Arth.. !! (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on August 23, 2008, 09:44:04 AM
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कहीं खोया खोया सा लगता है,
हर दर्द को चुप चुप सहता है,
पूछो ना क्यों है मुरझाया ये,
बड़ा बोझ सा दिल में रहता है...

जैसे खिल के हो बिखरा फूल कहीं,
ऐसी खुश्बू हवा में बिखरी है,
मैं उस फूल सी बिखरी फिरती हूँ,
वो खुश्बू में उलझा बैठा है...

नज़रें कुछ अनजानी और उखड़ी सी,
बेदिल सा साथ और बेरूख़् सी खुशी,
कहते है अल्फ़ाज़ वोही पहचाने से,
जाने क्यों मतलब बदला रहता है...

हमें जान कर भी अंजाने है,
इक खता मुहब्बत को माने है,
हो कर शूल सा दिल को भेदे दर्द,
जब ख्वाबों का घर कोई ढहता है...

हाँ.. और नहीं बस अब और नहीं,
ये लिख लिख कर अब तो हारे हम,
ना तूफान कहीं ये उमड़ आए,
जो आँखों के कोरों पर रहता है...
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2008, 09:59:18 AM »
EXCELLENT WORK,
TRULY A FABEULOUS
KALAM...
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2008, 10:06:04 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on August 23, 2008, 09:44:04 AM


shbdon mai us phool si bikhri firti hun,
wo khushboo me uljha baitha hai.......bahoot behtreen lines hain...kamal ka likha hai mahiya........kahte hain alfaz wahi pahchane se,
jaane kyun matlab badla rahta hai.....wah wah wah behad khoob surat......... ye bhi bahoot achcha laga...
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2008, 10:29:53 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on August 23, 2008, 09:59:18 AM
EXCELLENT WORK,
TRULY A FABEULOUS
KALAM...
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL

Thanks a lot for your so nice comments.. Shally...
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2008, 10:33:09 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on August 23, 2008, 10:06:04 AM
shbdon mai us phool si bikhri firti hun,
wo khushboo me uljha baitha hai.......bahoot behtreen lines hain...kamal ka likha hai mahiya........kahte hain alfaz wahi pahchane se,
jaane kyun matlab badla rahta hai.....wah wah wah behad khoob surat......... ye bhi bahoot achcha laga...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev ji...

Is mein (Arth..!!) Galtiyaa bhi bahut si hai, lekin picture mein convert karne ke baad sudhaar karne ka mann nahin kiya.. DOH
Baad mein kabhi phir sudhaar karungi..  Usual Smile
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natural
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2008, 10:37:34 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai Mahiya.... Aur title bhi kaafi achha hai.... Usual Smile
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2008, 10:43:16 AM »
Mahiya ji,

main us phool si bikhri phirti hu,woh khushboo mein uljha baitha hein!!----atyant prabhaavshaali pankti-yeh pankti padh kar maza aa gaya.

Prateek
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baadal102
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2008, 10:58:54 AM »
bahut khoob bahut hi aacha  Applause
shikha ji






Baadal
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2008, 01:27:27 PM »
Mahiya aapne buhat khoob likha hai great lines ...  Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2008, 01:57:44 PM »
MAHIYA JEE DIL TO KARTA HAIN MONITOR KO AAKHO SE LAGA LU LEKIN OFFICE WALE SOCHEGE SAJID PAGAL HO GAYA HAIN WAISE SHIKA AAPKA NAM HAIN
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ANKIT RAO
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2008, 02:06:32 PM »
 Clapping Smiley

BAHUT KHOOB MAHIYA JI.
SACHMUCH ADBOOT
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2008, 11:11:01 AM »
BAHUT HI ACCHA LIKHA HAI MAHIYA
AUR KO TASVEER ISTEMAAL KI HAI WOH AAPKI SHAYARI KA ARTH BA-KHOOBI SAMJHATI HAI HAI
IT'S REALLY GREAT !!! icon_flower
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gulzargul
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2008, 11:56:06 AM »
nice dear mahiya

gul
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2008, 05:23:56 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on August 23, 2008, 09:44:04 AM


Ek behtareen peshkash Mahiya...Very good use of words and with continuous flow.... a marvellous creation by you Applause Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: August 25, 2008, 06:20:45 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob MAHIYA
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