Apni Tanhaai mai jab unko paate hai...

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Apni TAnhaai main ab jab unko hum paate hai
Na jaane khud ko aor jayada tanha kar jaate hai

Bechain is zindagi ke safar mai chalte chalte
Kyun insaan ke kadam bhatak jaate hai
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai….

Jhoothi muskaanki  bhi himmat nahi rahi is dil mai
Khule asmaan ke niche koi manjil na rahi is dil main
Kis tarah insaan yeh sab kar jaate hai
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai

Her sawere mai roti tanhaai hai
Her raat mai tadapti dard bhari tanhaai hai
Ashaq bhi ankhon mai na jaane kab khud b khud sukh jaate hai
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai

Kisi bhi mehfil mai mera ab koi kaam nahi
Kisi ke dil mai ab mera koi naam nahi
Dil ki dhadkano se bhi khud ko ajnabi ab to paate hai
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai…

Apni Tanhaai mai jab unko paate hai...
Na jaane khud ko aor jayada tanha kar jaate hai
hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai....
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai…
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 02:44:39 PM »
WAH BAHUT HI KHOOB POOJA JIIII
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2010, 03:07:19 PM »
its awesome pooja ji....
bahot hi dard he,jab koi apna hame tanha kar jata he tab aesa hi lagta he.... love9

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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2010, 03:21:01 PM »
Wah Wah Pooja-di lagta hai jaise koi lava sa fuut pada hai aapke dil se....
itna rosh...kitna aakrosh... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Bahoot khoob di.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jab Jinhe hum bhulana chahte hain
Tab Jab wo he hame yaad aate hain

Dil mai bahut uthal-puthal machate hain
Meri tanhayi mai khub shor machate hain

Jinko dil se nikaal baahar kiya humne
Wahi khayalo mai kyu chhane lagte hain

Apni Tanhaai mai jab hum unko paate hai...
Hum khud ko bhi kuchh keh nahi paate hain









Apni TAnhaai main ab jab unko hum paate hai
Na jaane khud ko aor jayada tanha kar jaate hai

Bechain is zindagi ke safar mai chalte chalte
Kyun insaan ke kadam bhatak jaate hai
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai….

Jhoothi muskaanki  bhi himmat nahi rahi is dil mai
Khule asmaan ke niche koi manjil na rahi is dil main
Kis tarah insaan yeh sab kar jaate hai
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai

Her sawere mai roti tanhaai hai
Her raat mai tadapti dard bhari tanhaai hai
Ashaq bhi ankhon mai na jaane kab khud b khud sukh jaate hai
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai

Kisi bhi mehfil mai mera ab koi kaam nahi
Kisi ke dil mai ab mera koi naam nahi
Dil ki dhadkano se bhi khud ko ajnabi ab to paate hai
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai…

Apni Tanhaai mai jab unko paate hai...
Na jaane khud ko aor jayada tanha kar jaate hai
hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai....
Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai…

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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2010, 04:56:12 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja di.. Itne dard bhare alfaaz... Har line mea dard bakoobi bayaan hua hai..

Bahoot Khoob Koyal .. Good work !
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2010, 06:09:51 PM »

            Kisi bhi mehfil mai mera ab koi kaam nahi
            Kisi ke dil mai ab mera koi naam nahi
            Dil ki dhadkano se bhi khud ko ajnabi ab to paate hai
            Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai…

            Apni Tanhaai mai jab unko paate hai...
            Na jaane khud ko aor jayada tanha kar jaate hai
            hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai....
            Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai…




Bahut Bahut Khooob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapke Inn Do Sher Ke jawaab Mein Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hoon..

Aaj kuch Beete Hue Zammane Se Humko yaad Aane Lage..
Tere Dum par naa Jaane Kitne Log phir muskuraane Lage...

Naa Jaane Inn Sawaalo ke Bheed Mein Kyon Qaid hai Tu!!!
Yeh Mehfil Hi Na Hogi,Agar Hum Tujhe Bhoolane Lage...

Iss mehfil ke Har Panhe Par sunhera Naam Hai Tera!!!!
Bin baat Ke Aakhir Kyon Aap Apna Dil Dukhane Lage???

Gar Koi khata Ho gayi Ho humse To Gunehgaar Hai Hum!!!
Par inn Choti-Choti bataon se Kyon Hum Aapas mein chot Khaane Lage...

Dil mein Kuch baat Ho to Keh Do!! Sab Kubool hai humein!!!!
"khwaish" Kehta Hai,Eh Mere roothe Hue Dost!!!
Dekh Hum Tujhe Phir Manane Lage....

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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2010, 06:43:44 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Poooja Ji.. Dard Ko Lafzon Me Bayan karna Koi aapse seekhe.. ek ek Lafz apni Kahaani Kahata sa lagta hai.. Behad Khubsoorat rachna Peskh Hai aapne.. Applause Applause


Koyal Ji & Khwaish Bhai.. aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha hai doston.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2010, 06:57:47 PM »
Thanks a lot Divya-di aap se taariff pa k hosla aur badhta jaa raha hai di... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja di.. Itne dard bhare alfaaz... Har line mea dard bakoobi bayaan hua hai..

Bahoot Khoob Koyal .. Good work !
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2010, 11:07:27 PM »
Bhut Khoob Pooja Ji.Kafi Dard Bhaia Hai

Khair

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~


Shukaria Shihab ji... magar apki lines ke bina apka jawab adhura lagta hai...
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2010, 11:09:03 PM »
WAH BAHUT HI KHOOB POOJA JIIII

its awesome pooja ji....
bahot hi dard he,jab koi apna hame tanha kar jata he tab aesa hi lagta he.... love9

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bahoot bahoot shukaria Jas ji and thinkhattk ji!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2010, 11:10:15 PM »
Wah Wah Pooja-di lagta hai jaise koi lava sa fuut pada hai aapke dil se....
itna rosh...kitna aakrosh... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Bahoot khoob di.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jab Jinhe hum bhulana chahte hain
Tab Jab wo he hame yaad aate hain

Dil mai bahut uthal-puthal machate hain
Meri tanhayi mai khub shor machate hain

Jinko dil se nikaal baahar kiya humne
Wahi khayalo mai kyu chhane lagte hain

Apni Tanhaai mai jab hum unko paate hai...
Hum khud ko bhi kuchh keh nahi paate hain




Thanks you so much dear!!!  bahoot he achi lines likhi hai.... good work dear
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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2010, 11:14:24 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja di.. Itne dard bhare alfaaz... Har line mea dard bakoobi bayaan hua hai..

Bahoot Khoob Koyal .. Good work !

bahot acha likha hai Pooja ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
n Koyal ji aapne bhi acha likha hai  Applause Applause

Thanks Sophi dear and Kaash ji.. Hats off to you!
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2010, 11:17:37 PM »
            Kisi bhi mehfil mai mera ab koi kaam nahi
            Kisi ke dil mai ab mera koi naam nahi
            Dil ki dhadkano se bhi khud ko ajnabi ab to paate hai
            Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai…

            Apni Tanhaai mai jab unko paate hai...
            Na jaane khud ko aor jayada tanha kar jaate hai
            hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai....
            Ajj hum khud ko bahoot tanha paate hai…




Bahut Bahut Khooob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapke Inn Do Sher Ke jawaab Mein Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hoon..

Aaj kuch Beete Hue Zammane Se Humko yaad Aane Lage..
Tere Dum par naa Jaane Kitne Log phir muskuraane Lage...

Naa Jaane Inn Sawaalo ke Bheed Mein Kyon Qaid hai Tu!!!
Yeh Mehfil Hi Na Hogi,Agar Hum Tujhe Bhoolane Lage...

Iss mehfil ke Har Panhe Par sunhera Naam Hai Tera!!!!
Bin baat Ke Aakhir Kyon Aap Apna Dil Dukhane Lage???

Gar Koi khata Ho gayi Ho humse To Gunehgaar Hai Hum!!!
Par inn Choti-Choti bataon se Kyon Hum Aapas mein chot Khaane Lage...

Dil mein Kuch baat Ho to Keh Do!! Sab Kubool hai humein!!!!
"khwaish" Kehta Hai,Eh Mere roothe Hue Dost!!!
Dekh Hum Tujhe Phir Manane Lage....



App pata nahi meri kavita ka kaya arth le gaye... SMILE PLEASE....

Dosto se hum chupaya nahi karte
is kadar khud ka dil dukhaya nahi karte
hoga jo dil main, app khud b khud jaan jayege
Kavita ke is tarah arth, lagaya nahi karte
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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2010, 11:18:59 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Poooja Ji.. Dard Ko Lafzon Me Bayan karna Koi aapse seekhe.. ek ek Lafz apni Kahaani Kahata sa lagta hai.. Behad Khubsoorat rachna Peskh Hai aapne.. Applause Applause


Koyal Ji & Khwaish Bhai.. aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha hai doston.. Applause Applause



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Bahoot bahoot shukaria Mann ji.. Ab app Khumar-e-Ishaq King hai to apki dost hone ke naate hume bhi kahi to kuch acha hona hoga na,,,,,,
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«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2010, 11:29:36 PM »
Thanks a lot Divya-di....


Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja di.. Itne dard bhare alfaaz... Har line mea dard bakoobi bayaan hua hai..

Bahoot Khoob Koyal .. Good work !
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