Apni rahmoton ki panaah.....mann

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Apni rahmaton ki panaah kar.
Meri taraf bhi ek nigaah kar

Dard  had  se  gujarne  lage,
Rah gaye bas  ham karaah kar.

Zulm  kyon  hamper  karte ho,
Kya milega duniya tabaah kar.

Hamse kuch bhi kaha na gaya,
Rah  gaye  ham ek  aah  kar.

Jo galat thaw o sahte agar,
Jee to sakte the nibaah kar.

Aag ke  khud  hawaale  kiya,
“Mann” na mana koi gunaah kar.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2015, 12:52:09 PM »
बहुत ही खूब.....

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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2015, 01:11:41 PM »
Bahut khub. dheron daad. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2015, 01:30:37 PM »
bahut sunder
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2015, 07:42:02 PM »
bahut umdah Mann Sahib, dheron daaaaad.
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2015, 03:56:28 AM »
bahut shukriya amitji...
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2015, 04:13:25 AM »
bahut khoob
Iss terah aah na tum bharo
Na hi koi karah hi ab bharo
Duniya bari haseen hai dost
Ek baar humari najar se dekho toh 

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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2015, 06:47:07 AM »
Wah bahut khub Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2015, 10:18:16 AM »
Apni rahmaton ki panaah kar.
Meri taraf bhi ek nigaah kar

Dard  had  se  gujarne  lage,
Rah gaye bas  ham karaah kar.

Zulm  kyon  hamper  karte ho,
Kya milega duniya tabaah kar.

Hamse kuch bhi kaha na gaya,
Rah  gaye  ham ek  aah  kar.

Jo galat thaw o sahte agar,
Jee to sakte the nibaah kar.

Aag ke  khud  hawaale  kiya,
“Mann” na mana koi gunaah kar.

Mann



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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2015, 11:36:29 AM »
bahut shukriya rajiji....
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2015, 11:56:43 AM »
Atee sundar
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2015, 07:07:47 PM »
Apni rahmaton ki panaah kar.
Meri taraf bhi ek nigaah kar

Dard  had  se  gujarne  lage,
Rah gaye bas  ham karaah kar.

Zulm  kyon  hamper  karte ho,
Kya milega duniya tabaah kar.

Hamse kuch bhi kaha na gaya,
Rah  gaye  ham ek  aah  kar.

Jo galat thaw o sahte agar,
Jee to sakte the nibaah kar.

Aag ke  khud  hawaale  kiya,
“Mann” na mana koi gunaah kar.

Mann



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«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2015, 03:51:01 AM »
bahut shukriya sainiji....
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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2015, 03:51:37 AM »
bahut shukriya surindarnji.....
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