008, 03:44:53 PM »
Quote from: Talat on March 18, 2008, 10:39:22 PM
Bohot khoob likha hai Nira..beautiful Applause

Talat ji

aapka bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzayi ka
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2008, 04:00:56 PM »
Pooja, she is Nira Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2008, 04:29:21 PM »
I was not sure !!Good work Nira!!!
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mistufer
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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2008, 04:42:05 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 19, 2008, 04:49:13 AM
aap kaa khairmqddam karte haiN Nira ji iss khoobsoorat si forum meiN vaaqayee bahut achhe log haiN yahaaN aap ko bahut khushi hogi sab se milke....Ek baar phir iss bazm-e-sukhan mein ham aap ka istqbaal karte hain khush rahiye aour khush rakhiye....

Aapki ye nazm dil ko chhoo si gayi nira ji....mout ko leker aapne dil ko hila sa diyaa

Ab na hogi koi aisi baat
na mulaqaat na suhaagraat
sad10 sad10
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 19, 2008, 04:49:13 AM

Harash ji
itne pyaar se aapne swagat kiya bahut bahut shukriya, aapne sahi kaha yahan ache writers hain , unmein aap bhi ho. so man akele toh hoon hi nahi yahan aap jo hain.

aapko nazm pasand aayi it means a lot to me , thanks a lot for liking it, ur words are a big boost for me.
take care
nira
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mistufer
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«Reply #9 on: March 19, 2008, 05:14:31 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on March 19, 2008, 03:34:52 PM
wowow too good Nira.. apne to rula diya apni kavita sa... bahoot hi bhawnao se bharpoor dardili kavita ki rachna ki hai apne!!

AGAR APP NIRA NAHI HAI TO GOOD SHARING mistufer JI!!!!




hi pooja ji

main nira hi hoon aor jo bhi post karoongi apna likha hi post karoongi, aapko nazm pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon.
yunhi yahan saath deti rahyega.

nira
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«Reply #10 on: March 19, 2008, 06:08:24 PM »
Quote from: Talat on March 19, 2008, 04:00:56 PM
Pooja, she is Nira Usual Smile

talat ji
thanks pooja ji ko batane ka.
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mistufer
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«Reply #11 on: March 19, 2008, 06:09:29 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on March 19, 2008, 04:29:21 PM
I was not sure !!Good work Nira!!!

thats ok pooja , and thanks for liking my poem

nira
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«Reply #12 on: March 19, 2008, 06:23:22 PM »
Quote from: mistufer on March 19, 2008, 05:14:31 PM
hi pooja ji

main nira hi hoon aor jo bhi post karoongi apna likha hi post karoongi, aapko nazm pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon.
yunhi yahan saath deti rahyega.

nira

Nira

Welcome to the beautiful world of Yoindia !

Aap ka likha padh kar bahut achcha laga ! Applause

Aap ne Pooja ko jo jawab diya hai, uske liye main aap ka tahe dil se shukriya ada karta hoon. That means a lot to all these original writers here on Yoindia. Hats off to you!
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«Reply #13 on: March 19, 2008, 06:38:21 PM »
bahut khooob nira.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 19, 2008, 06:53:44 PM »
Quote from: Rajbir on March 19, 2008, 06:23:22 PM
Quote from: mistufer on March 19, 2008, 05:14:31 PM
hi pooja ji

main nira hi hoon aor jo bhi post karoongi apna likha hi post karoongi, aapko nazm pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon.
yunhi yahan saath deti rahyega.

nira

Nira

Welcome to the beautiful world of Yoindia !

Aap ka likha padh kar bahut achcha laga ! Applause

Aap ne Pooja ko jo jawab diya hai, uske liye main aap ka tahe dil se shukriya ada karta hoon. That means a lot to all these original writers here on Yoindia. Hats off to you!

Rajbir ji
aapka bahut bahut shukriya yahan aakar, muje apni likhi kavitayen aap sab se share karne ka mauka milega. new hoon kahin galat post kar doon toh mafi chahoongi, tohda waqt lagega forum samajhne ko.

apna khayal rakhna.
nira
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